FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

839

Views

135.3k

Users

86

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Amazing update finally Abhiya are one loved the update but who were those friends of Abhay and what were they doing with him



Thanks. Next chapter you'll get some answers😆

Originally posted by: Bisweswar

was waiting for this moment only and finally they r together yaayy!!alina is so naughty..hehe..wonderful update di..abhiya hogaya, mishka hogaya ,ab sidina ki badi..update soon di


Hmmm...will Sid and Alina be a couple? I'm not sure...

Originally posted by: --VanityFair--

Amazing. finally he confessed. loved it.


thanks!

Originally posted by: -Monayaholic-

amazing update .. just simply loved it ...

thanks for pm



Thank you Bhamiti😳


bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

It was the best love confession i ever read in a ff. Hats off to u.


Thank you so much!
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

There you go again Shreya... YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN

A Very Mind Blowing, fabulous episode.
If some one asked me if I liked the 12th Sept episode from the show where they confess their love or
the one in this episode, I don't think I will come to a conclusion even if I spend hours pondering over this. Ofcourse show mein Abhiya - ViSu dekhne ko mile. In this FF, its just the fact that I dont get to see them on screen, but the feeling is much much much much more than I would get to see from the show.
It is very very perfect, so beautiful and very very hard to express


Thanks very much. It's an honour.😳

I think I should not be surprised after reading all your works and updates till now but I really cant help being surprised at every small details you work out -

First Piya's attire, she was dressed as Piyali right and hence she had to change before she reaches Raichand's home. When I first started to read the update, I was thinking what is all this about her attire and later cursed me at my own stupidity.
So Alina performed her magic to change Piya's dress. Hmm so did she have a wand - a 11 and half inches, Walnut and Unicorn hair heh heh just kidding.
She takes her to Haseena and looks like they had a plan of their own which was never formulated explicitly. I think Haseena thought that it would be the opportune moment for Abhiya to confess as the atmosphere is already created. With Abhay also getting to know the truth of Piya's memories, they needed a confrontation which they by themselves would never do and it had to be arranged.
Very well thought of Shreya. My first applause to you for this.

LOL,nope...wandless magic, nonverbal spells😆 Yes I suppose they had a plan of their own. They did talk on phone, after all.😉


And then we have Alina volunteering to take Piya to the location of Abhay. After all, Abhay seems to have gone to one of the various estates of Raichands to have a rendezvous with two fellow vampires.
So what was he doing with them. Was it a kind of training or something of that sort. Luke expresses his delight on meeting a human after a long time. So are they not like the Raichands who live among with humans. Was this the emergency which Haseena tells to Abhay over the phone , asking him to come home, before the were wolves attack?
Luke and Natalya seemed to have some knowledge of Abhay's mate though they never assumed her to be a human. Abhay wanted to hide his feelings for Piya, fearing that the knowledge of this might be a risk to her. But looks like some news cannot be stopped.
This introduction of Lukas and Natalya (though brief) is very interesting.

No, they do not live among humans. Yes, this was the emergency😳You will know more next update.

Then comes the most awaited Abhiya's confrontation.
I dont think I could do any justice by reducing my feelings into words.
It took me almost a week to comment because I was (infact I am still ) in short of words.

You just dont create a situation, you make everything live in it. It is as if your every word dances alive in front of our eyes, sings into our ears and clarifies everything to our minds and leaves a great impact in our hearts. (I am so sorry for not putting the words right because I really dont know to express properly)

Simply Mind blowing confession.
When Abhay bursts out at her calling her a hypocrite, brutal, I felt this sudden rage towards him. I just wanted Piya to leave then and there. I wanted her to tell him that she had come as his mother was in a great state of worry that Abhay left home suddenly and Piya somehow held herself responsible for that. Thats all she had come for and he is free to think absolutely anything about her and that she is leaving.

I wanted her to leave then and there to tell to Alina, who is waiting outside, that she had enough of all these, She agreed to do things because she wanted her memories and now that she got them back, she cannot carryon any further as it is breaking her down in all ways and Alina can think of her as a coward or a cry baby or what ever and Piya wanted to back to her normal life as she cant take it any more.

Not that Piya would really move on so easily, but as an impulse because both Abhay and Alina were taking on her in their own ways. Sometimes they behave as if she is everything and sometimes they taunt her.

But then I felt that its really foolish of me to think like that because I am just seeing from Piya's POV

Abhay only knows that Piya was aware of his love for her before he took away her memories, Piya knew about the evilness of Sid and that he was an ally of Maithili. Now having got her memories back, he would have expected her to have a straight confrontation with him anything about their relationship. He would never have expected her to back to Sid and work with him knowing very well that he is a vampire who wanted to kill her. As he had confessed his love to her, he would never have suspected that she would have doubts about it.
So his feeling bitter and cheated that she kept the knowledge of her memory return from him, is very much justified.

Piya, on the other hand, had witnessed the intense love story of Abhayendra and Maithili even before she got back her memories, She knew the friendship of Siddharth before she remembered that he was an evil vampire who tried to kill her. So once she got back her memories, she still felt the friendship of Siddharth more than the fear of him and she felt that Abhay still loved Maithili and any feelings for her was just because she was a look alike of Maithili.
She was still the same old Piyali who silently loved Abhayendra and who sadly knew that it was Maithili who ruled the heart of Abhayendra.

Abhay was not at all aware of all these and hence he was shocked at the erroneous conclusion about him that he loved only Maithili and it was just a feeling of pity for Piya.
The realization of the fact that Piya believed him still to be in love with Maithili was explained very beautifully.

Thats why, this confession, I once again say, is really very very very beautiful, well thought of.


Both Abhay and Piya had their own baggage and only by talking to each other they could clear it. Abhay had no idea that Piya believed he did not love her. Hence it was shocking for him to realise that. Thank you very much for liking the confession.



And if Reina wanted Abhiya to be united for some reasons, this was a very beautiful plot. So should the credit go to Reina or her creator Shreya. Yes it goes to Shreya, for Reina is neither the creation of CVs of PKYEK nor any actor and it 100% belongs to Shreya.

When once feelings are so intense, the nature also joins in bringing out its feelings. The confession, the thunder, the down pour - like everything in the universe is connected.
A standing ovation for this confession plot and the scene Shreya and a very big round of applause 👏


LOL, itna bhi nahi😆but thank you. That's very nice of you😳




Its not because of the weather forecast, but I think Alina's instinct told her about the outcome of Abhiya's confrontation. And she wanted to have her own fun and the result of which is Piya's white top :-)

Correct😉


I know I am dumb of not guessing Reina's identity or if my mind still does not want to accept the fact that Alina is Reina but after today's episode, I want to accept that Alina is Reina after all.

First the plot of Abhiya's confrontation - as the atmosphere ( I dont mean the weather but the mental situation of Abhay and Piya) is perfect and the out come of the confrontation would only be the confession of their love for each other.

Later, the taste of the raindrops, as if the rain drops conveyed her exactly what happened between Abhiya and the indifference of Dishu - I mean that she had no idea of what happened to or between Abhiya , had me into accepting that Reina is none other than Alina.
Else we would have had a sentence that Reina smiled to herself and I would have thought if it could be Dishu...

Still the past of Alina is to be revealed and hence I will not ask more of Reina.



It is my personal challenge to keep the mystery alive till the end..so no comments😆


So now that Abhay and Piya are reconciled, what next. Will Piya tell him about Reina how she was actually sent into the past and she is Piyali and how she got back her memories or will she wait for the permission of Reina before she could tell him all this.
Will Abhay ask her when and how she got back her memories or if she knew something about Reina. If he does not get answers from Piya, will he ask Alina about this as he believes she is Reina.
Respecting ones privacy is one thing, but if it involves something about the person whom he loves most, it is something else right.

Thank you for a wonderful update Shreya. Thanks a lot for this FF.
I hope when you finish this, my craving for Abhiya would be satisfied.
I sincerely feel even the original show could not have given something more better.


He will ask Piya first😉Thank you very much once again


bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 40


[Mature content. Not for youngsters.]

Maithali smiled languorously as she stretched, catlike, on the bed, watching Siddharth, who was now holding a goblet of blood in his hand, leaning back on his armchair. He smirked back at her. "We are so close," he said. "So close to victory..." Maithali laughed, a bright, carefree laugh that reminded him of a time long ago... "So they trust you now?" she said. "Ah, yes," said Sid. "Except, for my brother. He knows me well enough not to completely trust me...but he is getting there, too. I was always too good for him." "Poor Abhayendra," Maithali clicked her tongue. "You have caused him a great deal of trouble , haven't you, love? Yet he never learns his lessons." Sid's expression remained neutral, but his eyes sparked. "Yes," he said, quietly. "Yes, you could say I have a natural attraction to...trouble." He drained his goblet and walked over to her. "But why are we wasting time in idle chatter? The night is young , and so are we..."

Maithali smiled widely, exposing her fangs. Tugging at his collar, she pulled his body to hers, intoxicated by triumph and the knowledge that he was hers...he would always be hers... "I love you," she whispered, with more sincerity that she had ever felt before. Sid's eyes blazed, and she thought she saw a note of triumph in his eyes before he lazily ripped her gown in two. His hands and mouth brought her to greater heights of pleasure than she had felt for a very long time...




"So how did you know?" said Piya curiously, as the car sped up. Abhay turned to her. "The way you acted. I was almost about to bite you- and I knew you had seen my fangs- and Siddharth's , too. You didn't show any shock, fear, anything...the last time something like this happened, you freaked out in a big way..." She flushed and looked down. "I know. It was stupid and childish of me- but I wasn't thinking straight. And then I hated you for making it impossible to stay away from you..."

"I understand," said Abhay quietly. "I was angry, too. I'm sorry about all the things I said to you after that. It used to hurt me as much as it hurt you, every time..." "Why did you do it then?" said Piya. "Answering her own self, she replied, "Oh, right. To protect me. When are you going to stop doing that?" "Never," said Abhay. "I can't do that. And now, you're more at risk than ever...I must be mad." She noticed his furrowed eyebrows, and said almost wistfully, "If I were a vampire, then you wouldn't worry so much about me, would you?" "Yes, I would," said Abhay shortly. "But you're not a vampire, and I don't want you to be a living dead. So forget it right now, you understand?" She heard the underlying fear in his voice, despite his sternness, and she was touched. "Who were those people?" she asked, in an attempt to change the subject. "Lucas...and Natasha?"


"Natalya," he corrected. "They're both vampires, in case you didn't know. They're all right, I guess, but you still ought to be careful- as you should be with all vampires-" "Including you?" she interrupted, smiling. "Especially me," said Abhay unsmilingly. "You do realize that I came close to biting you- more than once? My control is horribly shaky these days when it comes to you. I told you that." "Yes, I know, and it's very flattering," said Piya. "Why should I be careful about that?" Abhay frowned. "Well, I don't know, Piya, but normal people are supposed to not want to be bitten, so you are supposed to be careful, you understand?" "But who told you I didn't want to be bitten?" said Piya softly. He turned to her, to see her eyes half closed as she gazed at him with raw emotion in her eyes that almost was his undoing. His focused on the road, his hands gripping the steering wheel. "Don't talk like that." "Why?" she asked with mock innocence. "Because- oh shut up," he said, sounding extremely frustrated. She felt a thrill go through her veins as she watched him. He wasn't even looking at her now, and she thought she knew the reason...



"So, Lucas and Natalya," she continued, as though the moment had not occurred at all, "What were you doing with them? Who are they, exactly?"

His face softened. "They...Luke is sort of...an ally." He glanced at her questioning expression and continued, "I don't know Natalya very well, but she is a powerful vampire- and a member of our Council. She will be our next Queen." "Council?" repeated Piya. "Like a ministry?" "Sort of,yes," said Abhay. "Anyway, so, she sired Luke...about eighty years ago. And the last time I saw Luke was in...1978, I think. " "So how did you become friends?" said Piya, interested. Abhay shrugged, giving her a quick smile. "Not really...an ally, I guess."

Piya stared at him. "Don't you have any friends?" "It's not like that, " he said quickly. "I-Alina is a friend, i guess. Although she's highly irritating at times. But I guess it's better this way. Having friends isn't good for me. I don't do relationships well- you of all people should be the best judge of that."

Piya couldn't help it.


She reached over and took his free hand; his fingers clasped around hers tightly. "So- anyway," continued Abhay after a pause, "I sort of ...helped Luke save Natalya's life. Nothing spectacular- don't look at me like that. And tonight I came to know that Natalya and Luke have been here for the past few weeks...well, I needed an outlet, and I was angry...Luke offered to fight a duel with me. You have rotten timing, by the way. If you'd just come five seconds later, I could have defeated him well and good-"

"So you were fighting him!" she exclaimed. "I thought so. But- just as- a game? Because you were angry?You need to have a cooler head, abhay. You could have got yourself seriously hurt-"

He snickered. "Listen to yourself, Piya.You're lecturing me on the merits of keeping a cool head and avoiding danger? Touche!" She flushed. "This isn't a laughing matter."

"Never said it was," said Abhay, in all seriousness. She opened her mouth to retort, but stopped as she realised she had rarely ever seen Abhay like this- amused, mildly teasing.

A wave of shame swept through her.Why, why had she caused them so much trouble? She should have talked to him, told him something- "Piya?" said Abhay. "Something wrong?" She looked back at him. "No. I'm happy, Abhay. I'm happier than I've been in ages...but- but I can't stop thinking- if only I hadn't acted like that- I could have spared us so much misery-"

"And if I had given back your memories, you wouldn't have to deal with all this," he countered. "So both of us acted like idiots. Even?"

Her face lit up in a sudden smile. "I love you. Truly and honestly, Abhay-"

"I know," he said quietly. "Although I swear I will never understand why."

"It's your family," she jibed. "Your mom loves me. We'd be great friends!"

"Oh yeah," said Abhay, rolling his eyes. "She thinks of you more than me. You should hear her sometimes-" "There's one thing I don't understand," said Piya, as a sudden thought struck her. "Why did Haseena aunty say you were angry with her?"

"She said I was angry with her?" said Abhay.

"Yes," said Piya. "She rang me up, and she said you had left home, and she couldn't go after you because you were angry with her. That's why I came..."

Abhay whipped around to stare at her. "Good God," he said in disbelief.


"I swear that woman is sitting idle too much these days." "Don't be mean," chastised Piya. " She was so worried you could be in danger-"

Abhay shook his head , rolling his eyes. "She told you and you believed that?" he said incredulously. "Even you must know that she lied so that you would come...she should take up a matchmaking job or something. Honestly!"

"That's sweet of her."

"That's interfering of her," corrected Abhay. "Yeah, no wonder you two get along." Piya laughed, throwing back her head on the headrest.

"I feel so happy," she told him, as lights began to appear. They had reached Dehradun. "Yes," said Abhay. "You look half drunk- which is an adorable look on you, don't take in any other sense, all right?"

"It really is true," she said wonderingly. "I didn't think it would happen...but we're together. For real."

Abhay smiled, too. "I know. I didn't think it would happen, either."

They lapsed into a comfortable silence.

Piya couldn't stop looking at him, drinking in the feeling of belonging with him. He's mine, she thought. And I am his. Now and forever...

"Here." Abhay braked the car to a halt outside her house. "Oh." She hoped her voice didn't show too much disappointment, but when she saw him smirk slightly, her hopes dashed. "Come on," he said, getting out and holding the door open for her. but Piya didn't want to go in. She wished she could stay right there... "Piya, come on," she heard him say. "I'll pick you up for college tomorrow."

Piya took his offered hand and got out, adjusting his jacket around her. It had stopped raining, and puddles glistened on the semi dark street. He walked her to the main gate.

But Piya stopped suddenly. Abhay looked back at her. She had an odd sparkle in her eyes. She looked at him and smiled innocently. and he wondered if he had mistaken the look in her eyes a moment ago. "What is it?" he said. "I forgot something, " said Piya. She cast her eyes down as if slightly upset. "I want to give you something."



Abhay stared down at her. He wasn't taken in by the innocent tone. "What is it?" He asked, his voice low and deep. She looked up at him, lips quirked in a mischievous smile. "Close your eyes," she demanded. He complied, because he had a shrewd idea what she was going to give him...

Piya reached up to touch his face. She ran her forefinger along his cheek. Then she stood on her topes and kissed him on the mouth. He remained motionless even as she drew back, his eyes were still closed.

"Well, goodnight, then," she said, turning to go. "That's it?" Abhay's quiet voice made her stop and turn bacl.

"Well,yes," she said, slightly confused. "What were you expecting?"

"Oh, I don't know," he said, casually snaking an arm around her waist and pulling her closer. "I would've expected something a bit more...like this." She had barely time to process what he meant when she felt his lips against hers.

He nibbled on her bottom lip, insisting on entry, which she granted readily, her hands on his chest. She felt his fangs extend, and he began to pull away. "No," she mumbled, pulling his head back to hers.

She ran her tongue along his fangs, and found herself pushed back against a wall. He released her mouth, his eyes indigo. She watched as he retracted his fangs, her own eyes dark with desire, as her breath came in short gasps.

His mouth latched onto her chin, moving down the column of her throat; she had to fight to keep her voice down. her palms ran over the hard planes of his chest through the wet shirt. She fumbled with the buttons on his shirt, her lips running over his earlobe even as he slid one sleeve of her wet top till her elbow, his fingers dancing over the heated flesh. She caught her hand as it reached the fabric covered curve, preventing him from moving any further. And then slowly, deliberately, she placed her lips on his chest.

"Piya-" his voice was hoarse.

"Yes?" she looked up, demurely, as if they were in the middle of a political discussion.

"Minx," he muttered, wrapping a hand around her head, pulling her head closer. Their lips had barely touches when Abhay suddenly grew rigid. He moved away light lightning, tugging her sleeve back to it's place, adjusting the jacket, zipping it up over her. "What-" she began, and then she heard it. The low hum of a motorbike, arriving closer. She stared up at Abhay, who was buttoning up his shirt, and flushed, realizing how close they had been to getting caught. "Yeah, that's Misha," said Abhay. "With Kabir. You really should-"

He broke off as she sneezed violently and looked horrified.

"Shit...I'm really sorry," he said apologetically. "You should go in- now. But Piya was staring with trepidation at Misha, who was taking off her helmet as she dismounted from the bike, Kabir in tow. "I should probably go," said Abhay quietly. "Your sister...she's worse than Alina at times." She nodded, just as Misha wolf-whistled. Abhay's lips twitched, but he said nothing, turning and walking back to his car even as Misha ran up to Piya. "Hi, Piya," said Kabir, walking up to her , a few paces behind Misha. "Heard you got back your memories. Why didn't you come to college?"

"I guess she had a hot date," said Misha slyly. "Look at the look on her face- just look at her, Kabir-"

"Misha!" said Piya and Kabir in unison : she in indignation, he in awkwardness. Fighting to stop blushing, Piya snapped, "Don't imagine things, Misha. Just because he dropped me home doesn't mean- I went out, all right? And it was raining, so he offered me a lift. It doesn't mean anything!"

"Oh no, of course it doesn't," said Misha, smirking. "The way your hair is looking doesn't mean a thing. Neither does wearing his jacket mean a thing-"

"Misha-" Kabir tried to speak, but she waved him away. He threw an apologetic glance at Piya. "But you know," continued Misha, "I really wonder at your speed. Didn't waste any time, did you? The minute you get your memories back-"

"Stop it, Misha!" said Piya, trying and failing to look unaffected by her teasing. "I'm going in."

She turned away from them and walked inside with as much dignity as she could muster. Misha's laughter followed her.



"Oh,you're back," said Haseena as he entered. "I thought you'd be late tonight." Abhay frowned at the knowing look on her face. "Mom, stop it."

"Be polite," chastised Chand, who was lounging on his favourite armchair near the fire, a goblet in his hand. He turned to face Abhay. "Especially since she has acted for your benefit."

Abhay shook his head, moving forwards. "Natalya was here," said Haseena. "Both her and Lucas. They were here-"

"Yesterday, I know," said Abhay. "They've been here for quite a few weeks. I met them today." "Oh, very well then," said Haseena. "We're invited to the Succession. I suppose you know that." She went back to her seat on the sofa, picking up the latest issue of Tatler.

Abhay went up to his own room, thinking of her smile when she had sat in the car.It still felt as though it was his imagination : she knew everything, and she was still happy, just because she was with him...He smiled ruefully as he unbuttoned the damp shirt, and pulled out another from his closet. A memory he would always carry with him was the way she had looked when he had held her. He knew he was being a fool, letting his emotions guide him- surely it would spell disaster for her. But he wasn't strong enough to fight himself anymore.He couldn't exist any longer without having her with him, smiling,happy... He never wanted to see her cry again.




"I want to know more humans," announced Luke.His foster mother looked up from her sketching of an elaborate necklace. "No, Luke," she said gravely. "I know meeting Piya Dobriyal has made you more curious, but don't forget that you have hardly ever interacted with humans. What if you lose control? Not only will humans die needlessly, but our credentials will be destroyed. The Succession is very near, you know."


Luke frowned. "But I won't go around biting people!" Natalya shook her head. "You don't understand. Luke, it's way past the time you were born. You wouldn't know how to converse with people in this day and age-" "That's not fair," said Luke indignantly. "I haven't even got a chance to talk to anyone yet. Besides, I've watched many movies, I know how to talk- how much more different can it be, really?" Natalya opened her mouth to retort, but she was distracted as her aide entered, bowing. "Your Highness, High Wizard Marcus of the Ophius clan requests a meeting with you immediately." Natalya's eyes showed surprise, before she changed it into a more neutral expression. She turned to Luke. "Fine then, you may go. But please be careful and return before daybreak."

Luke had never felt happier, as he walked out of the house, and in the streets of Dehradun. A few passersby glanced at the foreigner , but looked away. Tourists were quite common, after all. He felt slightly disappointed that none of them spoke to him, but then again, it would have been foolish to expect it of them. None of these humans knew him, after all. Nevertheless, it was lovely to be out of his house for something other than hunting. He inhaled deeply, smelling the many different smells around him. Flowers, paint, rainwater, mud...a dog. It was a dog on a walk. He had never understood why humans kept pets. Fruit,the fuel they used in cars- petroleum- something bitter he didn't know, ink...paper... "Ah!" The exclamation brought him back to his senses as he realized he had violently bumped into a young woman. The many books and folders she was carrying tumbled out of her arms and would have fallen on the wet road if he hadn't reacted swiftly, catching them before they had even touched the ground. "I do apologize," he started to say, then stopped. He could smell the woman's essence. She smelled of apple and vanilla- with a hint of something else. Lavender? Whatever it was, it was heady. "Thank you," she said politely. "Please do look where you're walking. It doesn't pay to be absent minded, you know." She began to walk away. "Wait!" The word was wrenched from him almost in spite of himself. She stopped. "Yes?" she said. "Can I carry those for you?" She looked very surprised. "Why? I assure you, I am perfectly capable of carrying them on my own." Shoot. He hadn't bargained for this. Didn't humans like to be helped? "I- um- I'm really sorry about what happened...I'd like to make it up to you..?" He trailed off, awkwardly. The woman stared at him as though he was slightly mad. "Do you not have anything else to do?" she asked him. "I-um-not really," said Luke. "I'm just...passing the time." She stared at him for a few seconds, then her face softened. "Very well then. You can help me carry these home."



"Father!" Natalya's face broke into a surprised smile, which lit up her entire face."Please-have a seat. What would you like to eat?" The wizard shook his head as he sat. "Nothing, Natalya. I merely came to congratulate you on the Succession. To be honest, I did not think I would hear of you like this. Where have you been all these years?" Natalya laughed.

"Here and there, Father...it's been a hard time building contacts in the vampire world...and then getting the council on my side...but then again, a High Witch converted to a vampire is way more powerful than a human converted to a vampire, isn't it? I think they like to know that they have a powerful head...and also, I saved one of them from a rogue vampire attack a year ago. Pity I couldn't kill her, but I'm getting there..."

Marcus smiled, his onyx eyes gleaming in the light. "My child." He reached to pat her hand. "It is heartening , even we may belong to different races now..that you still call me Father. Why not the vampire who sired you? You never tell me..."

"Because he was a sick b****** who converted me purely to use as his personal slave." The words, delivered in a clinically neutral tone, shocked Marcus, who uttered an exlamation of anger and horror. Natalya stared off into space, expressionlessly, but her eyes were dark with anger. "I did not wish to tell you, for this very reason. You will always be my Father."

She laughed suddenly. "Fool, that he did not know that I was not a mere mortal!I am a witch-a High witch. I could have stopped him, if he had not had the element of surprise-" "Where is he now?"hissed Marcus. "We shall kill him-"

"No need," said Natalya. She locked gazes with him. "He was killed, in this very city. Do not worry- he suffered. Oh, how he suffered!" She smiled in triumph. "What-but- but we alone cannot kill a vampire!"said Marcus. "You are forgetting that I, too, was a vampire then," said Natalya gently. "But in any case, you are correct. It was Luke's friend who killed him. The vampire helped us without asking for compensations...anyway, I tortured him, I weakened him. He did not die a painless death, you may be sure on that score, Father." Marcus nodded, though the fury has not completely left his face. "My child...why did you not tell me this before?" "I did not want to burden you," she shrugged. "Anyway, that chapter is dead and done with."


"So what have you come to India for?" said the woman, as she set off at a brisk pace, Luke beside her. "Business purposes, or a holiday?" "Uh-a holiday, I suppose," said Luke. "I- I'm actually visiting a few Indian...friends of the family." She turned to him, eyebrows raised. "And yet you wander the streets alone, and you say you have nothing to do?" Snap. She was sharp. What was he supposed to say now? "I- we're not really friends." The truth came tumbling out of its own accord."We, um, don't talk that much." The woman looked at him steadily, but her eyes softened, and she nodded, without commenting. "It's not that he's rude, you know," Luke continued. "It's just the way he is. Sometimes I wonder what went so wrong in his life...but he doesn't have any friends, I guess." "So...you consider him a friend, but he does not?" said the woman. "That is...curious." "Well, yes," conceded Luke, "but I admire him a lot. He has done me a huge favour..and I will always be indebted to him for that." "Make other friends," said the woman seriously. Up close, Luke could see that she was quite pretty. Not in a way that made him catch his breath, but in a way that warmed the coldness in his chest. He wondered how she would look smiling. "You're putting yourself in for a lot of hurt,"she continued. "You need to make new friends." "Will you?" She raised an eyebrow as she turned to look at him. "Will I what?" "Will you be-my friend?" She laughed, and it was then his breath caught; her laughter made her look very young indeed. "Friendships don't happen overnight! They grow over time." Seeing his disappointed face, she added, "Let's see. Maybe I will. And ...we've reached my house." Luke felt a pang of disappointment as she took her things from him and went to ring the bell. She glanced back to see him still standing in the same spot. "Well? Are you going to keep standing there? Don't you have to go to a hotel or something?" "You didn't tell me your name," he said. "You didn't ask," she replied simply. "What is your name?" he asked after a second's pause. She studied him for a moment. "Disha," she said finally- and then the door was opened by another woman. "What kept you, Dishu?" she began- then her eyes fell on Luke. "Oh, I see." "I'm Luke," he said. "He did me a favour, Alina," said Dishu in a trying-to-be-patient tone. "Well, goodnight, Luke," she said, turning to him. "And thank you." She strode into the house without a backward glance. Her companion studied him curiously for a moment before she shut the door.

Piya switched off the lights in her bedroom and turned on the lamp by the side of her bed. Chucking off her slippers, she climbed into a bed, and sat. She ran a comb through her damp hair, wincing slightly when its teeth caught on the tangled ends. She wondered about Abhay. What was he doing now? Talking with his parents, probably. Maybe with Alina. Or maybe he was reading. Would he be thinking of her? "Hi," said a quiet, amused voice in front of her. She jumped in shock, and let out a shriek before Abhay's hand covered her mouth. "Shh!" he hissed. "Do you want to invite the entire household over here?" He removed his hand. "The door," she said, panic in her voice. "The door- I have to shut it-" "It's shut and locked," said Abhay. "I locked it. I had an idea you would react like this- but your scream was louder than I'd thought." "I-" Piya was lost for words for a few seconds. "How did you get in? When-" He nodded to the open window. "A minute ago. You were thinking of something, so I didn't disturb you. You're cute when you concentrate. I like it when you smile." Piya smiled at him. "I like it when you smile, too," she told him. "And I was thinking of you, by the way." He smirked. "Of course. What were you-" But Abhay suddenly stopped speaking. Piya stared at him in surprise. She opened her mouth to speak, when there came a knock at the door. "Piya, angel? Are you all right?" Abhay moved to stand behind her the second Arnab's voice filtered in. "Ye-Yes,I'm fine, Dad," she answered, her voice slightly strained, hyper aware as she was of his hands snaking up her sides. "But you screamed," said her father. "Are you sure-" "Yes, Dad, I-" Piya broke off as his lips touched her bare shoulder. Her hands fisted, she gritted out, "I'm fine, Dad. It was just-" she struggled to think as his hand came from behind on her waist, then moved upwards, till it settled over her frantically beating heart. "Stop it," she hissed, struggling against him, but it was futile exercise. He simply swept her hair away from one shoulder and flicked his tongue against her earlobe. "Piya?" called her father. "Open the door, please." Piya had a good mind to go and open the door. Serve the idiot right. "I'm in bed, Dad," she called out. "I only screamed because I thought there was a cockroach on my pillow, but it only chocolate. That's all." "Oh," said her father, sounding relieved. "Well, goodnight then. Sweet dreams, angel."


She waited for a full minute before she tured away and punched him in the chest. "You idiot!" she hissed. "What in blazes were you thinking?"

"Was I?" said Abhay.Irony dripped from his tone. "No,I don't think I was."

She picked up her pillow and smacked him with it. "You did that just to watch me squirm!" she hissed. "Voice down,Piya, or your dad will come running here, searching for snakes and cockroaches," he quipped. "And this time, I'll make you scream, not squirm."

Piya paused mid-blow as his words registered. Hot color rushed to her cheeks and she turned away from him. "Was that why you came here? To tease me like this?"

"Hey." His hand touched her arm; she jerked it away. "I'm sorry. That was too far. I didn't mean to upset you."

Piya smiled secretly. Aloud she said, "No, you're not sorry. You came here just to torture me!"

"Piya, no," he said gently, turning her around to face him. "I'm sorry. I just wanted to talk to you, honestly...and ..I don't know what came over me."

Piya couldn't help but giggle. "I'm not upset. I just wanted to make you apologize."

Abhay shook his head. "You'll make me start ageing. I swear, Piya-"

She giggled. "You'd still have girls swooning over you," she told him. "Maybe you could date some of my aunts or something, then-"

"That's enough," interrupted Abhay, looking highly displeased. "Go to bed."

"Oh, all right."she said resignedly. "Which side do you want?"

"What?" said Abhay. "Oh, no, I don't need to sleep. You can take any side you want."

"You're not staying?" she said, looking disappointed. "Do you want me to?" he asked.

"Well, obviously," she replied. "But that's okay. You can go if you want."

"Oh, fine," said Abhay. He got in , and Piya cuddled up to him. "I guess I asked for it," he muttered, more to himself.

"What did you ask for ?" said Piya in surprise, looking up at him. "Oh, nothing," said Abhay. "You know that word you were using before? Yeah. Torture."

PS. So what did you think? Too mushy? I really hope not.😛

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 11 years ago
FantasyFan_8 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
I wonder what is Sid upto. Whom exactly is he playing games with and on whose side he really is?

Natalya's story was interesting, and as for Luke and Dishu, I liked the way you are building them up. Btw does Alina know or atleast can she sense that Luke is a vampire? and what about Luke? Did he sense Alina?

Abhiya part was nice, but ye dil maange more...😛
Edited by ..Bournville.. - 11 years ago
.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
EDITED

Thats some long and beautiful update. I love abhiya moments. I always love to see them happy, even in the show as their happy moments are very less it just melts my heart when i see both of them together happy. it was really nice and NOT mature at all. it was sweet, passionate and not mushy. I was expecting Abhay will come to see Pia again in her bedroom thanks for making my imaginations true 😛 😆 omg haseena... what a mother and she really made it happen 🤣 coming to Luke and Dishu i really liked their scene. at first i thought Luke and natalia are couple but it seems they are just friends or frm same clan but not really couple so there's a possible angle for Dishu and Luke i can see. Alina should know Luke is a vampire isnt it? she is such a powerful witch and wolfie so she should know I suppose to feel the aura or something? smell? Natalia and her dads convo was scary to me. donno y i see dangers ahead and i didnt understand everything. guess i need to read more about them to get myself clear. Sid and Metz were hot.. wat is Sid lying about. seriously dont betray your family again Sid.. please just dont.

fabulous... 👏
Edited by .SmokeySilence. - 11 years ago
AVELINA thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
15 ? oh..really? like really? it was not even near to that line madam...i am confused about Sid...what is he? and my gutter mind wanted some serious 15 abhiya scenes...:-P:-P but u...:-(...u made me angry...by breaking my abhiya dreams...hate u...:-(:-(:-P
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samwllms

15 ? oh..really? like really? it was not even near to that line madam...i am confused about Sid...what is he? and my gutter mind wanted some serious 15 abhiya scenes...:-P:-P but u...:-(...u made me angry...by breaking my abhiya dreams...hate u...:-(:-(:-P


Well I am sorry since I guess I grew up too late and I don't know that people these days mature faster than I did😛the rating has been removed. So you can stop hating me😛 maybe I'll try and make it up to you guys someday.


Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 11 years ago
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Madam, iss essay ke liye aapko uchit inaam milega😳😳
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

I wonder what is Sid upto. Whom exactly is he playing games with and on whose side he really is?


Natalya's story was interesting, and as for Luke and Dishu, I liked the way you are building them up. Btw does Alina know or atleast can she sense that Luke is a vampire? and what about Luke? Did he sense Alina?

Abhiya part was nice, but ye dil maange more...😛


Zyaad mat bolo. Bohot mahino se I'm planning something, I don't want to cut it out now so be niceee Dishu😉

Sid is having a nice time like me😈

Related Topics

Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani Thumbnail

Posted by: Susmitasumi96

4 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".