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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update finally Abhiya are one loved the update but who were those friends of Abhay and what were they doing with him
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear !!!!

loved it :);)
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Posted: 11 years ago
was waiting for this moment only and finally they r together yaayy!!alina is so naughty..hehe..wonderful update di..abhiya hogaya, mishka hogaya ,ab sidina ki badi..update soon di
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing. finally he confessed. loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update .. just simply loved it ...
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res.
pata nhi unres. Kab hoga? LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was the best love confession i ever read in a ff. Hats off to u.
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Posted: 11 years ago
There you go again Shreya... YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN
A Very Mind Blowing, fabulous episode.
If some one asked me if I liked the 12th Sept episode from the show where they confess their love or
the one in this episode, I don't think I will come to a conclusion even if I spend hours pondering over this. Ofcourse show mein Abhiya - ViSu dekhne ko mile. In this FF, its just the fact that I dont get to see them on screen, but the feeling is much much much much more than I would get to see from the show.
It is very very perfect, so beautiful and very very hard to express

I think I should not be surprised after reading all your works and updates till now but I really cant help being surprised at every small details you work out -

First Piya's attire, she was dressed as Piyali right and hence she had to change before she reaches Raichand's home. When I first started to read the update, I was thinking what is all this about her attire and later cursed me at my own stupidity.
So Alina performed her magic to change Piya's dress. Hmm so did she have a wand - a 11 and half inches, Walnut and Unicorn hair heh heh just kidding.
She takes her to Haseena and looks like they had a plan of their own which was never formulated explicitly. I think Haseena thought that it would be the opportune moment for Abhiya to confess as the atmosphere is already created. With Abhay also getting to know the truth of Piya's memories, they needed a confrontation which they by themselves would never do and it had to be arranged.
Very well thought of Shreya. My first applause to you for this.

And then we have Alina volunteering to take Piya to the location of Abhay. After all, Abhay seems to have gone to one of the various estates of Raichands to have a rendezvous with two fellow vampires.
So what was he doing with them. Was it a kind of training or something of that sort. Luke expresses his delight on meeting a human after a long time. So are they not like the Raichands who live among with humans. Was this the emergency which Haseena tells to Abhay over the phone , asking him to come home, before the were wolves attack?
Luke and Natalya seemed to have some knowledge of Abhay's mate though they never assumed her to be a human. Abhay wanted to hide his feelings for Piya, fearing that the knowledge of this might be a risk to her. But looks like some news cannot be stopped.
This introduction of Lukas and Natalya (though brief) is very interesting.

Then comes the most awaited Abhiya's confrontation.
I dont think I could do any justice by reducing my feelings into words.
It took me almost a week to comment because I was (infact I am still ) in short of words.

You just dont create a situation, you make everything live in it. It is as if your every word dances alive in front of our eyes, sings into our ears and clarifies everything to our minds and leaves a great impact in our hearts. (I am so sorry for not putting the words right because I really dont know to express properly)

Simply Mind blowing confession.
When Abhay bursts out at her calling her a hypocrite, brutal, I felt this sudden rage towards him. I just wanted Piya to leave then and there. I wanted her to tell him that she had come as his mother was in a great state of worry that Abhay left home suddenly and Piya somehow held herself responsible for that. Thats all she had come for and he is free to think absolutely anything about her and that she is leaving.

I wanted her to leave then and there to tell to Alina, who is waiting outside, that she had enough of all these, She agreed to do things because she wanted her memories and now that she got them back, she cannot carryon any further as it is breaking her down in all ways and Alina can think of her as a coward or a cry baby or what ever and Piya wanted to back to her normal life as she cant take it any more.

Not that Piya would really move on so easily, but as an impulse because both Abhay and Alina were taking on her in their own ways. Sometimes they behave as if she is everything and sometimes they taunt her.

But then I felt that its really foolish of me to think like that because I am just seeing from Piya's POV

Abhay only knows that Piya was aware of his love for her before he took away her memories, Piya knew about the evilness of Sid and that he was an ally of Maithili. Now having got her memories back, he would have expected her to have a straight confrontation with him anything about their relationship. He would never have expected her to back to Sid and work with him knowing very well that he is a vampire who wanted to kill her. As he had confessed his love to her, he would never have suspected that she would have doubts about it.
So his feeling bitter and cheated that she kept the knowledge of her memory return from him, is very much justified.

Piya, on the other hand, had witnessed the intense love story of Abhayendra and Maithili even before she got back her memories, She knew the friendship of Siddharth before she remembered that he was an evil vampire who tried to kill her. So once she got back her memories, she still felt the friendship of Siddharth more than the fear of him and she felt that Abhay still loved Maithili and any feelings for her was just because she was a look alike of Maithili.
She was still the same old Piyali who silently loved Abhayendra and who sadly knew that it was Maithili who ruled the heart of Abhayendra.

Abhay was not at all aware of all these and hence he was shocked at the erroneous conclusion about him that he loved only Maithili and it was just a feeling of pity for Piya.
The realization of the fact that Piya believed him still to be in love with Maithili was explained very beautifully.

Thats why, this confession, I once again say, is really very very very beautiful, well thought of.

And if Reina wanted Abhiya to be united for some reasons, this was a very beautiful plot. So should the credit go to Reina or her creator Shreya. Yes it goes to Shreya, for Reina is neither the creation of CVs of PKYEK nor any actor and it 100% belongs to Shreya.

When once feelings are so intense, the nature also joins in bringing out its feelings. The confession, the thunder, the down pour - like everything in the universe is connected.
A standing ovation for this confession plot and the scene Shreya and a very big round of applause 👏

Its not because of the weather forecast, but I think Alina's instinct told her about the outcome of Abhiya's confrontation. And she wanted to have her own fun and the result of which is Piya's white top :-)

I know I am dumb of not guessing Reina's identity or if my mind still does not want to accept the fact that Alina is Reina but after today's episode, I want to accept that Alina is Reina after all.

First the plot of Abhiya's confrontation - as the atmosphere ( I dont mean the weather but the mental situation of Abhay and Piya) is perfect and the out come of the confrontation would only be the confession of their love for each other.

Later, the taste of the raindrops, as if the rain drops conveyed her exactly what happened between Abhiya and the indifference of Dishu - I mean that she had no idea of what happened to or between Abhiya , had me into accepting that Reina is none other than Alina.
Else we would have had a sentence that Reina smiled to herself and I would have thought if it could be Dishu...

Still the past of Alina is to be revealed and hence I will not ask more of Reina.

So now that Abhay and Piya are reconciled, what next. Will Piya tell him about Reina how she was actually sent into the past and she is Piyali and how she got back her memories or will she wait for the permission of Reina before she could tell him all this.
Will Abhay ask her when and how she got back her memories or if she knew something about Reina. If he does not get answers from Piya, will he ask Alina about this as he believes she is Reina.
Respecting ones privacy is one thing, but if it involves something about the person whom he loves most, it is something else right.

Thank you for a wonderful update Shreya. Thanks a lot for this FF.
I hope when you finish this, my craving for Abhiya would be satisfied.
I sincerely feel even the original show could not have given something more better.

Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
comment updated on page 18. 😊


@dishu rofl your's is the most apt one liner comment i have ever seen!🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

*hand raised* a question - who were those vmpy frnds of Abhay ??😆
As for the update it was eventful , for Alina it was a peaceful day and a day to cherish her victory , for Abhiya the day noticed one of their memorable, passionate intoxicated moments , where they finally cleared all the misunderstandings , promised their love, life and soul to each other for eternity . I love u for this hearty abhiyalicious update 🤗. Alina was fun this time 😆 ,and their was haseena and chand , finally they umm actually haseena took some action regarding abhiya 😛.



Good question...they will be introduced next chapter😆

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

4 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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