Abhiya SS : Frozen Pain - Story of Eternal Love *completed* page 34

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey everyone!
Am very new on PKYEK forum. After wandering on IF gor almost more than year I finally decided to lunch on my favourite show forum. PKYEK was my madness at that time and always has same the effect even now. Watching some old episodes I decided to write a story on my favorite couple.
Truly speaking am really nervous to write on Abhiya.the reason is PKYEK was awesome it was a perfect show with a fantastic charm and it scares me to bring changes in it actually. I don't know whether I can bring that same charm in my story or not but I really wanted to write this story as I wanted the show to go in this way. I hope you guys will like it!
I think I talk a lot what to do I can't stop myself when it came about PKYEK. Alright enough of my blabbering now below is the prologue telling the theme and everything.


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Prologue

The snow was falling. Cold snow! Just like the cold person did something so cold that it was going to freeze two lives.

He cupped her face. The pain was evident on his face. A physical pain caused by someone who was once special and a mental pain that was on the feeling to be separated from someone who is too special for him.

"Piya" The words escape from his mouth in a whisper with immense pain

The tear dropped from her eyes. It was too painful for her. She can feel the pain he was going through and it was too painful for her too. She was going to lose him and he is demanding something she don't want to give.

"No Abhay these memories.. these memories are mine.. just mine... precious memories! You cannot snatch them from me you can't" She tried to explain

"Piya you have to understand! Mai is barf mai.. smane wala hoon..hmesha hmesha k liye" he looked at her "forever! How will you live with my memories? You have a whole life to live.. how will you live that life with my memories? Yadon k sahare zindagi guzarna bhut mushkil hota h bhut.. sadiyon main in yadoon ki aag mai jala hoon I can't let the same happen to you. You have to forget me only then you will be able to live your life" there was pain immense pain in his words

She shook her head in denial - "no Abhay please no" She pleaded

"Why don't you understand Piya? You have to forget me for me.. for yourself for your family! Think about them Piya, you will never move on with my memories and they.. they will die every moment seeing you struggling with my memories think about them" He looked at her for her acceptance

She closed her eyes in pain in helplessness. Her mind flooded with thoughts. He has always face everything alone how can she let him be alone again? All this happened due to her if only she would've understand what he was trying to tell her if only she would've trusted him then this would've not happened! He did everything for her then how can she let him face the punishment for her mistake alone? How can she? No she will not let this happen! He always dod what he wanted for her but not today, todau she will stand for him. If he is determined then she is also stubborn.

She opened her eyes and looked at him - "no! No abhay not this time! You have burnt in the fire ignited by Her for years for centuries but not today, now I am with you and I will not let you freeze in this ice frozen by Her for forever. Even if you will be freezed I will try my best to melt this ice if I can give life to your dead heart then I can melt this ice too."

He felt helpless. Why is she not understanding? He tried to say something

"You have to trust me Abhay! Also even if you erase my memory what about my heart Abhay? What about it Abhay? How will you erase the limitless love from my heart Abhay? Tell me. This heart will always beat for you! Even after forgetting you even after being with someone else this heart will be with you it will die in confusion about you and pain for you" Her words were so strong that it breaks him more

"Just trust me Abhay our love has fought with fate.. we are meant for each other! Don't worry Abhay, one day this ice will melt and then we will be together forever and ever"

She was stubborn, He couldn't win from her. He hugged her overwhelmed by emotions. They were in pain, pain of separation.

"Piya, promise me that you will take care of yourself, promise that you will try to live your life atleast, promise me you will not cry and will smile forever"

She looked at him from his arms - "I..I will"

They wanted to live this moment forever. A moment in each other arms before separating... they soo wanted that the time freeze here and they remain like this but it was not possible...

He broke the hug and walked a step backward. She extended her hand, the pain in her heart increased. Tears drop from her eyes. The cold wind blow. It was harsh. Like the nature was also in pain.

She stood watching him with tears in her eyes as he fall beside a rock and close his eyes slowly. She too closes her eyes feeling his pain. The lovely moments they live flashed in their minds like a beautiful movie.

She opened her eyes and looked at him. He has small smile on his face. He wave his hand before he closed his eyes for ever. She fall on her knees as the cries escape from her mouth.

He is frozen. Frozen by his love. Maithli. Maybe it was his punishment, punishment to love her, punishment to burn in her memories for centuries, punishment to hurt Piya for her. Piya! His love, his true love! He was so right Piya was never Maithli.. she can be never like Maithli. She is way too better than her. Maithli is a monster and she.. she is a delicate flower who gives fragrance even to the hand that crushes her. May be that's why she is with him even after knowing that he can hurt her but she is too good to think about herself.
Maybe he and Maithli never love each other that's why she never came back to him in these two centuries. That's why he fall in love with Piya even after being monster. Maybe they never love each other. Maybe, that's why in this harsh snow just Piya and Abhay were freezed, one in snow and other... in pain... MAYBE!

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INDEX

PROLOGUE

Chapter 1 - Day without him on page 2

Chapter 2 - Fiasco of College on page 4

Chapter 3 - Peace, sign of storm on page 6

Chapter 4 - Questions of Pain on page 6

Chapter 5 - Changes or Not on page 8

Chapter 6 - Return for True love on page 12

Chapter 7 - Together again on page 14

Chapter 8 - Sisters thing on page 17

Chapter 9 - Fun with you on page 17


Chapter 10 - Lingering Danger on page 20

Chapter 11 - Date & Danger on page 23

Chapter 12 - His Fight on page 27

Chapter 13 - Feelings that complete us on page 31

Epilogue on page 34

Edited by Asshi... - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superbbb
Loved loved da prologue
Welcome to da forum dear
Nw coming again to da update
Just today me n my friend were discussing this scene of abhay taking away piya memories.
A heart touching scene n brilliantly portrayed by Vivian n sukirti n u gave it ur own touch wowww great attempt
One was frozen in snow n da other in pain..suoerbb
Looking forward to first chap
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Nice thought...continue😊
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Amazing prologue . Looking forward to read more
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wow nice prologue loved it can't wait for the updates thank you for pm.
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such an Enjoyable update
update soon waiting for first chapter
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Interesting story  waiting for first chapter PM me when you update next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Superbbb

Loved loved da prologue
Welcome to da forum dear
Nw coming again to da update
Just today me n my friend were discussing this scene of abhay taking away piya memories.
A heart touching scene n brilliantly portrayed by Vivian n sukirti n u gave it ur own touch wowww great attempt
One was frozen in snow n da other in pain..suoerbb
Looking forward to first chap


Thanks dear
Am glad you liked it
Thank you 😛
The scene was superb mostly I liked abhay's character so much in every scene
I will update in sometime have already wrote 6 -7 chapters beforehand 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: MistiAbhiya

Nice thought...continue😊


Thanks dear
Am happy you liked it 😛
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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

Amazing prologue . Looking forward to read more


Thank you for your support dear 😛