~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page

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Anjali

@anjalidani

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Wow! Read this story in one go today only.
I loved it. Very nicely written.
Please update soon.

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Wowww🤣making my stomache🤣...Love it😆

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

great update ...
piya's parents reaction were mind blowing specially the doc scene 😆

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Nafi update jaldi please 😭

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: silent.desire
ABHIYA OS:EVER AFTER by Mansa

🤗 🤗 🤗

It was a very beautiful and apart journey. Just loved and enjoyed reading it. I loved all mystery, action and Augustus (Hope I got it name correctly.) It was one dream ride and you did a full justice to it. You are a beautiful writer. 😳 🤗 Right now I am sort of words to praise but really I loved it reading all parts in a go. 😊 Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

Thank u for reading it 😳 Am glad u liked it!

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

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👏 wow this was one amazing update Nafi ! 👏

Piya has truly gone nuts! 😆

Poor Arnab! He surely was at the verge of having a stroke! 🤣

And Piya doesn't care a damn!! 😆 Whatever she is, she isn't NORMAL--that's for sure! 🤣

Because of her, Madu is fed up. 😆 poor her!!

I guess Abhay too realises what a nut case Piya is. That's why he keeps staring at her with amazement!! 🤣

And the Doctor--Madhu scene! OMG!! That was the most funniest part of all !! 🤣

And Piya asking what's the matter was even more cracking! 😆

I wonder when Arnab wakes up what will he say...! ?

And Abhay brought her food?!! Now that's interesting! 😉

Waiting to see what he says to Piya . Although he seems to be a silent entity so far...! 🤓

Please bring the next update ASAP! ! 🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

JUST READ LITTLE...😊 WILL READ UR UPDATES SOON... 😊 AND IF POSSIBLE DO PM... 😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Comments updated on page 15!

And sorry for late!! I keep forgetting to Unres! ! Sorry!

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

wonderful update

glad to see abhay as an angel in real for a change.

pia indeed had a tough life after her father died and i loved the way the story toes along the lines of Cinderella but then takes another path which is more interesting.

i liked how their relationship in this story has shaped up from beginning to end. he came to help her only out of duty but loved how pia was encouraged by abhay whenever she was down.how he motivated and helped her through out the entire process as they became friends sharing all their stories with one another. he helped her like a friend, guide , mentor and took care of her as a guardian.

abhay fell for another human and even though his sister's part was small in the story it showed how much she cared for him & was protective of her.it was only a matter of time when pia would have realized that it's abhay who matters more to her then edmund after all he has been her companion all through her rough patch.

pia touching abhay's wings was a nice touch as it fasten her decision making ability & finally they did ended up toghether which of course i loved.

edmund was a nice men as he did accept pia even after knowing her truth but they were never meant to be. i am happy that he did fing happiness and love later in his life.

pia's step sisters and mother deserve what they got so no sympathy for them.

the last bit where abhay-pia keeps on fighting with each other with thunderstorms and lightening was cherry on the cake.

it was simply splendid, brilliant , outstanding and fab shreya.

thanks for pm

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago