~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 8

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Labyrinth by ilove99

It was brilliant and marvellous story. Loved Pia here and Abhay too but more Pia. 😆 🤗
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Together in Paris by Tanzie

🤗 That was so captivated story. Nice one I was all lost in the story. Thanks a lot.
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ABHIYA OS:EVER AFTER by Mansa

🤗 🤗 🤗

It was a very beautiful and apart journey. Just loved and enjoyed reading it. I loved all mystery, action and Augustus (Hope I got it name correctly.) It was one dream ride and you did a full justice to it. You are a beautiful writer. 😳 🤗 Right now I am sort of words to praise but really I loved it reading all parts in a go. 😊 Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
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OS:-DREAM COMES TRUE by Nafi

Flora it was cute little bunch of joyful story. Loved it. Thanks a lot for sharing. 🤗
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KISS OF LOVE(BY SAYANI)

It was indeed a very dreamy, beautiful and a lovely fairy tale. I loved each and every bit of it. Thanks a lot for sharing it. 🤗
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Abhiya OS- The Princess and The Vampire by Meghna


🤗 Meghu big big big hug to you. You know how much I love your fairy tale don't you? 😉 I always love your pyaar mien pagala male lead in all story and here it is not exception. Thanks a lot dear. 🤗
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🤗 Thanks a lot Indu for such a lovely thread it was such a joy ride to read all stories. All writers who wrote the story you all are so amazing in your self. Just marvellous. 👏


Now thanks for pm and sorry for very late reading and commenting.
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Originally posted by: silent.desire

🤗 Thanks a lot Indu for such a lovely thread it was such a joy ride to read all stories. All writers who wrote the story you all are so amazing in your self. Just marvellous. 👏


Now thanks for pm and sorry for very late reading and commenting.

thank you for reading dear. 🤗 my pleasure. 😳 you have loved and appreciated the hard work done by the writers is the most wonderful compliment for us. And we would try our best to keep it moving on as long as the readers want it. 😳
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My Special and heatfelt greetings to each one of the readers for their immense love and support. 🤗

AND TO ALL THE WRITERS--I'm indebted to all of you! Without your co-operation and lovely stories this journey could have been impossible! Thank you dears. 🤗

P.S. If there is anyone who wants to write in this thread, please pm me. You're always welcome to share your story. 😳
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Note:First of all let me apologize to you all for giving the update so late...this is not the last update though! One more last part is remaining...i was supposed to end this here but it has become so long that i decided to split it again! i was suffering from severe writer's block so couldn't write the update earlier. But finally i got over it and wrote it down. besides My exams are coming so last part will be little late but not late as this much. I promise😆 This Update I would love to Dedicate it to two persons...first Mandy darling who has been waiting for this story for quite long time 😆😛 sorry i am late!😳 and second it is Tanzie who also seemed indirectly impatient for it.😆 I hope you guys enjoy this...cause i am not sure how it came out as half of it i wrote when i was suffering from writers block and personally feel it rather came out crap😆 and hope all other readers enjoy it. Thank you!

--Nafi


OS:The Lion King

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Part- 3B


Piya smiles- you don't seam to be liking these names! Then I am gonna give you a name which suits your character!
The lion doesn't look at her.
Piya then tapping the index finger on her head says- What about...
And all of sudden she jumped with excitement making the Lion look at her- Yess GOT IT!
Piya exclaimed making the Lion eyes all wide- ABHAY!
The lion looks at her as like she is some wierd thing.
Piya continues- Abhay...I will call you! It means Fearless! Now dont say no...It perfectly matches with you! You are brave , fearless, strong!
The Lion still keeps on staring at her not reacting at all while piya thought he actually approved the name.
Piya laughs-Thats it...I will call you Abhay! Abhay - The Lion King! My Darling!
Piya punched the lion on his nose playfully and the lion moved back a little with her sudden action.
Piya starts laughing loudly while the lion continues on staring at her.
Piya continues to laugh and says in between- so tell me you like it right? No no you must love it!
Abhay aka Lion continues to stare at her in wonder.
Piya continues- it just matches with your personality and...
Piya stops in mid as she hears a loud gasp...
Piya looks at the lion keenly who seems expressionless at the moment, piya frowns at him...
Before piya could open her mouth to say something, she hears stammering voice- P...Pii...yaa!
Piya is shocked...and turns to look at her right side and the lion does the same.
Piya finds a shocked, scared and terrified Arnab standing far away from them.
As the lion looks at Arnab, he felt this was the end of his life...infact he forgot breathing as he found himself under the gaze of lion. But piya least noticed this all...she was all excited and happy seeing her dad.
Piya jumps from her place and runs towards arnab and stands two feet away from him- Heyyy dad! Whats up? Where is mom!
Arnab was not really hearing what piya said...his eyes was fixed on the lion which was sitting lazily by stretching his front legs and looking at Arnab all bored. But according to Arnab, the lion was looking at him with hungry eyes...planning all around how to make him his dinner for tonight .
Piya looks at Arnab confused after getting no response from him.
Piya asks- Dad? What happened?
No reply.
Piya stomps her foot irritatingly- DAD! You listening to me...
Suddenly piya noticed Arnab was not looking at her...he was looking at something at her back!
Piya raised her one eyebrow- hey! Dad..whats wrong? What are you looking at?
Piya turned around and looked at her back. She couldn't find anything shocking except her lion Abhay sitting all lazily.
Piya looked at her father again who was now all pale as like he saw a ghost right now. His gaze was just still at something.
Piya rolls her eyes and walks towards Arnab . Just as she kept her hand on his shoulder, Arnab shrieked and jumped a feet away from her all shouting!
Arnab- Aaahhh!
Arnab looks here and there horrified.
Piya shocked and confused- easy dad! Calm down. What happened? Why you...shouted?
Arnab all scared shouted- Dont kill me...Don't! Stay away...
Piya shocked- What? Huh!
Arnab realises it's piya...he was actually imagining himself attacked by the lion.
Arnab stammers as he points to towards the lion- t...that t..h..ing! T..hat!
His finger starts shivering.
Piya irritatingly looking at area Arnab pointed- What?
Arnab looks at piya horrified- What that...t..hing doing here? H..O..W...
Piya inturpted being all clueless- Dad what are you talking about?
Suddenly Arnab got alarmed as he heard something moving and immediately looked at lion...and saw the lion standing up from it's sitting position and opens its mouth wide and yawns showing all its sharp teeth.
Arnab feels tug at his chest as he wishpers like a caught deer- Ma..dh..uuu...
Piya looks at her dad all perplexed not understanding what the hell is wrong with him!
Arnab cries out as he sees the lion looking at him with dangerous blue eyes- MA...DHHHUU! MADHU! MAD...UUU!
Arnab gulps hard as piya watches him annoyingly.
Piya - what's the matter with you dad? Why are you acting like a scared crow!
Suddenly piya sees madhu running towards them hurriedly all confused.
Madhu confused- What happened Arnab! Why...
Madhu froze as she stood beside Arnab.
Her eyes was wide...she couldn't believe what she was seeing!
Piya looks at her parents all confused.
Piya in mind- Now what happened to mom!
Suddenly Madhu jumped back scared screaming loudly-Aaahhh! HELPPP! Oh my god! HELP!
Madhu holds Arnab shoulder and stands behind him shouting loudly.
Piya confused and little bit afraid hearing her mother scream- What? What? What happened?
Piya starts looking here and there.
Madhu shocked and angry at same time- You blind mut! What's wrong with you? Look behind you...there is a...
Madhu looks at the lion which was staring at them giving boring looks...
Madhu starts screaming instead of completing the sentence- Aaahhh!
Piya feels annoyed- What are you doing mom? What's it to feel so scared! Or are you both have gone mad?
Madhu shouts- Shut up piya! What is that thing doing outside?
Madhu points directly at lion.
Piya looks at direction and realised her parents was getting scared from her darling Abhay! Piya rolls eyes...couldn't they just tell her before! By the way how can they really get scared from an innocent animal like Lion...like seriously...thinks piya!
Piya giggles- Oh mom! That? You mean Abhay?
Madhu frowns- What? What abhay? Who is he?
Before piya could say anything, Madhu starts hyperventilating...
Madhu in panicking tone- Oh god! You brought a man in the house! Oh my god..
Piya tried to speak up but before she could Madhu continued while jerking Arnab shoulder- See see...Its all cause of you! Look how much freedom you gave to your daughter! Today she brought a man , tomorrow she will claim to love him then will force us to get them married...Oh god! What I am going to do! Arnab Arnab this is all your fault...you...
Suddenly Madhu noticed Arnab is all stiff...while piya looks at Madhu confused listening to all her blabbering , not understanding what has gone wrong with her mom that she is keeping on saying useless things!
Madhu angrily- Arnab you listening to me?
There is no response.
Piya then notices Arnab still staring at one direction and this time she knew he was looking at Abhay. Piya was hell annoyed now! What's wrong with her family? What is to get afraid from a lion! If she is not getting afraid then why are they!?

Madhu shakes arnab from shoulder-Arnab.
Again no response.
Madhu was going to say something when Arnab wishpers- He..he..is...
Madhu shocked- What?
Suddenly they hear some walking sound and turns to look at Lion who started to walk around slowly.
Madhu afraid- Oh no! Its moving!
Piya smirks- Ofcourse it will...Animals do have the characteristic of Locomotion! It just can't stand at one place like a plant.
Madhu gritting teeth and eyeing at the lion- Piyaaa...just...just...move that thing out of here!
Piya frowns- mom its not a thing! Its a lion and my darling!
Madhu angrily- YOU! Just...
Madhu turns to Arnab and holds his hand angrily...and just as she was about to say something...she realised Arnab's body has gone completely cold.
Madhu panics- Arnab! What...what happened to you?
Suddenly Arnab starts to breath heavily.
Madhu cries- OMG! Arnab!
Piya frowns not understanding anything- What happened to dad?
Madhu shouts- You just shut up! Its all cause of you. Some day you will end up killing us both.
Piya annoyed- oh please mom...stop being a drama queen! I guess dad is just scared of Abhay.
Madhu narrowing her eyes- Abhay?
Piya was about to say something when both madhu piya heard Arnab saying weekly" Madhuu...I think...I think I am going to have heart attack! "
Madhu shouts shocked- WHAT!
Just then Arnab puts his hand on his chest tightly and falls on the ground .
Madhu cries- Arnaaabbb! What happened to you?
Piya replies calmly- Heart Attack!
Madhu confused- Huh?
Piya shurgs- yeah that's what dad said before falling!
Madhu glares at piya furiously.
Piya quickly- Get him to house! Quick. And call the doctor!
Piya then turns to Lion who was staring with wide eyes at the things happening infront of his eyes.
Piya grins- Heyyy Abhay! Lets go for a walk!
Madhu looks at piya shocked.
Madhu in mind- Oh No! What happened to my daughter? Who is this Abhay! Is there some ghost around us...Oh no! Who is this man? Where is he?
Piya declares making Madhu to come out of her thoughts- Mom I am going for a walk with my Lion! You take care of dad.
Piya was about to walk towards Abhay when Madhu shouted- Where do you think you are going?
Piya turns around and frowns at her mother- For a walk! I guess I just said clearly.
Madhu shocked- Outside?
Piya rolls eyes- ofcourse! Then where do you think people goes for walk with their pet? Obviously they don't take their pet for walk around their house or in their house !
Madhu with shaky voice- you...you...are taking that animal...for...for walk ...OUTSIDE?
Piya annoyed- Mom I am not talking french! Yes I am.
Madhu literally shouts- No you aren't! You have already made us mad by keeping a lion as a pet! All the people of town are going to die out of fear if they see a lion roaming in town! Have you just lost it piya? You are not going anywhere! Is that clear?
Piya exasperated- Mom? What's the big deal! Some day people will know I have a pet lion. And they need to know! They should know what a great and generous deed I have done by keeping Lion as a pet! Poor cuties...they are always captured from jungle and then put inside the cage in zoo! I have done a wonderful thing by keeping a lion as pet...they can't just live their life in a jail like cage for years! After all they are also animals like dogs and cats! By the way mom...why are you wasting your time by talking with me instead of taking dad to hospital or inside home at this instant? He has got a HEART ATTACK! I guess he already died by now.
*******

Madhu is walking to and fro in the bed room. She keeps on eyeing outside through the window present in bedroom. She was damn worried for her daughter. She herself don't know what's gone into her! Who is that Abhay? Why can't she see him? And What that giant Lion has done on her daughter! All these questions...but she is not getting any answer! Right now Piya is outside playing with that giant lion...Madhu with great effort has stopped her from going outside for a walk with her so called pet.
The voice brought her back to the present- Mrs.Dobrail! There is nothing serious you know! Mr. Arnab has just fainted that's it...no heart attack or anything! He just needs to rest...I am just writing few medicines!
Madhu confused- but Doc before getting unconscious he told that he had a heart attack!
The Doctor crackles silently- Ah Mrs Dobrail! That's really silly to say...I mean how can a patient say he is having heart attack at that moment? I suppose Mr. Arnab just got a big shock or surprise for which led him to faint. Well now he is absolutely fine! You don't need to worry. Just let him rest!
Madhu looks at the doctor embarrassed.
The Doctor- Anyways I shall go now.
Madhu smiled nervously- Oh yeah sure! Please.
As the doctor got up from his seat and started to move towards the door of room followed by Madhu , both of them heard a loud groan.
Madhu halted at her place while the doctor turned at Madhu confused.
The doctor confused- Mrs. Dobrail did you hear it?
Madhu nervously- oh yea...I...
Before madhu could say anything further, they heard another loud sound which was more prominent and sounded like a roar!
The doctor sounded a bit worried now- What is it! I never heard such kind of sounds in town...this seems...
Madhu quickly not letting the doctor finish his sentence- ah...its nothing! Actually some wild dogs live near our house so must be the sound coming from them.
The doctor confused- Wild dogs? Errm...that didn't look like barking.
Madhu nervously looks here and there. Before she say anything...
The doctor chirped- ooops...I am getting late! I shall leave...
Madhu gave a sigh of relief- ah sure! This way!
Madhu quickly led the doctor out of the room.

As both of them passing through corridor of main hall, madhu stood shocked as she saw through window of main hall the lion walking towards the front door.
Madhu looked at the doctor horrified who was now walking towards front door.
Madhu quickly ran towards doctor and stood infront of him blocking his way which made the doctor stunned at the action.
The doctor- Mrs.Dobrail?
Madhu nervously- ehh...actually you should leave by the back side door of our house!
The doctor confused- What? Why ! I mean I came from this route.
Madhu was about to answer when she heard giggles of piya...she looked at window and saw her patting the lion hairy head lovingly as if that monster did some great job.
Madhu quickly answered- its same doctor. Go this way or by that way! You will able to leave from my home.
No way madhu was going to let the doctor know that there is a big giant lion living in their house as a pet. This news will fast forward in jet speed in whole town and everyone will vanish from the town like ghosts.
The doctor was confused , stunned and shocked by sudden behaviour of Madhu Dobrail.
The Doctor- Mrs. Dobrail are you alright?
Madhu frowns- I am fine. But you are going to leave from backside.
The doctor shocked- huh!
Madhu gave another glance at window and she was shocked, piya started walking along with lion towards front door.
Madhu gasped.
The doctor confused as he tried to look at the direction madhu looking- I am getting late Mrs Dobrail. What are you looking at?
Madhu quickly pulled the doctor by holding his hand towards the other side so that he can't peek at the window.
The doctor was now extremely horrified and he said loudly- What are you doing Mrs Dobrail? Leave my hand. What's wrong with you!
The doctor jerked off his hand from madhu's clutch.
Madhu looked at the front door and then looked at doctor who was frowning at her by now.
Madhu without saying anything held his hand again and started pulling him towards the left side of main hall.
The doctor shouted feeling scared and shocked at same time- Mrs.Dobrail! WHAT IS THIS! LEAVE ME! LEAVE MY HAND! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
Madhu dragged a struggling doctor towards end of main hall somehow and whispered- ssshhh stop screaming! I am doing it for your well being! Come!
The doctor stunned- but...but where? What...
Madhu interrupted- to the back side! You need to leave from there otherwise your life will be at risk!
Before the doctor could say anything, Madhu pulled him away from there and vanished to the right which leads to backside of door.
Just then the front side door opened and piya screamed joyfully- Mmmooomm!!
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Madhu drags the doctor to the back side door and tells him- Now you may leave.
Madhu opens the door for the doctor. When the doctor didn't move a bit from his place madhu looks at him and finds him looking at her awkwardly as if she has two heads.
Madhu asks him bewildered- What? Leave Dr! Quick.
When the doctor doesn't respond to her and continues looking at her wierdly Madhu asks him- What are you waiting for ? Go.
As the doctor still didn't respond and kept on staring at her , madhu gave an angry hufff and pulled the shocked doctor again out of the house.
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Piya screams- Mooommm! MOOMMM...
Piya looks here and there and pouts thoughtfully.

Piya self thought- where is mom? Oh shit she must be upstairs nursing dad!
Piya looked at the lion which was standing beside her and said- Heyy abhay you sit on sofa! Let me call mom...Alright!
The lion stares at her for a while then walked towards the nearby sofa in living room and jumped on it and layed down lazily stretching its whole body, occupying the whole sofa for him self...and yawned widely showing his sharp teeth.
Piya grinned widely- Ah that's my darling!
The lion immediately looked at piya with wide eyes who by now walked towards the stairs without giving a look to him.

The Lion kept staring at her till she disappeared.

************

Piya runs to her parents room and opens the door...

Piya- Mom!

Piya frowns as she sees no one in the room except her dad snoring peacefully !

Piya amused- duh! I thought mom would be here taking care of dad.

Piya closes the door and goes to check on other four rooms upstairs.

**********

The Doctor furiously jerking off his hand - Enough! Mrs Dobrail...will you explain me what was the problem if I have left from front side door...??

Madhu annoyed- I told you it is for your good!

The doctor bewildered - What good it did by dragging me forcefully all alone here? You are acting weird Mrs Dobrail.

Madhu strictly - Shut up and come along! No more questions.

Madhu held the doctor's arm and again dragged him to the gate.

Madhu looked at the gate and was about to open it when she noticed the big lock hanging down.

Madhu shocked- oh shit...its locked!

The doctor shocked- What does that mean now? You brought me here to let me leave from your home! Goshhh I am getting late.
Madhu irritated- Shut up...errmm do one thing! Climb the gate and leave!
The doctor stared at Madhu with blank face...

Madhu- What? What are you looking at? Go climb hurry!

The doctor frowned- Do you think I am mad? Have you lost your mind Mrs.Dobrail!

Madhu- is your life precious to you?

The doctor shocked- What? What are you going to do!

Madhu hurriedly in panic filled voice- RUN!!! RUN!!! Leave from here as soon as possible!

The doctor was now hell scared...he is not actually understanding what's happening!

The doctor in his mind- whats wrong with this woman? Why she is acting like some ghost is behind me? Is this house haunted or this woman is haunted?

The doctor checked out Madhu up and down who was blabbering and he felt Madhu's face was indeed looking paranoid .

The doctor to himself- This is not feeling right! This woman acting all weird all of sudden! Something is wrong...what if she is a witch and has disguised herself as human...and just when she will get the right moment she will pounce on me to tear up my flesh!!! Oh god...Run Anthony Run! Before it gets too late...she must have some humanity left in her human form that's why giving me the opportunity to run...dont waste your time Anthony just Run!

The doctor came out of his thoughts as soon as Madhu clicked her fingers infront of his eyes.

Madhu annoyed- are you hearing me? Did you hear what I said! If you stay one more minute here your life might be in danger...Just go!! Climb the gate...I don't have time to bring the keys!! Go...

The doctor looked at Madhu horrified...his suspicion of madhu as a witch was almost confirmed.

The doctor quickly walked towards gate and threw his briefcase outside the gate which landed on ground with a bang sound. After that he tried to get hold of the spine rods at top of gate.


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Piya walks back towards Arnab and Madhu room all confused. Madhu is not in upstairs! She must not be even in downstairs as piya called her there but she didn't respond.
Piya unconsciously opens the door of her parents room again...she notices her dad still snoring aloud! Piya walks in the room and looks around the room as like searching for something. She then went towards the small cupboard near the window and opened it. Suddenly her eyes fell at the sight happening out side the window. Her eyes grew wide in shock.

Piya out of her wits- What the hell?
She kept on looking for few minutes at scenario happening outside...completely shocked. After few minutes she quickly ran out of the room.
*********

The doctor was jumping by holding the spines from last 5 minutes...he is still not able to climb the gate! After all its too high.
But Madhu was getting impatient...Quickly the doctor leaves , the better for her.
Madhu annoyed- I didn't ask you to practice how to jump like monkey...just climb the gate and get lost!!
The doctor angrily- I am trying...and anyways I have no interest to become a dinner for a WITCH .
Madhu shrugs without hearing the last word clearly- Okay!
Suddenly she freaks out- WHAT!
Hearing her sudden loud voice the doctor falls on the ground as he was about to give another attempt of jump.
The doctor screams - OUCHH!!
While Madhu angrily marches towards him- Witch? What witch ? you called me witch!!

The doctor suddenly lost all the words from his mouth as he saw Madhu staring at him furiously.
The doctor looked at Madhu horrified as he felt this was the end of his life...This woman is going to show her true witch form now and going to kill him!

On the other hand piya has already arrived at the back side door and was watching silently Madhu and doctor. Piya was highly confused as she was not understanding what actually was happening! Why the doctor was jumping like a clown! And Why her mom was looking in hurry and worried! Piya looks at the scene happening right with wide eyes completely shocked as her mother seemed suddenly angry and the doctor was laying on the floor!

As Madhu came near to doctor and was about to bent towards him...Suddenly both of them heard a voice- mom what's going on?
Madhu's eyes widen as she turned around swiftly and saw Piya walking towards them.
The doctor slightly lowers his head and sees piya.
Doctor in mind- now who is this?
Madhu hurriedly walks towards piya and stops her.
Madhu worriedly- Piya What are you doing here?
Piya frowns- I guess I am supposed to ask that to you.
Madhu with stern voice- Don't ask questions now! Just go inside.
Piya shocked- What you mean by not to ask questions? What are you doing here? And who is that man?
Piya points at the doctor.
Madhu in low voice- He is the doctor!
Suddenly Madhu remembered about the Lion and she gasped worriedly.
Madhu- OMG!
Piya confused- What?
Madhu angrily- Where is that monster?
Piya confused- Monster?
Madhu gritting- Your That So Called Pet! Where is it?
Piya glaring- Mom! Stop calling it monster and all those abuses you give him!
Madhu looks at piya shocked.
Piya irritated- How many times I have told you that he is a helpless animal! He is my darling! And now he has got a name"Abhay" ! Besides...What's that doctor doing here? And what are you doing with him?
Madhu frowns- Wait! Abhay? This is the name of that lion?
Piya sheepishly- ofcourse it is!
Madhu shocked- Have you gone nuts piya? I mean completely!
Piya frowns- What you mean? I...
Madhu interrupted as she glanced at the doctor with eyes who was looking at them with curiosity- Piya...You go inside! And Mind It! Don't bring that animal here.
Piya was about to say something when Madhu said- No more words! Go! I need to get this doctor out of here before he sees that monster!
Piya angrily- MOM! He is not a monster! Will you just stop calling him that?
As piya said them in loud voice, the doctor heard the word monster and he was terrified.
Doctor in mind- Monster! ? Oh God! What is this place! Oh no...this girl must be the other witch of this home who wants me to take as a dinner to some monster disguised as human! GOD! Help! I need to get out of here right now before it catches me.
The doctor quickly got up and slowly stepped towards the nearby tree without being noticed by Madhu or Piya as they seem busy in some serious discussion.
Madhu gritting teeth- Piyaaa! This is...Enough! I am gonna talk with you later! Just Go Inside and Make it Sure your animal stays out of here !
Piya in impatient tone- Mom! I dont understand Whats with you and dad? I am telling you for last time I don't want to here any kind of abuses towards my Darling Abhay! Otherwise do whatever you all want! Just stop calling him bad names...I am not gonna tolerate it from next time.
Madhu exasperated- What's wrong with you? You are just fighting with me for that...thing!
Piya glares at Madhu angrily but before she could open her mouth Madhu said- I can't believe it! And when did I said abuses to your lion?
Piya gritting teeth- Again?
Madhu shocked- What?
Piya in sad voice- you called him a lion!
Madhu with unbelievable look- What the hell! That creature is a lion ! I just called what it is?
Piya sternly- NO! No its is not...it was! But now its my darling and he has got a name!
Madhu shocked- Piya What happened to you?
Piya arrogantly- I am warning you for last time mom! If you are not gonna stop calling him with bad names I am not gonna eat food or drink water for a week! And you know I can do that!
Piya smirks.
Madhu just looked at her stunned - What?
Before they could proceed their conversation further they heard a loud noise.
Piya and Madhu turned to look at the direction and saw the doctor has disappeared.
Madhu shocked- Where did he go?
Suddenly they heard footsteps outside the gate.
Madhu quickly ran towards the gate- Doctor! Are you okay?
And just then Madhu heard footsteps of running away.
Madhu then sighed of relief- ah the doctor is safe!
Piya annoyed- What is the meaning of all these?
Madhu frowns at piya.
Piya continues- making the doctor jump out from the gate! What type of impression he must have got from us?
Madhu with fake smile- and who is responsible for all this?
Piya confused- Who?
Madhu angrily- Ofcourse you! Just for your that...
Piya glares.
Madhu with fake tone- I mean your darling! To save the doctor from being his dinner...I had to do this!
Piya shocked- What the hell? Abhay doesn't murder people!
Madhu looks at piya blankly then starts walking towards the house.
Piya follows Madhu.
As Madhu enters the house from back side door.
Piya says- That was an insult to my Abhay!
Madhu looks at piya shocked but doesn't reply and starts walking towards living room.
Piya continues- and you are not gonna think like that about Abhay from now onwards!
Madhu steps inside the living room just then she was about to say something to piya when suddenly her eyes fell on a large figure laying lazily on the sofa and yawning wide showing big sharp teeth.
Madhu felt her throat dry...she lost all her words. Her eyes grew wide as she kept on looking at the creature.
Just then Abhay aka lion looked at her with his blue eyes and Madhu felt her world just ended.
Madhu screamed as loudly as she could which made piya put hands on her ears due to the sudden act.
Madhu quickly ran and dashed into the guest room which was near the living room and locked herself inside.
Piya was shocked by this.
Piya gasped- What was that!
While the Lion boringly looked at the show going infront of him.
Piya stomped her foot- I swear I never saw such a mad woman in my life! Screaming as if she saw a ghost?! GOD!
Piya walked towards the room and banged loudly on the door with her hand- Mom! Mom!
No reply.
Piya banged more loudly completely annoyed- Mom! Open the door.
Madhu shouted from inside- Get that monster away from here piya ! Now!
Piya shocked- What?
Madhu shouts- Nowww! Or else I am not coming out! Just move that creature out of here! I can't believe you brought it inside my home.
Piya furiously- Mommm! How could you...how could you do that again! You abused him?
Madhu annoyed- Stop it piya! Are you seriously going to move that thing out or not? God what did I do that you gave me such nutcase daughter?
Piya shouting- No I am not! I swear I will make him sleep in this house that too in my room! That will be punishment for you Mom!
Madhu shocked- Have you gone...crazy piya? For god's sake take that thing out of this house or else I am not coming out!
Piya frowns- Good! As if I care! You just stay locked in but Abhay is gonna stay here in This House!
Suddenly piya feels movement...she turns around and finds Abhay the lion got down from the sofa and moving out of the house.
Piya worriedly- heyyy! Abhay! Where are you going?
Abhay suddenly halts at his way and looks back at piya and then again starts moving towards door.
Piya comes running towards him- hey wait! Don't go...
But the lion doesn't listen and moves out of the house.
Piya fumes and mutters - this is all due to mom!
Piya goes near that room and shouts- This is done! You have really no feelings for me mom! You hurted my darling! He is upset now due to your cruel words! I didn't expect that from you mom seriously! Now I swear I am not gonna eat or drink for a week! And I am gonna stay out of this house for a week and will live in the backyard with my darling! Bye!
Piya walks out of the house furiously.

After few minutes Madhu opens the door and peeps out worriedly.
***********

It is night and piya still hasn't returned to the house. Madhu is very worried! She is not understanding what happened to her daughter! Her obsession with the lion doesn't seem right! She never thought due to this so called pet her daughter will start acting so wierd! But her one confusion is clear...Abhay is not any man but the lion! Well it would have been much better if it was a man's name instead of that lion's ! Who gives such human name to animals?
Madhu could hear Piya's voice at the backyard . She was talking to that lion and consoling him that Madhu didn't mean to hurt him but her parents are weak hearted so they get easily scared. But he shouldn't worry cause she will make sure Madhu asks forgiveness from him.
Madhu was too shocked to hear such things. It is becoming quite dark now! She can't let her child stay out with that dangerous creature, she has to do something! Arnab is still sleeping due to high dose of sleeping pill.

Madhu decides to go out herself even though she is scared but she needs to make her daughter come inside and let her away from that monster.
Madhu started to walk towards backyard.
*******

Piya was laying on her stomach on the grass beside the lion who was laying beside her in Royal style.
Piya grinning- so I hope you are not upset anymore?
Abhay aka Lion looks at her with his blue eyes which was shining in the dark.
Piya continues- you don't need to worry ok! I am gonna talk to mom dad and make them agree to let you in the house and to stay in my room.
The lion's eyes widen as if shocked.
The lion groans.
Piya confused- What? You don't wanna come inside the house?
The lion stares at piya's baby brown eyes.
Piya pissed off- Oh god! I told you I am gonna make mom to tell you sorry for her behaviour early! You do not believe me?
Abhay keeps on staring at her.
Piya was about to say something when she heard sound of light footsteps behind her. She turned around quickly and saw her mom standing 20 feets far from them eyeing at her up and down worriedly.
Piya got up and frowned- Mom?
Just then the lion also looked at the direction of Madhu and Madhu gasped in horror.
She turned around swiftly and was about to run but then remembered about piya.
Piya looked at Madhu confused.
Madhu turned around slowly to face Piya.
Madhu shivered slightly at the dangerous gaze of lion.
Madhu gulped and said weakly- Piya come here my child!
As Madhu was standing too far her voice didn't reach Piya .
So piya continued to stare at Madhu not understanding what she was doing here.
Madhu said a bit loud now- Piya come here.
Piya again could not understand as it was like a whisper to her. But someone else understood what Madhu was saying.
The Lion stood on its feet and walked towards Piya and pushed her lightly forward with his large head.
Piya stumbled on her feet slightly and looked down and was shocked to see the lion.
Piya confused- What?
The lion pushed her again slightly as like asking her to go to Madhu.
While Madhu was looking at the scene horrified! What this monster doing to her child?
Piya asked clueless- What are you trying to say?
The Lion groans and rubbed his head on her thigh.
And tried to rub his paws on her hand and pushed her again slightly.
Piya shocked- Wait you are trying to say I should go to mom?
The lion groaned in reply.
While suddenly Madhu shouted loudly- Piya stay away from that! He is gonna attack you!
Piya looked at Madhu and muttered under breath- Oh God What is wrong with this woman?
Piya walked towards Madhu almost like marching!
Piya barked - What?
Madhu eyed at the lion first and then said - Piya it has become dark now! Come inside the house! It's not safe to stay with that animal.
Piya frowned - you came here to say this?

Madhu was about to open her mouth when Piya said- Then I am not interested!

Piya was about to leave when Madhu held her hand and turned her forcefully- Its not Safe to stay with that Monster at this time.

Piya frustrated-Mom Stop it! Just stop it! Why don't you understand ? Listen to me...

Madhu interrupted and said furiously- no you listen to me! You are coming...INSIDE...HOME...NOW!

Piya jerked of her hand and was about to say something when suddenly she found her shirt pulled by someone...Piya was shocked and looked down as well as Madhu.

The Lion Abhay was pulling her shirt by his sharp teeth.

Madhu's eyes widened as she screamed completely horrified seeing the lion so close to her-aaahhh! HOW AND WHEN THIS THING CAME HERE?

Madhu jumped 2 feets away completely scared !

Piya just gave an annoyed look- Stop acting as coward Mom! He is not gonna harm you.

Madhu shocked- but how it arrived here? I didn't see it coming! God what the hell is going on?

Piya rolled her eyes.

Suddenly she felt herself being pushed.

Piya looked at the lion- What now?

The Lion pulled her shirt by his teeth in the direction of house and groaned.

Piya shocked - you mean to say I should go inside!

The lion stared at Piya with his shinning blue eyes.

Piya complaining to madhu- See! How Kind is My darling! After all you have done he is telling me to obey you and go inside! But you?

Madhu wondering - wait...How this animal knows what I am telling to you?

Piya stated- This is because he is kind and have feelings! He understands everything but you don't! even being a human .

Madhu furiously- you are comparing me with this creature?

Piya rolled eyes- Whatever!

The lion pushed her again.

Piya worried- are you sure darling? I mean you wont feel lonely right?

The lion stared at her as if she is some nutcase.

Piya grinned- ok buddy! As you are saying I will go in! just because you are saying...otherwise I wouldn't have listened to her.

(Pointing at Madhu with annoying look)

While Madhu between all these was confused and shocked...she was not understanding how this lion was able to understand human language as it was just two days they brought it from Zoo. How can it be so well trained that too so soon...not to forget it's a lion!

Something seems not right!

***********

It is midnight !Piya is laying on her bed. Her stomach was paining badly as she hadn't eaten anything. Ofcourse she has come inside the house on request of her lion darling but she is still angry on her mother ! Piya is gonna stick to her strike of not eating or drinking anything for a week unless her mom seeks forgiveness from her darling.

Suddenly Piya heard footsteps outside her room. Piya quickly pulled the blanket on her head thinking it must be Madhu. She is not gonna open the door if she calls her.

Suddenly she hears a knock on her door...Piya doesn't respond. Again there was a knock...this time more loudly! Piya still doesn't respond.

And this time there was another knock and someone with Manly voice spoke- Piya open the door!

Piya removed the blanket from her and looked at the door shocked.

The voice again said- Piya open the door! I suppose you don't want to wake up your parents!

Piya sat on her bed quickly and gulped nervously...she stammered- W..ho..is there?

The voice-A.R.!

Piya confused- What?

The voice with crackle - Open the door and you well know who I am!

Piya thought for a while and got down from her bed slowly.

She approached towards the door worriedly.

The voice with little annoyance- I don't like waiting!

Piya took a deep breath and opened the door and got shock of her life as she found the mysterious man whom she met last night standing with tray of food smirking at her...HIS HYPNOTIC BLUE EYES GAZE WILL MAKE ANYONE WEEK JUST AT THAT MOMENT!

Piya completely stunned- YOU!


P.S Ignore The Mistakes Please !

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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