~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Amazing update Shreya. your writing or better say your words keep getting better ⭐️

I almost thought the sorcerer is Abhay 😆 but it was the prince. i guess Sorcerer being Abhay would be too predictable or i donno i cannot connect Print to Abhay till now 😆

she said the truth that she is a mermaid but Abhay didnt realize it yet offcourse she wasnt drunk blabbering. and Piya is right i feel, the sorcerer do care for Piya in his own strange way. atleast that is what is seems. keep writing please i wanna read more.

P.S: the history stuff and the beautiful descriptions of places you mentioned and how! it was really really good writing.

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Beautifully Written... 😊

And Thanks For PM... 😊

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archiesview

@archiesview

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

I expected the sorcerer to be Abhay!! Anyway, loved the story and looking forward to see how Pia will cope up and how Abhay will come to know about Piya's real identity.

You are an awesome writer!

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Amazing update
Now piya is missing her friends n her previous life n hope her friend get help
Abhay crave for freedom n live a carefree life
Piya told her true bt he think he is drunk

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

amazing update

for the most part almost till end i really felt that may be it's the sorcerer who is abhay & not the prince. i loved their interactions. i loved how straight forward pia is...she doesn't mince her words & speak what ever she feels. i am really interested by his character and there's something in his past related to pia's mom...what is it?

pia was bound to miss her old life she had spent so much time there.she had taken the biggest risk of her lifetime.

abhay is already attracted to pia & he likes spending his time with her as that gives him some moments where he can be himself more like a normal person then the prince. their meetings were really nice & nikhil was always there to help pia whenever she was stuck anywhere.

i love nikhil here & looking forward to read more.

brilliant writing. pia's struggle in adjusting to her new life was so real.

just awsum.

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 9 years ago

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Manisha

@.Rhythm.

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

I am in love with this story totally.

The sorcerer cares for Piya in his own way right from supporting her when she was just a fish out of water to correcting her phrases in her mind.

Even if the prince might have thought of gifting the ship to Piya from her love of sea food , that indeed was a nice gift. It did make Piya feel special and close to home. I liked that.

Hope the sorcerer sends for some help for Piya's friends and they come out of trouble soon.

Abhay caring for Piya was sweet. The last part was nice.

Continue soon Shreya di. 😊

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Manisha

@.Rhythm.

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Btw what did I do such that I didn't recieve a pm ? 😒

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

I too thought that the sorcerer was in fact abhay and was hiding behind a facade to see how far piya would go to attain her love. It was hard imagining prince as abhay but hey that's just my thought. Your writing skills are outstanding and I love this story regardless of the direction it heads in.😳

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Hello friends,

I am posting this note on behalf of my dear friend Indu who made this wonderful thread. Indu has not been keeping well for a couple of days now and for the time being till she recovers, I will be posting the stories and sending PMs to the readers on her behalf. If any of you are interested to post their OS in this thread, please PM me your stories and I shall post it here and send out PMs to all the readers.

Also lets all hope and pray that Indu recovers fast 🤗

Lots of love,

Mandy

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#250

superb chapter
piya with the prince meeting was nice
prince was flat on piya in first meeting 😉
the sorcerer think piya didn't scared of him 😆
loll is really brave to give answer back to the sorcerer 👏
finally the prince name came out I was thinking the sorcerer is abhay
abhiya moment was lovely 😃
loll piya tell the truth to abhay that she is mermaid in drunken state🤣
im worried what will happen when abhay will know the truth?
continue soon