Abhiya SS : Beautiful Mistake (completed) *Epilogue on page 26* - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy ending
feeling vry bad for armaan...but happy that abhiya are together now
will u start a new story plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohk.. So pia is abhay's love whom abhay liked but never got a chance to proposed.. He thought after he come back he will do.. Abhay, dude this is the disadvantage of being in silent mode.. Superb twist.. Loved the ending.. All 3 updates are awesome..thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bestpasstime

its superb 👏fantastic ⭐️from starting till end

update epilogue n next stories soon
n thanks for such awesome stories of yours😊😳


Thanks dear am glad you liked it
I'll update episode in some min hopefully and next story not so soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Huda1996

All I want to say only tht was really beautiful mistake , give epilogue too. ;):) nd nxt tym plzz write ff instead of ss,we want more;)


Thanks dear 😛
Hehe I'm working on ff too but it will take time
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome update
OMG abhay knew pia before & fall in love with her at first sight 😲
that's why he took out his anger on pia knowing she married to his brother
abhiya bonding got more strong with passing time
they even confess their love for each other ❤️
OMG pia got pregnant with abhay's child 😲
arman got really angry on pia
but abhay told him he is the father it was shocked for arman 😲
OMG aramn died in accident 💔
it made abhiya guilty 😭
this time abhay's mom took right decision 👍🏼
poor arushi was missing her papa 😭
wow pia deliver baby girl 🥳
finally abhiya got ready to move on 🤗
ending was little emotional as arman died but its life has to move on 😊


Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Awesome update
I know story ending but is armaan really dead or did he just fake it
I was wondering if he just faked it so piya n abhay could marry without any questions
he really loved his bro enough to think to go away from his daughter thats why im hoping he left n will come back once all settled
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


Thanks dear am glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Awesome update
I know story ending but is armaan really dead or did he just fake it
I was wondering if he just faked it so piya n abhay could marry without any questions
he really loved his bro enough to think to go away from his daughter thats why im hoping he left n will come back once all settled
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


Thanks dear am glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Supervampire

Happy ending

feeling vry bad for armaan...but happy that abhiya are together now
will u start a new story plz.


Thanks dear
I will start a new story but not so soon am trying to complete them once they will be completed I will give regular updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Epilogue

4 years later

Abhay looked from left to right with worry.

"Papa loves me" Arushi said

"No no he loves me" Riya shook her head

"No he loves me because I came first you came later" Arushi stick her tongue out teasing Riya

"Papa loves both of you" Abhay said hugging the two

"No papa you have to tell us you love me more or her" Arushi said standing up

"Both" Abhay replied gulping

"Choose one" Arushi pointed finger warning him

"Both" Abhay gave same reply

"Papa" Arushi stomped her foot in anger

"I love you both baby you both are my life how can I choose one" Abhay said helplessly

"You have to" Riya said this time stubbornly

Piya came there. She smiled seeing the three most important people in her life. She guessed the situation seeing Abhay helpless face and Arushi Riya determined yet angry faces. It was everyday routine.

Abhay saw Piya entering he smiled widely. Only Piya helps him in these moments when he is stuck between his two daughters

"Papa loves your mumma" Abhay rushed and stood by Piya

"Mumma!" Arushi and Riya said in complained tone, they knew it was the only way their father escaped from them but they didn't wanted this

Piya smiled.

"You both have grown up and still you are fighting like kids, on papa loves whom, this is from years" Piya smiled shaking her head

"That's because papa never answers us" Arushi made face

"I love you both" Abhay looked at them helplessly

"We don't trust you" Riya and Arushi said

"Oh really? You both are fighting for me against each other but fighting with me together why?" Abhay said smirking

"Because we love you" they replied cutely

"And me too" Abhay grinned

Riya and Arushi made face hearing this.

"Choose one see we chose you" they said

"Haaa then you both don't love me?" Piya asked faking sadness

"Poor acting" Riya rolled her eyes

Abhay and Piya chuckled hearing this.

"You are just like me my cute daughter I love you baby" Abhay said taking Riya in his arms and sitting on bed

Abhay looked at Piya and smiled. Piya too smiled remembering Abhay exactly same words.

Piya looked at Arushi and saw her sad. She pointed Abhay.

Arushi got that Abhay chooses Riya though there was nothing like that and Abhay just said that because he was remembering his and Piya moments.

"Damn" Abhay felt helpless realizing Arushi felt bad

Piya thought to help Abhay and end the regular war of father daughters. She sat beside Arushi.

"And I love my Arushi" Piya stick out her tongue teasing Riya and Abhay

Arushi face lit up but she still looked at Abhay.

"Ok Riya now you go down for breakfast am coming okay?" Abhay said

Riya nodded and ran away happily. Abhay looked at Arushi and stood up.

"And I love my Arushi a lot" Abhay hugged Arushi

"But you said you love Riya" Arushi made face

"That was just like that, I love her too but I love you more after all you are my first daughter" Abhay smiled

"Really?" Arushi asked happily

"Yeah papa loves you Aru but you are being kid you have grown up right? You should take care of your sister not fight with her" Piya advised her

"So what? She looks cute when we fight" Arushi giggled

Piya and Abhay chuckled and pulled her cheeks lovingly.

"Come it's breakfast time you both start fighting so early in the morning" Piya said standing up

"Whatever" Arushi said with Abhay and both hifived while Piya shook her head with smile

Arushi ran away. Abhay and Piya looked at each other.

"They are angel of our life" Piya smiled

"Just like you" Abhay hugged her

"I love you" Piya snuggled

"I love you too" Abhay kissed her forehead

"But Arushi and Riya troubles me a lot how can I choose one" Abhay said breaking the hug

"That's fun actually" Piya giggled

"Really tumhe bara maza ata h" Abhay pulled Piya from her waist

"Yeah it's so fun to see you helpless very rare sight" Piya giggled

"I wonder why they don't ask you to choose" Abhay shrugged

"That's because I ask them to trouble you like this" Piya burst into laughter

"What?" Abhay looked on with surprise

"They ask me to choose and I turned them towards you I have my ways" Piya winked

"I can't believe you" Abhay shook his head

"Chlo ab" Piya hold his shoulders

Abhay and Piya walked downstairs laughing and talking with each other.

Haseena smiled seeing them from hall.

"Haseena wasn't she Armaan wife?" A woman sitting with Haseena asked

Haseena nodded.

"Then how come she with Abhay? How did you even give the consent?" Woman said with shock

"Because that's what Armaan wanted probably! He wanted that Abhay take care of Piya and his daughters so I just fulfilled his wish" Haseena said

Haseena remembered how before dying Armaan had given Piya and Arushi hands in Abhay though he couldn't say anything or she didn't hear but she understood what he wanted.

"And I think it was a best decision, they brought the lost happiness of this house." Haseena smiled

"Ok I should leave now" Woman nodded and walked away bidding adieu to Haseena

Haseena walked towards dinning table and looked at the four laughing and having fun. Haseena joined them too.

"What's happening huh" Haseena smiled

"Mumma burned her tongue with hot food" Arushi giggled with Riya

"Now mumma's tongue will become black" Riya said innocently

They all looked towards Riya amused and burst in laughter.

The Raichand mansion echoed with laughter. It was forbidden love but Armaan act as just a cupid to unite Abhay and Piya maybe unknowingly but he was the reason they were together now.

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I hope you guys will like the epilogue.

Love,
Asshi

Edited by Asshi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing story loved it so much but ended to early still it's OK thank you so much for giving us such an out of the box story never thought about this until you wrote it
Thank you
God bless you

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