New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)

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sukuvivu

@sukuvivu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

hey di.i read ur this story.
fab story.loved all updates.
slowly reading ws waiting...ab hoga..tb bt it vl in nxt update.u wrote so AWESOME.waiting fr nxt part .updat soon.

really like ur hard wrk of writing

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Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

abhay is so lonely😒 poor him...and has to suffer so many disgusting things😡...ya really they actually strangely similar😛but did abhay bring her in his apartment??is he really that jerk😕..btw awesome update 👏continue sooon😃

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

another amazing update .To say that the story gets more interesting with every update would be an understatement tanzie.

lvd how pia literally told him on his face that he is too lonely and i can understand why abhay is like this after everything he has endured. actually there's no one to care for him and everyone he trusted has betrayed him.

i hate men who treat women like garbage and pia's client was a terrible men.feel bad for her too as even though she hated these things still she has to bear all of this . the restaurant scene was lovely.it was good and light hearted.

i hate farzia!!!

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_Tangled_

@_Tangled_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Amazing update..!!
Story is so interesting both Abhiya are so diff and mysterious loving it..!!

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Tanzie soo lovely update dear🤗...Abhiya moment soo sweet...waiting for next Abhiya meeting with a toxic affair😉...continue soon

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

tanz i didnt read this story except the first chappy.😊...and i didnt read the chappys which u recently updated of other stories!! the reason is i am extremly busy with my studies and i dont get time enough to come online and read!!😭 i am sorry but dont stop pming me...i will surely read when i get time!! u know that i love ur stories😳sorry again

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Awesome Chapter so Pia knows Abhay is lonely and he is not accepting it but I think both has started liking each other's company. Waiting for the next update eagerly.

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DestroyedInLove

@DestroyedInLove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Amazing update 👍🏼
ohh!!poor abhay😔kitna akela hai!!!felt bad for him..😒
love all abhiya scenes..😃
oh god!!Farzia is too much..hating her.

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

superb update
liked it very much
it is very close to reality...you have shown the reality, power games, tricks, emptiness of glamour world aptly. when you mentioned about farzia i could easily imagine that kind of women working in a corporate house...your writing, the plot of the story...characterization of abhiya...everything is very believable.
liked the abhiya date n convo...both are lonely ...hope they find some solace in each others company.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#200

hey dear one like from my side... plz dont mind like button not working...

anyway its really great update feel like i am live watching story thanks to ur writing... hey one thing i want to say i dont get y u called farzia khan a villan as u already mention earlier that every character of this story, even leads too have flaws then how could farzia charcter left out its just i feel she is more evil then other and the way everyone think of their own benifit if farzia take advantage of herself 4...

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