Abhiya SS : Beautiful Mistake (completed) *Epilogue on page 26* - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

133

Views

21.3k

Users

22

Likes

252

Frequent Posters

Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ameena671

Amazing updates loved both parts thank you for pm.


Thanks dear
Your welcome
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Huda1996

What an update yr, its awesome, seriously i was jumping on abhays confession , do update jaldi jaldi coz as usual after adding the tadka of piya's health, i have sensed something ;) nd i m getting really really impatient to read further more. Do update dher sare parts as much as u can nd asap. :)


Thank you for your lovely comment dear 😊
And should I say you sensed right? 😉
Next chapter in sometime
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Nice
Abhay caring so much for piya
not wanting her to drive alone
abhay now knows piya n armaans situation
and piya knows abhays secret love for her
n how he used to follow her in past
piya ill ??
How close did abhay n piya get ?? Could she be pregnant
if yes then armaan will question her since he knows they never n that will make her n abhays relationship revealed
Then again would piya n abhay go that far especially how armaan feels for his bro
It could be she is just ill
n maybe abhay shows his love infront of others caring for her
looking forward to seeing what actually happens
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


Thanks dear
You'll know everything in next update dear and your questions are completely right but answers in update
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Supervampire

nyc update

plz bring abhiya together in next update nd kick out armaan...


Thanks dear
Armaan is not problem don't worry
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 10

Piya was feeling dizzy but she manage to walk somehow.

Abhay came out of his room. He was going towards stairs when he was shocked to see Piya stumbling on stairs. He realized from her body language that she may faint any time

Abhay rushed towards her.

"Piya" he screamed

Piya hold her forehead as her visions blur. She missed the steps and felt herself falling until she feel his arms around her waist. She looked at him from her half open eyes.

"Abhay"she whispered weakly

Abhay took her in arms. Haseena and Armaan has also reached by then. Abhay lied Piya on sofa.

"What happened to her?" Armaan and Haseena asked

"I..I don't know I think she faint" Abhay said he was extremely worried for Piya

He filled a glass with juice and make Piya drink in her half consciousness. She too drank it readily from his hand.

Haseena sat beside Piya while Armaan stood beside, Abhay was on his knees beside Piya.

"Piya" Haseena called as Piya opened her eyes slowly

"Am...Am Fine" Piya replied

"What fine huh? Yesterday you vomited and was looking so weak now you fainted and was going to fall from stairs thank God I reached else I can't even imagine what would've happened damn it!" Abhay was worried and scared for Piya " Mom you should take her for check up she badly needs it" Abhay turns towards Haseena

"You are right! We'll go right away" Haseena agreed

Armaan too agreed so Piya had no choice even after when she didn't wanted to she has to go also she didn't wanted to stand against Abhay she wanted to tell him not to worry and if it was the only way she was ready for it.

Piya entered the clinic with Haseena. She looked around watching different pictures pasted on wall. She didn't realize when they entered doctor cabin.

"Doctor she is not feeling well lot of weakness, yesterday she vomit and today fainted" Haseena informed

Doctor nodded and took Piya behind curtain for her check up. Haseena sat waiting impatiently.

Doctor came back with Piya. They sat on their respective seats.

"Is everything fine doctor?" Haseena asked whether

"Congratulations she is pregnant" doctor smile

Haseena was on cloud nine hearing this while Piya sat frozen.

Armaan looked at Piya with wide eyes. He fisted his hands. After Haseena move away, Armaan hold Piya hand who was standing scared already and dragged her in his room. Armaan locked the door.

Abhay heared it all from upstairs. He was shocked himself. He ran behind Armaan seeing his anger but Armaan locked the door so he stood outside helplessly.

"What is this Piya? What have you done? And why? I gave you freedom everything when I said I love someone else and you are free in your life I didn't said that you'll do this type of thing! If you love someone why didn't you told me that day I would've freed you completely but no you have to backstab me. What did you thought I'll give my name to someone else's child? Who is the father of this child?" Armaan shouted

Piya stood silently. She didn't dare to look at him.

"I'm asking you something who is the father of the child?" Armaan gritted holding her from shoulders and shaking her

Piya pushed away his hands from her shoulders with full strength and looked at him.

"You are forgetting am pregnant and you cannot manhandle me like this." Piya looked at him sternly

Piya was in shock till now but now she was back in her senses and she was ready to fight for her baby and protect him.

"Armaan I know I should've told you but when I married you I didn't love anyone I met him after our marriage and I didn't knew when I fall in love with him all of this was sudden I know I commit a mistake but it was a Beautiful Mistake that I don't regret" Piya smiled remembering her moments with him

Armaan shook his head - "I don't want to listen anything you are saying you don't regret anything obviously why would you because everything is on my family, tell me who is the father of your child?"

"I'll never tell you... never ever" Piya replied

Armaan got angry hearing this. It was the matter of his family and his family reputation. He couldn't bear the betrayal. He shouted trying to know the truth but Piya didn't reply she stood silently. Armaan was distressed. On getting no response he moved out of the room.

Abhay was standing outside the room waiting for Armaan to open the door. He saw Armaan rushing out.

"Bhai..." He called

Armaan stopped - "Am not in mood Abhay" he fumed

"Bhai am the father of child" Abhay said

Armaan turned and looked at him shocked. He was frozen by what Abhay said. His steps stumbled and he almost fall down.

"Bhai" Abhay said softly after a moment of silence

Armaan looked at him blankly. Armaan closed his eyes gulping the lump formed in his throat. He tried to compose himself. He stood straight and looked at Abhay. He hold Abhay hand and walked inside the room.

Piya was shocked to see Armaan entering with Abhay. She looked at Abhay for answers.

Armaan locked the door and turned towards the two.

"Abhay why didn't You told me?" Armaan asked with hurt

"I'm sorry bhai but it's the truth we both love each other a lot and...this baby is mine" Abhay looked at him

Armaan became silent. He stood thinking something.

Piya looked at Abhay worryingly. Abhay gave her a assuring nod.

Armaan looked at Abhay.

"Abhay..." Armaan started "promise me...promise me that you will take care of my daughter my Aru promise me" Armaan looked at Abhay

Abhay was confused but nodded "I promise!"

"And...and you will not tell anyone that this baby yours if everyone think am the father let them think but you will not tell anyone about child paternity promise me" Armaan looked at him with hope

Abhay looked at Piya and then at Armaan.

"Ok I promise but bro why are you saying all this? Are...are you going somewhere?" Abhay asked

"Yes!" Armaan said and without any further explanation he rushed out

Abhay and Piya looked at each other.

"Everything will be fine don't worry. You should take rest" Abhay touched Piya shoulder

Piya nodded.

Next day Raichand received a call that informed them about the major accident of Armaan Raichand and his critical condition. Raichand rushed for hospital but it was too late Armaan died.

It was the saddest moment in Raichand's life that shook them a lot.

Haseena was sitting in hall when she saw Abhay coming with Piya. Abhay was holding Piya from shoulders for support as they walked downstairs.

Abhay helped Piya as she sat on chair. Abhay sat beside him on chair and feed her food.

Haseena sat thinking looking at two.

Arushi came towards Abhay and Piya.

"Daddy you are taking care of mumma?" Arushi asked innocently

Abhay smiled hearing her.

"Daddy am missing papa a lot he never went far for so many days it has been month now" Arushi eyes filled up with tears

Abhay's smile vanished, he looked at Piya who looked down.

"He...he will come soon till then you and your mumma is my responsibility! Come I'll feed you too" Abhay voice was heavy, he took her in lap and wipes his tears without anyone notice

Haseena watched this with heavy heart. She felt her eyes filling up with tears. After Armaan died everything died in Raichand mansion, the talks, the echoing laughters and teasing died somewhere. Armaan death was a shock that freezes their life.

Months later

Piya smiled with love shining in her eyes as she looked at her new born daughter. Tears of happiness filled in her eyes as she touched her baby face. She looked at Abhay who too looked at her with love and smile. He nodded as she parted her lips to say something like he read her unspoken words.

Haseena watched Abhay and Piya with baby from outside the ward through small window.

"Abhay" Haseena called as Abhay came out of the ward

"Yes mom" Abhay looked at her

"Abhay I...I wanted to talk with you" Haseena hesitated

Abhay nodded gesturing her to go on.

"Abhay I want that you marry...Piya" Haseena said after a moment of hesitation

Before Abhay could say anything Haseena explained hastily.

"Look Abhay she is too young to spend her life as widow you should also get married now it's your age so it will be better if you both get married or else it will be complicated if Piya marry someone else Arushi and now this new baby girl they both need a father and you will be the best father for them. "

Abhay looked at Haseena. This is what he wanted. Marriage with Piya. But Armaan death has just disturbed them a lot and somewhere he was not ready for this after what happened he needed time.

"Please Abhay please agree they are your responsibility right? For them please! if you'll agree then I'll talk with Piya too" Haseena said

Abhay thought for sometime.

"Okay! I'll talk with Piya myself and will let you know" Abhay said

Haseena was glad. Things were setting again.

Abhay enter the ward and looked at Piya. He sat beside Piya.

"Mom want that we both marry each other." Abhay looked at her to see her reaction

Piya watched him with shock.

"I think it's time we get out of this, our baby needs us" Abhay added after getting no reply from Piya

"But Abhay... Armaan! We lost him due to our love" Piya cried

Abhay closed his eyes as tears fall from his eyes.

"He gave away his life for us" Piya cried

"No! My brother was not weak to suicide it...it was just an accident" Abhay said trying to control his pain

It was the first time after Armaan death they were discussing about his death or something. After Armaan death they felt really guilty and couldn't come out of the trauma so they wouldn't talk much or discuss something.

"We have to move on I knew my brother cannot suicide it was just fate but even if he did then it was for us so it's our responsibility not to waste his sacrifice and give our both kids the love they deserve" Abhay said

Piya nodded with tears.

Abhay wiped her tears.

"I think it's biggest risk to marry you... see you trouble me alot I don't want my head to eat ice cream and that I have a dinner full of spices" Abhay teases

Piya chuckled through tears Abhay too laughed after months of sadness

"I love you" Piya confessed

"I love you too" Abhay kissed her hand

They looked into each other eyes with love. Abhay took his daughter in his arms and looked at Piya. They hugged the baby together.

*****The END*****

__________________________________

I hope you guys enjoyed the story so finally now am free.

I have three to four new stories that am writing too but I will post them once they are completed so till then am taking break from stories.

Yeah I will post the epilogue for this story it might be short but a treat maybe I will post it in sometime or some days later.

Bye,
Asshi

Edited by Asshi... - 8 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


bestpasstime thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
its superb 👏 fantastic ⭐️ from starting till end
update epilogue n next stories soon
n thanks for such awesome stories of yours 😊😳
ameena671 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update and ending loved it thank you for pm.
Huda1996 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
All I want to say only tht was really beautiful mistake , give epilogue too. ;):) nd nxt tym plzz write ff instead of ss,we want more;)
cuteariya thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
OMG abhay knew pia before & fall in love with her at first sight 😲
that's why he took out his anger on pia knowing she married to his brother
abhiya bonding got more strong with passing time
they even confess their love for each other ❤️
OMG pia got pregnant with abhay's child 😲
arman got really angry on pia
but abhay told him he is the father it was shocked for arman 😲
OMG aramn died in accident 💔
it made abhiya guilty 😭
this time abhay's mom took right decision 👍🏼
poor arushi was missing her papa 😭
wow pia deliver baby girl 🥳
finally abhiya got ready to move on 🤗
ending was little emotional as arman died but its life has to move on 😊
Heatsha8176 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
I know story ending but is armaan really dead or did he just fake it
I was wondering if he just faked it so piya n abhay could marry without any questions
he really loved his bro enough to think to go away from his daughter thats why im hoping he left n will come back once all settled
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Related Topics

Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani thumbnail

Posted by: Fearless_Lover · 6 months ago

Jab tak Hriti wapis aa kar new AT Thread nhi banate tab tak yahi chat karo

Expand ▼
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani thumbnail

Posted by: White-Lilac · 1 years ago

Welcome to Enigmatic AbhIya AT #344 Welcome to Enigmatic AbhIya AT, heaven/home for AbhIya lovers..come relive the memories, share, shower your...

Expand ▼
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani thumbnail

Posted by: simply.meghana · 1 years ago

Hello folks! My writer's block is gone for now so writing an SS with the following writing prompt You are a vampire hunter. Your roommate is a...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".