~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 27

Originally posted by: archiesview

I expected the sorcerer to be Abhay!! Anyway, loved the story and looking forward to see how Pia will cope up and how Abhay will come to know about Piya's real identity.

You are an awesome writer!

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Amazing update
Now piya is missing her friends n her previous life n hope her friend get help
Abhay crave for freedom n live a carefree life
Piya told her true bt he think he is drunk

Originally posted by: doll.12

Update soon.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

for the most part almost till end i really felt that may be it's the sorcerer who is abhay & not the prince. i loved their interactions. i loved how straight forward pia is...she doesn't mince her words & speak what ever she feels. i am really interested by his character and there's something in his past related to pia's mom...what is it?

next part that's there😳

pia was bound to miss her old life she had spent so much time there.she had taken the biggest risk of her lifetime.

abhay is already attracted to pia & he likes spending his time with her as that gives him some moments where he can be himself more like a normal person then the prince. their meetings were really nice & nikhil was always there to help pia whenever she was stuck anywhere.

i love nikhil here & looking forward to read more.

brilliant writing. pia's struggle in adjusting to her new life was so real.

Being called real is my greatest ambition as a writer! Thanks a lot! glad you found it realistic. 😳

just awsum.

Originally posted by: .Rhythm.

I am in love with this story totally.

The sorcerer cares for Piya in his own way right from supporting her when she was just a fish out of water to correcting her phrases in her mind.

Even if the prince might have thought of gifting the ship to Piya from her love of sea food , that indeed was a nice gift. It did make Piya feel special and close to home. I liked that.

Hope the sorcerer sends for some help for Piya's friends and they come out of trouble soon.

Abhay caring for Piya was sweet. The last part was nice.

Continue soon Shreya di. 😊

Thank you soo much! I'm so sorry about the PM. I sent PMs this time as Indu wasn't available, and I probably missed some names

Originally posted by: muzikk93

I too thought that the sorcerer was in fact abhay and was hiding behind a facade to see how far piya would go to attain her love. It was hard imagining prince as abhay but hey that's just my thought. Your writing skills are outstanding and I love this story regardless of the direction it heads in.😳

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

superb + love it concept pia - a mermaid ( jalpari )
in initial I thght abhay is sorcerer but later abhay turn out - a prince
you really well explain abt history part , place , almost every thing , thank u

Originally posted by: cuteariya

superb chapter
piya with the prince meeting was nice
prince was flat on piya in first meeting 😉
the sorcerer think piya didn't scared of him 😆
loll is really brave to give answer back to the sorcerer 👏
finally the prince name came out I was thinking the sorcerer is abhay
abhiya moment was lovely 😃
loll piya tell the truth to abhay that she is mermaid in drunken state🤣
im worried what will happen when abhay will know the truth?
continue soon

Originally posted by: bestpasstime

Get well soon Indu Take care

i love this thread a lot

i am always a big fan of fairy tales n all stories are superb n fabulous

I love piya as mermaid but i have doubt that abhay is prince or ...