Abhiya SS : Frozen Pain - Story of Eternal Love *completed* page 34 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Asshi...


Thanks
First chapter will be up in sometime 😊

Asshi first chapter is awesome too much enjoyable
n i want abhay to free as soon as possible

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
First of all walaikum salam aashi
Awesome .
Piya was feeling lonely in da absence of abhay..glad DAT she gave an apt dose to both t n kabir,an eye opener
So piya nw knw DAT abhay turned her on prom night
Looking forward to next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Huda1996

Nice update really, missing abhiya alott, do update next part nd surely a big part sooon


Thanks dear
Am too missing them wish there would've been second season
A big part don't know but will try to upload two parts today
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: MistiAbhiya

Nice update ...lovely thought if pia memory's not erase thn what she do...really interesting...like it😊


Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: preetiasya

Nicely written cont soon


Thanks preeti 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: preetiasya

Nicely written cont soon Wat happen to piya s memory


Nothing happened to her memory
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: uroos

Nice update thanks for update


Thanks dear
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

First of all walaikum salam aashi

Awesome .
Piya was feeling lonely in da absence of abhay..glad DAT she gave an apt dose to both t n kabir,an eye opener
So piya nw knw DAT abhay turned her on prom night
Looking forward to next update


😛 thank u seema
They deserved that T for her bimboness n kabir for always poking his nose between abhiya
Atleast she deserved to know that how n what happened
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: bestpasstime


Asshi first chapter is awesome too much enjoyable
n i want abhay to free as soon as possible



So happy to know you liked it
Yeah I know that but it will take some time you know just can't free him so soon in 3 to 4 updates he will be freed that part is completed though
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3 - Peace, sign of storm

Misha was sitting in canteen. She was worried for Kabir and Piya. She was not able to understand what's happening. Just then Ruhi came and sat beside her.

"What are you thinking? " Ruhi asked in her super sweet tone

"Nothing just Piya..." Misha looked away

"Piya!" Ruhi exclaimed "what happened to her? Everything is alright na? Ohhh did Siddharth do something with her? Or she and Abhay breakup? " Ruhi asked irritating Misha more

"Are you crazy tracker? What rubbish you are talking? And don't even take that Siddharth name" Misha chided her

"Wohy to bola jo ho skta hai" Ruhi made face

"Kya ho skta hai and what tracker? " Misha looked away annoyed

"Yesterday night when we were racing I saw Siddharth and Piya going in car and later Abhay came asking for Piya he was very worried when I told him about her, he just left in rush. Now you tell me Siddharth took Piya in some burnt place why? And Abhay may get angry on Piya for going with Siddharth so late" Ruhi didn't knew what she has said but it was a huge thing for Misha

Misha was startled, she remembered Abhay calling them when they were with Maithli.

"Oh my God!" Misha exclaimed as she realized that Piyas breakdown and Abhays disappearance are linked

Piya sat crying on bench.

"Abhay they all are so mean! They talk rubbish about you" Piya cried " I so want to meet you"

She wiped her tears, gathers her stuff and started to walk towards forest. She walked deep in the forest.

"Abhay must be here somewhere" Piya whispered to herself

She looked around and saw the rock. She remembered Abhay resting his head on it. She ran beside it. She moved the leaves quickly. She stopped as she saw the ice. He's here! She quickly moved all the leaves from ice. She saw Abhay buried in ice. She has mixed feelings, glad to see him but sad to find him in this state.

She ran her finger on his face over the ice. A tear escape from her eyes with a small smile

"Abhay" she whisper with lot of love


She remembered what Abhay told her regarding Siddharth

"tum pachtaogy"

"To phir wo mery problem hai"


She cried for being rude to him for someone else who was just using her. Today she was truly regretting like Abhay had told her that day.

"Am so sorry Abhay I took you so wrong, I believe everything what he said but didn't believe you neither tried to find myself! I tried to find someone else help against you when I didn't even need anyone else help! Tmhra har sach to mjhe pata tha, I knew whatever you do it's for me but don't know when I become so blind to understand you... I am sorry am sorry" She cried, her tears falling on the ice

She quickly wipe her tears - "I promise you Abhay I'll try to find how to bring you out of this ice I try to search but there's nothing about it. Uncle and aunty, they too left the city and I have also become normal no vampire effect but don't worry Abhay I'll do my best"

Misha looked at Kabir sitting alone. She walked towards him and sat beside him.

"Kabir!" Misha called him

Kabir looked at her and then look away.

"Please Mish..." Kabirs voice was filled with pain

"Kabir don't do this yar" Misha said tired

"Then what should I do Mish? " Kabir looked at her

"Look Kabir you have to understand I told you before too she doesn't love you and...and she don't want that someone interfere in her life like you don't want to hear anything against her she too don't want to hear anything against Abhay" Misha tried to make him understand

Kabir remained silent

"Kabir.." Misha touched his shoulder "Don't take it on heart she is just restless on something we don't know and yesterday night... it was too much to take... she needs time"

Kabir looked at Misha - "Yesterday night! What happened yesterday? Mish am asking you for last time what happened yesterday?"

Misha looked at Kabir thinking what to do - "Kabir it's difficult to believe but that Siddharth... he tried to kill Piya" Misha hided tha main truth

"What? What are you are you saying Mish? " Kabir was shocked

"Am saying the truth! Thank God we reach there on time and from then she is really disturbed" Misha said

"Oh God! Itna sab kuch hogya aur tum mjhe ab bta rhy ho" Kabir was shock

"But Kabir don't talk about this to anyone okay?" Misha looked at him with hope

"What? But why? " Kabir was confuse

"Just promise me that you will not tell anyone" Misha looked at him unsure

Kabir looked at her confuse why is she asking this nevertheless he nodded.

"Ye to ho gya! Am sorry Kabir I cannot tell you the truth. It is something no one should know.. its too dangerous! And that Abhay I need to know about him.. Piya has to tell me whether she like it or not" Misha thought, she was determined to know

Piya wanted to spend sometime there so decided to rest beside Abhay. She felt someone hand around her she look up to see him smiling at her.

"Abhay" she whispers with love

She hugged him finding the peace in his arms. She knew in her heart that it was just her illusion but she wanted to live in this illusion atleast for sometime. Her heart is restless from yesterday night from she lost him in ice but this illusion give her heart the peace, even being away from Abhay it is giving her a strong feeling that he is there for her and will always be that one day she will find the way and Abhay will be with her. He has not left her, he is with her its just that he is sleeping.


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