Drabble : She's Not Maithali.

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sukuvivu

@sukuvivu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

its brillient.
yup.she is not abhendras maithli bt abhays pia...so true.feelings r so true.

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

out of this world 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

wat a presentation n description of abhay emotions

i really imagined him thinking all dat,

the trail of thoughts n the transformation n journey frm she is not maithilli to piya isnt maithilli was awesome,awesome n awesome.

the whole scene flashed in my mind ,loved it shreya

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: flora212
Shreya I just read both piya as well as abhay. And I realised I already read piya one before too😆 but I didn't coment there😛 but I am telling you here😆 ok I dont know how you write such a fantastically! Both are splendid. ⭐️ Piya one just clearly tell why she cant love someone other than abhay. And u know what before reading abhay one's I thought you are going to write why cant abhay loves piya cause she is Mathili😲😆 but trust me abhay one is totally different from piya. It is like piya does those things to him which Mathili didn't do to him🤣 and I love hiw you portrayed it. Very good job👏 btw can you write about Mathili pov like this if possible?

Nafi the last time someone requested me to write something it was 2 years ago. So maybe in 2015 you will get one on Metz POV I guess😛

thank you for appreciating though😳

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -R.P-
Such a beautiful description of emotions.👏It has so much depth into it.Though I am not into reading but this one caught my attention.Beautiful it is<3
BTW, what does drabble mean?

A very shot oneshot kind of thing.😛

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

brilliant os

loved how abhay in the first half was comparing her to maithili and trying to find faults in her so that he can keep her away...it was just written so well. abhay's anger,his frustrations on pia when she isn't listening to him was superbly written.

in the second half since abhay's feelings have changed and after meeting maithili he is kind of glad that pia isn't like her.

it's just awsum to read.superb job in writing abhay's pov.

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

O M G. 👏 👏 Shreya. Girl you're unbelievable. This was BEAUTIFUL, heart breaking & heart mending in its own way. I can't believe you wrote it for me. THANKS so much 🤗 Love you

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

It's been a long times since the show ended, and reading this had all those scenes flashing by my eyes. How time flies. I loved AbhIya, and now that I think of it, the first fan fiction I had ever read was of PKYEK, years back. This is honestly, way better. Brilliantly written, I loved reading this! :)

Edited by AzureLicht - 11 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: EternalAbhay
O M G. 👏 👏 Shreya. Girl you're unbelievable. This was BEAUTIFUL, heart breaking & heart mending in its own way. I can't believe you wrote it for me. THANKS so much 🤗 Love you

This is sort of my gift to you babe...for being there for me inspite of everything...I love you hun.🤗

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

It's been a long times since the show ended, and reading this had all those scenes flashing by my eyes. How time flies. I loved AbhIya, and now that I think of it, the first fan fiction I had ever read was of PKYEK, years back. This is honestly, way better. Brilliantly written, I loved reading this! :)

Thank you so much, that's a huge compliment. PKYEK always had talented fanfic writers. Hope to see you around more often here😳