Drabble : She's Not Maithali. - Page 3

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Thank you so much, that's a huge compliment. PKYEK always had talented fanfic writers. Hope to see you around more often here😳

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

This was my first ever comment/post/read on this Forum :)

Lemme know if you write further, and I'll be sure to check it out!

Originally posted by: Rmuk

God Shreya this is truly a amazing piece of writing! Loved the way u have elaborated everything. Just perfect!!! In just few sentences u potryed Abhay's feelings, confusions, anger & his anguish so beautifully! Yes Piya is not Maithli & neither Abhay is Abhyendra now. He had transformed himself; not just into a creature of darkness but as someone else whose existence & love only belonged to his soulmate ie piya!!! You have written this drabble brilliantly dear!!! Do write such drabble's more. Would love to read them 😃

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

I do have several ongoing stuff. 😆That said, why don't you check out the Destroyed For Love one. It's on the main page. It's got to be one of the best here.😃

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

That was a very well written piece Shreya 👏 And it was very interesting to know how he felt for Pia when he first met her and when he acknowledged his feelings to her later In the beginning it was just the fact that she bore Metz face that pulled him to her and since he still pined for Metz he couldn help comparing Pia to Metz and getting annoyed with her coz she was nothing like that. And though he knew that she was nothing like Metz he could see how beautiful her heart was and that drew him to her and though he began realising that Pia is nothing like Metz he began falling for her too 😳 And then when he got to know Metz was back and saw what she had turned into, he couldn help comparing them again and this time also though Pia and Metz were different he loved Pia for she was Pia and not because she was a shadow of his former love 👏

Loved it Shreya 👏

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

Sure, I'll check it out right now! Thanks :)

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

This is brilliant and beautiful Shreya. beautifully portrayed Abhays feelings for Maithili and actually for Piya. totally amazing 👏

Originally posted by: sukuvivu

its brillient.
yup.she is not abhendras maithli bt abhays pia...so true.feelings r so true.

Originally posted by: vmpy

out of this world 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

wat a presentation n description of abhay emotions

i really imagined him thinking all dat,

the trail of thoughts n the transformation n journey frm she is not maithilli to piya isnt maithilli was awesome,awesome n awesome.

the whole scene flashed in my mind ,loved it shreya