Abhiya SS : Beautiful Mistake (completed) *Epilogue on page 26* - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: khadija28

U was saying u will try to update soon ..plz do it soon ..i read ur previous story on Abhiya frozen pain and i love that..now loving ur this story on my fav Abhiya ..thanks for writing such a nice story on them..love u ..and yes, try to update soon if u can manage time and solve ur net problem..
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Yeah I did said but am helpless my internet is not working and my study has also started I have wrote the chapters but am not able to post due to connection problem I'll try to give double chapters
Am really glad that you liked that one and this one too😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8

Raichand were sitting on dinning table having their lunch.

"So Piya finally you know driving huh so when are you taking us out for treat?" Haseena smiled

"Wow treat! I shall get the bigger one for hearing her tantrums" Abhay smirked eyeing Piya

Piya looked at him open mouthed. Haseena and Armaan smiled seeing them.

"Mumma I too want to go out with you and have that one ice cream you and Abhay uncle ate" Arushi said innocently

"No problem Aru we all will go out" Piya smiled looking at Arushi

"It's not needed Piya mom was joking you just take Aru with you" Armaan said

"What bhai? Finally she was giving treat for my hard work and you ruined it all" Abhay teased Piya

"Ok well no problem at least an free from her she eats my head and I didn't meet my friends due to her too... just went yesterday and paid so hard" Abhay whispered the last sentence that only Piya heared

Piya suppressed her giggles hearing him.

As Haseena and Armaan went to do their work Piya stood up and looked at Arushi.

"Come Aru we'll go to have ice cream" Piya smiled

Arushi stood up happily "Ok mumma"

"You are going alone?" Abhay asked with horror

"Yeah" Piya shrugged

"No way" Abhay shouted

"Why?" Piya was taken aback

"You have just learned and going out alone is so dangerous for you" Abhay was worried for her safety

"Abhay I have just learned so that means I can go out alone" Piya smiled sarcastically

"No am coming with you" Abhay said protectively

"No" Piya was open mouthed

"I said am coming I'm not hearing no" Abhay stood up

Piya opened her mouth to argue but Arushi jumped in

"Mumma let Abhay uncle come na it will be fun" Arushi said sweetly

Piya wanted to deny but gave in for Arushi. She looked on helplessly

"Let's go" Piya gritted looking at Abhay

Abhay gave victorious smile.

"Don't know what does he think about himself does he think am kid who can't go alone? I can take care of myself god damn!" Piya murmured seething in anger

"But it is nice too he is coming" Piya thought with smile

Piya was sitting in her room on the chair of her study table. She had a pen in her hand and book was opened in front of her on table but she was lost somewhere else.

"He is so cute and caring" Piya reminisce Abhay

Abhay smiling face flashed in front of her eyes. She remembered all the moments they spend together, Abhay sleeping on sofa, their cute fights, his giving training, ice cream and all the moments they had together. Lost in thoughts her hand trace the small part of book with pen.

"Where are you lost?" Piya heared Armaan

She looked at her book and quickly closed it and looked towards Armaan

"Yeah..Yeah" Piya looked down nervously

Armaan nodded and walked out

Piya opened the book again and saw the heart drawn on the side of page.

"Abhay" she whispers with love lost in thoughts

Abhay sat in his room all smiling remembering Piya.

"Hmm wese sorry to krna chahye tha us din lekin phr us ka wo cute sa chehra dekhne ko kese milta" Abhay smiled

"Bilkul pagl h lekin bhut pretty bhi h" Abhay shook his head reminiscing his moments with her

"Alright Abhay it's too late you should sleep now" Abhay stood up

"But where's water? Ahh I should drink from kitchen only" Abhay decided on finding empty jug

Abhay opened the door and as he stepped forward he saw Armaan going out of his room. He was confused. He looked towards the closed door of Armaan Piya room.

"Where's bro going that too so late?" Abhay decided to follow

Abhay saw Armaan going in the guest room. He was shocked and confused.

"Should I ask Piya? No no it's too late I'll talk to her later" Abhay decided

In the confusion he forgot his thirst and went in his room to sleep.

Next day Abhay wake up early the truth was he couldn't sleep whole night he was worried for his brother and... Piya! He wanted to know if there's something wrong. It's not that he want to disturb their life but it was just he wanted to be sure that everything if fine or it will be.

As everyone talked on the dinning table discussing different things Abhay sat silently unlike every day. Piya noticed that something was troubling him. She decided to have a talk with him and on the other hand Abhay was in dilemma that weather he should ask or not.

"What should I do? Shall I ask Piya or bro? Or should I just let them sort out whatever it is?" Abhay thought "I shouldn't talk with bro he will never say anything but then should I ask Piya? Just let it be Abhay it is their personal problem you shouldn't interfere" Abhay decided finally

Abhay opened his car door when he heared Piya calling him.

"Abhay" Piya called rushing towards him

"What happened Piya why are you running like this?" Abhay asked with concern

"Nothing happen to me but you tell me what's wrong with you?" Piya asked him

"What happen to me?" Abhay was surprised

"I saw it Abhay! I saw how disturbed you was throughout the breakfast" Piya clarified

Abhay looked away. He was speechless, his mind was frozen.

"What's wrong Abhay? What is troubling you?" Piya touched his arm with concern

"No..Nothing there's nothing Piya you are just worrying without reason" Abhay shrugged with nervousness

"Abhay you said me that I don't know how to act you too doesn't know really bad acting you are not even able to face me" Piya folded her arms over her chest

"What are you talking Piya?" Abhay looked at her, he has got control over himself

Piya looked in his eyes trying to find the answers.

"Do you know how to read eyes?" Abhay smiled

"Abhay" Piya said in warning tone trying to know what is he hiding

"You are crazy Piya am going okay" Abhay was going to sit in his car when he stopped hearing Piya

"I thought we are good friends" there was tinge of hurt in her voice

Abhay couldn't stop himself and turned towards her.

"We are friends Piya why are you saying like this" Abhay felt scared to see her sad

"Then what are you hiding from me?" Piya asked

"You are so stubborn Piya there's nothing wrong it's just that..." Abhay sighed and looked at her " I saw bro sleeping in guest room so I was just worried if there's anything wrong between you guys and I was not telling you because I don't want that you feel bad" Abhay said finally

Piya was surprised to hear this. She looked at Abhay.

"Everything is fine na? I don't want that bro face another pain again" Abhay looked at her

"Abhay everything is fine it's his happiness his decision.. our decision we both devoted decided this... neither he nor I wanted this marriage it was forced on both of us its not a marriage but a compromise just a ..act and we are happy with it" Piya explained

Abhay was shocked. He couldn't believe it but he felt happy somewhere to know that they don't share any relationship and his brother is happy too.

Piya's truth was in front of Abhay now it was Abhay's truth to come in open, in front of Piya.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Chapter 9

Piya was sitting on bed. She was deeply thinking. She was sad and disturbed somewhere.

"Abhay cares for his brother so much he considered me as his friend take care of me too but does he feel the same for me as I feel for him? His love for his brother! Why my fate is playing with me like this? I got married when I didn't wanted then now I fall for Abhay who probably doesn't love me and never will" she was disturbed to think all this "Oh God please show me the way please tell me what's my fate"

She stood up and walked out of the room absent mindedly. She saw Haseena coming there with set of clothes.

"Where are you taking them mom?" Piya asked sweetly

"These are Abhay's ironed clothes I'm going to keep it in his room" Haseena informed her

"Oh okay you give me this mom I'll keep it in his room" Piya came forward to help

"Okay..Thank you" Haseena handed the clothes to Piya and walked away

Piya took the clothes and walked inside Abhay room. It was empty. Abhay was no where around. Piya placed the clothes on bed and move to walk out when suddenly a small room inside Abhay's room caught her attention. She got curious and walked towards it. The door was slightly opened.

Piya entered the room. She was shocked and surprised to see what was in it. She stood frozen to the ground.

The walls of the room were covered with her pictures and paintings. There were lot lot of pictures that Piya didn't even remember she ever took.

Piya walked towards the picture. She traced her hands over it. She saw old dates marked on it. She stood there for some minutes thinking until she realized the reason behind Abhay anger. She couldn't believe that it was true. She hated footsteps and turned to see who came.

Abhay entered his room carelessly. He walked towards almirah but stopped seeing the opened of of his private room. He ran towards it to make sure no one has entered. He was shocked to see Piya standing there. He watched her with horror as she keep on looking at him blankly.

"Piya" he whispered in horror

Piya took slow steps towards him looking at his face while he couldn't get the courage to meet his eyes with her.

Abhay knew his truth was out and he was feeling distress. He didn't knew what will happen now but he silently prays that Piya don't hate him after knowing the truth that he has to tell her.

He looked up to see her standing right in front of him.

"Piya..." Abhay started

"There's nothing to hide Abhay! I want to know the truth" Piya cut in

Abhay sighed.

"I was having fun with my friends when I saw you for the first time laughing with Misha... I...I just couldn't take my eyes off you it was..." Abhay looked at Piya and looked down "it was love at first sight I knew I could feel it and from that day I started to follow you until year back when I have to go abroad for the completion of my studies I decided when I'll return..." Abhay sighed

"I will propose you when I will return but when I did I never knew I'll meet you as my brother wife I was broken I was disturbed and I wanted time all my pain came out as anger but then when you cried that night I realized my mistake so I decided to ignore you as you wasn't mine anymore you was never but I don't wanted to hurt you in my own agony it was like fate deceived me badly and I put the blame on you" Abhay felt tears wetting his cheeks

Piya couldn't believe what she heared. She could feel Abhay pain. She cried looking at Abhay. Both look at each other feeling each other's pain. Piya hugged him tightly crying he too hugged her back.

They stood there hugging each other.



Abhay entered his room to find a gift neatly wrapped in a gift paper. He smiled knowing who must have brought it. He took it in his hand and opened it with smile. It was a brand new violin. He heared footsteps and turned to see Piya.

Piya looked at him with smile.

Abhay hold her hand and both sat on bed. Abhay played a beautiful tune which both enjoyed looking in each other eyes. Piya placed her head on his shoulder.

"I love you Abhay" Piya whispered

"I love you too" he whispered with love kissing his forehead

Some days passed like this and no one get to know about Abhay and Piya increasing love when suddenly one day.

Piya brought a tray of snacks and sat with Haseena in hall. Both beautiful ladies were chatting and laughing happily enjoying their snacks.

Abhay came there with Arushi in his arms.

"Hey beautiful ladies here's another pretty lady for you" Abhay said pointing towards Arushi who sat down

Arushi sat proudly on hearing Abhay calling her lady. Haseena, Piya and Abhay laughed seeing her acts.

Arushi was sitting with Piya so Abhay sat with Arushi looking at Piya lovingly who looked back at him with love.

Piya felt nausea. She closed her mouth with palm. Abhay and Haseena exchange confused glances. They were worried for Piya. Piya stood up and ran in wash room. Abhay and Haseena stood up worryingly.

Abhay and Haseena stood impatiently waiting for Piya to come out.

Piya vomited and hold basin for support. She cleaned her mouth and looked at her reflection in mirror. Sudden weakness gripped her. She washed her face trying to calm her down.

As soon Piya came out Abhay rushed towards her followed by Haseena.

"What happened Piya?" Abhay asked worryingly

Piya hold his arms for support.

"Are you fine?" Haseena asked looking at Piya

Piya looked towards Haseena and nodded.

"I think I ate little bit too much nothing else" Piya said in shaken voice

"Abhay you take her in room I think she needs rest" Haseena looked at Abhay

Abhay nodded. He supported Piya and both walked towards Piya room.

Haseena watched them going and then sat in hall.

"You are sure you are fine?" Abhay asked after entering her room

Piya nodded

"Am fine Abhay nothing to worry" Piya assured

"Ok take rest" Abhay caressed her face and walked out

Piya rested on bed and soon drift into sleep.

Abhay entered his room and sat on bed. Piya weak state flashed in front of his eyes. He was restless.

"Why do I feel something is going to happen? Something bad probably! What happened to her so suddenly?" Abhay talked with himself

Good or bad whatever it was no one can stop it. It was mean to be...

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I hope you guys liked it. The story is now close to end the next update will be the last probably.

So what do you guys think will be the end? Together or seperated?

Think

Asshi


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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Loved the New twist
Ab or mat sata abhay or piya ko abhiya kar de
Epi was fab out standing
Abhay loved piya from a year wow but his heart broke even before he could express it very emotional
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing updates loved both parts thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
What an update yr, its awesome, seriously i was jumping on abhays confession , do update jaldi jaldi coz as usual after adding the tadka of piya's health, i have sensed something ;) nd i m getting really really impatient to read further more. Do update dher sare parts as much as u can nd asap. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Nice
Abhay caring so much for piya
not wanting her to drive alone
abhay now knows piya n armaans situation
and piya knows abhays secret love for her
n how he used to follow her in past
piya ill ??
How close did abhay n piya get ?? Could she be pregnant
if yes then armaan will question her since he knows they never n that will make her n abhays relationship revealed
Then again would piya n abhay go that far especially how armaan feels for his bro
It could be she is just ill
n maybe abhay shows his love infront of others caring for her
looking forward to seeing what actually happens
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
nyc update
plz bring abhiya together in next update nd kick out armaan...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

ohk...what happened to piya...


You'll know in next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NamrataPatil

Loved the New twist
Ab or mat sata abhay or piya ko abhiya kar de
Epi was fab out standing
Abhay loved piya from a year wow but his heart broke even before he could express it very emotional


Thanks dear
Hehe think your wish fulfilled 😉 But then not so easily
That was really painful for him

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