~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page

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@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

M glad dat Piya finally realized her luv fr abhay.

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

love this story... !! Devil or angel, abhay is always lovable... How patiently he handle pia.. Loved their togetherness... At ending he make her angel too... ::-))

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Outstanding os
love it
'm a big fan of fairytales
n this is amazing
thanks for pm

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Isha Simon

@Ms.Purplegoth

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

This os was Awo-some !! I just broke the word in 2 syllables , because this deserved it 👍🏼

I was in love with the concept of u changing the age old Cinderella story , with the girl always going with the rich , all perfect, cold prince ( Gah!) . I mean Edmund liked her the first time because she was dressed all Nice and stuff and Abhay liked her even when she was her real self .
The part where Abhay teaches her all those ladylike stuff , it kinda reminded of the classic movie 'My Pretty Lady'.

And loved the final kiss moment .

Overall loved it ! Do write more Os's ;)

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AdeebA

@pirl18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

👏

So much beautiful sparkie n awesome os

New theme of cindrella
Loved it

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

wonderful fairytale dear!!! really loved it a lots!!!

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Ahhh beautiful beautiful story😳

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

That's a really nice spin off from Cinderella story Shreya. it was brilliant. Abhay as an angel very acceptable any day 😆

the story was beautiful and i loved how Abhay and Piyas relationship grows up and how in tit bits Abhay helped her with everything and how she grows the affection towards her. and also i loved the wing part when Piya touches his wings ❤️ Edmund was indeed a good man but like piya said he doesnt know who she is for really and Abhay does and accepted her, helped her just for who she is and she liked Abhay just the way he is. thats what matters. it was a beautiful story and i loved your language and writing style in this. too good. 👏

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

awesome os..

abhay is angel instead of vampire.
helped geet to become a lady and fall in love with her.
helped her to reach her love.
but piya realized who actually she love.

loved it