Abhiya SS : Beautiful Mistake (completed) *Epilogue on page 26*

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Beautiful Mistake - A story of love that was forbidden

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Prologue

It was not the house of attraction a small medium sized house of a middle class family but the decoration that adorned the house was so attractive that it adds the richness to house. Why would it not look beautiful? After all the only child of the house was getting married.

As the parents happily welcomed the guests far in one room the bride sat crying on her fate. She looked at her reflection in mirror and wiped the tears that were not stopping.

"Calm down Piya... You shouldn't cry like this. Your make up will spoil and mumma will find out you cried just don't cry. Everything will be fine" She talked to her reflection trying to calm down her gloomy heart


"Arnab"

Arnab looked at his wife and saw her nervous.

"What happened Sugand?" He asked

"Do you think we are doing right?" She asked nervously

"What do you mean?" He asked not getting his wife

"Arnab she is kid... I mean" she stopped

"I understand Sugand but that's why am doing all this. I don't know how much time I am left with I just want she get some support when I die" He sighed

"I hope she got the love she deserves" Sugand prayed still not feeling good their was a motherly instinct telling her something is not right



"Piya" she heared her mother voice

Piya quickly closed her eyes composing herself. She stood up nervously.

"Yes mumma" she asked softly

Sugand looked at her and caressed her face lovingly.

"You are looking like princess" Sugand get teary eyes

"Why are you crying mumma?" She asked worryingly

"Oh this is tears of happiness" Sugand wiped her tears

"Come its the time for wedding" Sugand said

Piya nodded with heavy heart. Sugand hold her from arms and took her outside towards mandap. Piya didn't dared to look at her groom who sat in the mandap waiting for her. Everyone looks at the bride as she entered the hall with a grace. Every eyes were on her but her eyes were down as she played with her hands nervously.

Sungad helped her to sit beside the groom in mandap. A woman came near them.

"She is looking beautiful..." she patted Piya head and then looked towards Sugand "I want to talk with you" she gestured towards corner seriously.

Sugand smiled at her nervously and walked in side with her.

Piya sat there confused and nervous. She was going to step in new life but what does her heart want she didn't knew. She is the bride it's the biggest day of her life today but she wasn't ready for it. She agreed for her father and now unlike any normal bride she was not happy or nervous but scared for what is going to happened next it was not going to be easy and the real drama awaits ahead.

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Note - How are you everyone. As you all know my previous story is completed so I am here with new one but I'll like to tell all of you its not my story the whole story and the whole idea tracks and main theme is of ..Seema.. who told me all the tracks and honoured me to write it. So the writing style is mine scene style and other things too but the credit to the concept theme and tracks goes to seema only.

Happy birthday seema I know I told you that I'll post the story once I complete writing some if its chapters beforehand but it is your birthday so at least I can gift you by posting your much awaited story. Happy birthday dear.

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INDEX

Prologue up

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3


Chapter 7
[DIV]

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10 - last

Epilogue

Edited by Asshi... - 8 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankkk u so much dear fr da birthday wishes
Love u loadsss
Wowww i loved da birthday gift
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Happy birthday to Seema & nice prologue
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superb concept
pia getting married but she isn't looking happy 😭
oh god pia's dad dying 🥺
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG piya is getting married but with whom ???
awesome concept
please update fast...
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nyc prologue
this is supernatural story or normal 😕

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After a long time a new interesting concept. Do continue! Happy Birthday Seema :)
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Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Thankkk u so much dear fr da birthday wishes

Love u loadsss
Wowww i loved da birthday gift


Thanks dear
I'm glad you liked it dear 😳
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

superb concept
pia getting married but she isn't looking happy 😭
oh god pia's dad dying 🥺
continue plz


Thanks dear
Am glad you liked the concept

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