Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20-- - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Im extremely sorry for unresing so late but you know how my life runs now so again very sorry. what a update. i love this OS so much. i told you many times and i donno even if i say again it would be justice with the standard of your work or not but the way you play with your words is always mesmerizing and poetic. poetic is the word apt for how you write, express the feelings of your characters. I felt so bad for Pia. she is living in where - nobody is close to her heart and she is in loneliness. poor her and nobody treats her much good. and Abhay, i really wanna know whats the real deal about him. why did he married her in the first place. Pia's reason understandable but im eager to hear about Abhay too. she sent her gifts and Abhays servant has kept all that. wow. that was really impressive. again saying the way you write about Abhay...nobody does Indu..nobody. i dont have words to praise you 👏
waiting for next update eagerly.. and sorry for the short comment..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
this is nice work... i just now read part1 and sad 4 pia and her lonelyness...


plz update next part soon...
Edited by trishnawaliya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter updated. pm's later. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: captainplus

nice update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

piya's emotions were beautifully xplained 😊 thanks dear. 😳
is the libray anywere near abhay's room 😕
mm..i guess so..😉
wat xactly is abhay's problem ? 😡
you will know that.
update nxt part as soon as possible 😛
tnx in advance 4r the pm 😊

next part will be updated soon! welcome dear. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

this is nice work... i just now read part1 and sad 4 pia and her lonelyness...


plz update next part soon...

thanks for liking dear. i am glad you read it. 😳
i thought you have lost interest in my works. but glad to see u here. 😊
next part updated! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey their is going to more parts i thought u end it in 2nd part... and u knw wat at the end of 1st part i thought that man was abhay but with d start of this part i proved wrong...

by d way intererting story... plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Update..!! Beautifully Written..Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wht is abhay's problem? Poor piya. Nice update. Thax fr pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update , feeling sad for pia n u really described pia emotion in excelkent way , but i don't understand what problem with abhay , till now he not accept pia with bottom of heart , thanks for pm n continue soon
it was best gift on abhiya aniversary 🥳 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Indu...tum itna mast kaise likhti ho yr...our each one writer is amazing...u ppl r fab!!

coming to update...its was fabulous ...well done n the way of writing feelings the inner darkness...each movment u wrote really awesome...i love ur way of writing Indu...!!
m really feeling much sad for pia...she did everything for her family n now here...itni alone...no na...the only darkness is with her...n her mother-in law she is kind i think...

now abhay...samjta kya hai vo apne aap ko...y he is behaving like this with pia...is there any reson...kasm se...m angry on him...bechari pia...abhi kuch unfold nhi hua hai..m waiting to know the reason why abhay behving like this...n hope abhiya meeting is happening in next update...plz Indu...I want to see their interaction...kya bolenge vo...i want pia to confront him...!!

eagrly waiting for next update...Plz Indu update soon soon na...I want to read further...plz update soon!!

Edited by sukugeny - 11 years ago

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