Abhiya SS : Frozen Pain - Story of Eternal Love *completed* page 34 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Supervampire

Superb prologue...pia memory is not erase by abhay

different from show...continue


Thanks dear
Am so happy to know u liked it 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

pia is in sooo much pain...may be she will find a way for her love


Thank you 😊
She will find a way but for now Pia will be shown as defending Abhay 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huda1996

recently happening to read this ff, mind blowing concept, love to read further , do update soon , with so many parts as much as u can , ''


Thanks dear
Am so glad that you liked it 😛
I have 1 2 days with internet I will try to update as many parts as I can and after that you guys have to wait for updates for some days
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Fantastic update

Piyas agony was described v well
Heart touching indeed
All were worried fr piya but piya is lost in her own thoughts as u said her heart is buried there in da forest
She went to seek help from chand n haseena but there she cane to know DAT they had left da mansion
Looking forward to next update


Thanks dear
I am glad you liked that
They are gone but Piya will find a way 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

This is the first time I am reading some thing on abhi ya

Loved it
Tnx for pm


That's so nice to know 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huda1996

We want updateWe want update...


Alright alright I will give a update in sometime 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Salam everyone,
Am so glad to see all of you guys reviews
I will try to give updates in this one day actually got some issues with internet but don't worry as soon I'll get some connection I'll give updates.

Chapter 2 - Fiasco of College

Piya looked at the college with pain.

"Alone!" She whispered with pain

She closed her eyes gulping the pain she entered in college. She looked around. Every corner reminds her of him. She looked beside a pillar where they spends time, fights too.

"I am sorry" she whispered in pain

"Piya" she heared Misha voice

She composed herself and turned to look at Misha.

"Where were you Piya? You left home so early and reaching college so late? " Misha ask

"I wanted some fresh air , haceca walk and then came here" Piya said looking away

"Are you sure? " Misha absorbed her keenly

"What do you mean by sure Misha?" Her voice has irritation and it shocked Misha

"Because your face and tone is telling something else" Misha was hurt but more than that she was concern

Piya closed her eyes - "look Misha I... I need some time am sorry" Piya walked away saying so

Misha looked at her going. She sighed.

"Maybe Piya wants some time to get over what happened yesterday night" Misha thought

Misha was wrong Piya wants time but not to get over from last night but time to find the truth, time to free... Abhay!

T was talking with her bimbo friends when she saw Piya standing alone. She remembers last night. She excuses herself from her gang and walked to her.

"Piya.." T called

Piya looked at her - "please T am not in mood" Piya was irritated of everyone coming and saying something she wanted to be left alone because the one who can make her feel better is not here

"Piya I came to thank you" T said in low voice looking around so that no one see or hear her after all she has a dumb reputation

Piya looked at her confuse and irritated

"For saving my life! Am really grateful for that. Thanks a lot" Piya nodded and she walked away

"Jisse bachana tha usse to bacha nhy skky" Piya whispered with tears


Kabir came and stood by Misha

"Mish what happened to Piya? Why is she so lost? " Kabir pointed towards Piya

Misha looked towards Piya. Her smile changed into sadness

"Something so horrible that is out of understanding" Misha was in trance remembering the horrible night

"Hey Mish what happened that even you are talking so mysteriously don't scare me huh" Kabir felt something is wrong

Misha looked at him passed a smile and start to walk away.

"Hey Mish where are you going atleast tell me something" Kabir ran behind her

Piya looked at the computer screen shocked.

"Is that why Siddharth tried to attack me yesterday? And why is there nothing about how to break the ice? Oh God so many questions and no answer" Piya hold her head in frustration

"Wish I would've still that bite effect maybe it would've helped me! But when did Abhay bite me? " She tried to remember

"he was protecting me from Siddharth then it must be after Siddharth enter our life after I start to feel strange" Piya wanted to know so she tried to remember a incident that is fishy

"Prom night!" Piya exclaimed "Exactly prom night! When Siddharth took me to the forest. Abhay came there and there were silver chains.. silver chains! To prevent Abhay from saving me but he bear the pain and save me from Siddharth for that he bite me and.. and he was the one to make me forget incident that's why I couldn't remember how I reach Raizada mansion! Oh God! Everything was in front of me but I.. I was blindly trusting Siddharth"

"Wish I would've trusted Abhay instead of Siddharth maybe all this wouldn't have happened if I was with Abhay instead of Siddharth" The realization brought tears in her eyes

She stood up and glanced at screen - "wish I would've tried to find the truth in you and my memory instead of going to Siddharth then...then Abhay would've been with me" She whispered and walked out of library

She was not even out of the trauma of losing Abhay and new found truth when she heared T.

"Where's Abhay? He should've been with me after knowing I was about to die" T said in her usual bimbo tone

"T don't you know Raichands have left the city" Her friend made face

"Oh please even if he left he should return for me after knowing about yesterday. He returned for that Piya after her accident, can't he return for me? " T was back in her attitude

Piya had tears in her eyes remembering how he came just for her against his family but instead of being grateful to him she just tried to know his truth and hurt him. He always tries to save him but instead of thanking she always hurt him back. Piya came out of her thoughts on hearing T.

"Oh yes how can I forget he and Piya are mostly in secret relationships! He always cheats me for that charity case I don't know what he saw in her, she doesn't even have some fashion sense. I don't know what magic she has done on my Abhay, she always run behind my boyfriends. He also always ran behind her, saving her but she don't really need it. She doesn't even care for him. She is just using him. He should've been with me but no everyone wants her" T stomped her foot angrily

"Oh T be careful what you say huh. First of all Piya is not some charity case and secondly the person you are talking about that your Abhay Raichand it's him who run behind Piya and exploit her in his cheesy talks." Misha saw Piya standing with tears she tried to tell this to Kabir who was non stop talking against Abhay


"Let me talk to her Mish" Kabir looked at Misha and then turn towards T

"Your so called Abhay has the habit to hurt Piya. He doesn't save her but hurt her. Am sure is bar bhi wo Piya ko zaleel karne k liye hi ye sab kuch kar rha h. Control your boyfriend he is such a..." Kabir stop as Piya shouted

"Stop! Stop it you two!" She came and stood between Kabir and T.

"You are so disgusting! Why are you guys behind Abhay? T you say he is your boyfriend right? But still you talk ill about him why? Because you love him? No, the truth is he is just a way to gain popularity for you and I don't think love is using someone for popularity!" T looked away embarrassed

Piya looked at Kabir - "and you...you say you love me but at the same time you don't like to see me with someone else! Wow what a love! You don't care about my happiness you just want me! You know what Kabir there's no difference between you and m..." Piya stops herself from taking her name but she didn't have enough she has lot to say

"Piya it's nothing like that" Kabir tried to explain

"Then how's it Kabir? Tell me what enmity you have with Abhay? Tell me Kabir!" Kabir looked away trying to find words "that's the truth! You don't have any enmity with him. You hate him because you cannot see me with him. This is not love Kabir this is not! You and T you both are same you both deserve eachother" Piya walked away in anger

Kabir stood broken and shocked while for T it was just a humiliation that she really don't care much. Misha looked at Piya disappearing figure, she then looked towards Kabir. She touched his shoulder.

"I was trying to tell you she is listening but you didn't got me! But Kabir, Piya is right you don't have any reason to hate Abhay except that he has attitude problem but then that is not something to hate someone especially a person... who is your love's love interest" Misha ended in soft tone

Kabir looked at Misha blankly. Maybe he was not ready to let go Piya so easily. He loves him, he knows that she loves Abhay but he don't find Abhay right for her. If only he knew how much and what Abhay has done for Piya then he would've find himself too low infront of Abhay.

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I hope you guys liked the update.
Enjoy,
Asshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Nice update ...lovely thought if pia memory's not erase thn what she do...really interesting...like it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice update really, missing abhiya alott, do update next part nd surely a big part sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nicely written cont soon Wat happen to piya s memory

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