~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 26

Originally posted by: 2Obsessed

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I'm first ! Wow ! I couldn't be happier !😃

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This is amazing. Totally awesome !

Piya had been an no nonsense instructor is totally visible in all the conversations she and the sorcerer have had , and I love her this way.

And before I miss it , I love the exclaimations you have made Piya use - first Exploding eels and now Snapping Sharks ! And then there are the other ocean related phrase too. I totally loved them.👍🏼

If I quote Piya - You are good with words !

But ofcourse you know it already.

LOL! Thank you for such a compliment! It always means a lot to me. Hugs

Abhay wants some normalcy in his life and he admitted that Piya's presence made him feel a lot like it. that was touchy , but Piya's realisation that she wudn't be seeing her friends any more and wud never be comforting them in times of need , was far more emotional.

But Piya too told him of her reality and ofcourse he has no idea of it.😆

And Abhay's knowledge of history , what to say about that ? I guess it becomes easier when history is directly family.

I hope Piya's friends get help , and was Piya's mum an acquaintaince to the sorcerer , a friend , or what ?

I've been wondering why no one asked me that or if anyone had even noticed it! Thanks. I will definitely be writing about her mother.

Waiting eagerly for the next part already. Continue soonish😊

*puffing and panting* I'm writing, I'm writing. Promise. 😆

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update simply amazing loved it
Loved Abhiya Abhay needs piya is his life
so piya told him of her reality
Superb Abhay's knowledge of history
hoping that Piya's friends get some help
Thanks for pm... 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Purple.shade

And I was really close to guessing the sorceror to be Abhay and then it was the prince 😆 I know my mind makes weird connections ;)

I don't know why , but I feel mixed feelings , does the sorceror by any chance like Pia? Like that gift scene , he was pretty angry on Pia for assuming it to be the Prince's. And Pia was pretty protective about him with Abhay.I don't know maybe I am thinking Gibrish :D

Since I am going for a kinds sorta love triangle here...ab samajh jao😆

Abhay was made the classical charming prince here who's longs to be the commen guy , and the ending scene was sweet.

But I do feel that Pia would remain much more happy in her original habitat, maybe the sorceror could help Abhay transform into a merman or something 😆 , now that would be a real prince ;)

Unlikely. I don't fancy mermen, hence highly unlikely for Piya to do that😆

Update soonish :)

Originally posted by: doll.12

😆It was damn beautiful... There's one word I didn't used to praise ur work or maybe I have done.. It's flawless... Just flawless... U r amazing what u write.. And u know.. So no worries for me to explain how much u make me amazed with it... Me too having mix and unfamilar feelings ... Why?? Am I having soft corner for nikhil... (sorry.. But I don't know what he is.. I can't remember the spelling lol)... But the last part really gave the hint that abhay the prince finally got to know that he is the one whom piya was fida ... Haye... Ok.. Yeah last part really was lovely.. His care.. His possessiveness for her... He is indeed a simple boy longing for simplicity.. And piya is giving her that sweet simplicity.. I was sad but u greatly written about piya's emotion for her friends pain.. As she is no more there for them to stand and console them but then when nikhil pulls her out of sea.. His words hit her bad.. But but abhay came so far for her ... She is totally talli now but abhay will take care of him.. That ship.. The gift for piya.. Me too had the doubt but shrugged it off but then I thought why didn't abhay mentioned about this if he has gifted it.. Or has he?? ... Next update.. U know waiting for eagerly... As till now not confirm who is the one the mermaid gonna fall in love or say who will fall for the mermaid...

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

Amazing update Shreya. your writing or better say your words keep getting better ⭐️

I almost thought the sorcerer is Abhay 😆 but it was the prince. i guess Sorcerer being Abhay would be too predictable or i donno i cannot connect Print to Abhay till now 😆

she said the truth that she is a mermaid but Abhay didnt realize it yet offcourse she wasnt drunk blabbering. and Piya is right i feel, the sorcerer do care for Piya in his own strange way. atleast that is what is seems. keep writing please i wanna read more.

Just one part left😆 the sorcerer does care for Piya. I'm going for a kinda love triangle😛

P.S: the history stuff and the beautiful descriptions of places you mentioned and how! it was really really good writing.

Really? I thought it was just crappy imagination😆