Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20-- - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey their is going to more parts i thought u end it in 2nd part... and u knw wat at the end of 1st part i thought that man was abhay but with d start of this part i proved wrong...

by d way intererting story... plz update next part soon...

thanks for commenting. :)
yes I said i will end it in two more parts,that means in next part.😊 I have the whole story in mind bt to end it i might need 1 or 2 updats more as u see..it dsnt always come out the way we plan.😊
hm...so then i surprised u! Good in a way, else what fun is there if the story is predictive. Isnt it?😉
will try to update as soon as i can. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

beautiful update❤️

thanks. Juhi is there any confusion? If so..You can ask me anytime dear.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Syed695

Lovely Update..!! Beautifully Written..Thanks for the PM!

thanks for reading dear. 😊Glad you're liking it. welcome.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
oh I feel so sad for Piya..you described her loneliness and desolation very well and also her disgust for the many men who saw her as an object.
Is the library in the west wing near Abhay's rooms?



Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
nice update
i feel so bad for pia...why abhay doing this to her?
n anita wants her to see abhay thats why she is asking her to go in west wing...right?
waiting for abhiya meeting...whatever be the reason of abhay's behaviour but please make pia slap him tight for once for being like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
very nice update eagerly waiting to read abhay real story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
res...
will read and comments later... a bit busy now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
omg wt an update👏..cant wait for long pls update soon😃..really it was so so so nice👍🏼..thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya

Wht is abhay's problem? Poor piya. Nice update. Thax fr pm.

Abhay has a past bt the problem is he associates everything with that. It has made him stubborn.
you're welcome.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
fab update
pia's pain and everything she is feeling is portrayed so well by you..i really feel sad for her.
her b-i-l suck and it's shame men like him exists in real life also.
adonis looks like a nice men ...i do hope he would help reduce the distance b/w abhay and pia.
her m-i-l has tried to take a first step in bridging gaps b/w abhiya and therefore she is literally forcing pia to go to library.is she genuine or up to something.
all in all an amazing update.

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