New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)

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Anon

@raintrifle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Tanzie di , the story is really turning to a whole lot of realistic tracks , i really liked the developments in the story . Abhay and Pia convo in the japanese restaurant and in abhay's apartment ... loved that .. always love it 😉😳 . looking forward for unveiling of PIA's life history and Farzia khan track eagerly . 😃 Another awesome update didu ⭐️

Edited by withered - 11 years ago

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Mousumi

@-Chinky-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

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Me 2nd ! :-o
See I was telling you. Miracles happen.. 🤣

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Now don't kill me for saying this but I am not sure if this will replace BD as my most fav FF 😆 I had this feeling from the time u started it! Bad Tanzie 😆 U shook my unwavering loyalty for BD 🤣 This update was fantastic 👏 Ur best thus far for this FF ⭐️

I suppose u have ppl like Farzia in every walk of life 🤢 n I perfectly relate to that character as its real for me. I may not be in glamor industry but seen enough of this crap already pretty closely n its equally disgusting. I loved the way u reflected on Abhiya's thoughts n their date was such a pleasure to read. I could imagine two people chatting over dinner, teasing each other n the scene played out in my head. I can see the spark igniting to a blazing fire 😃 n I am excited to see the toxicity in the relation 😳 Do continue when u get the time.

Coming to ur note, its ur story, so its ur call to make - to turn into SS or a full fledged FF. Am no one to say anything but I will gladly read anything u write. As for the no. of likes, to say I am a lil shocked would be an understatement 😕 I know the no. of likes matter to any writer n for that matter they do to me as well but u know most of them have moved on to other forums or quit. About the silent readers, to this day I am not able to figure out what stops them from hitting a like atleast if they dont wish to comment 😕 But for no. of views, u cannot equate it to no. of comments. Dont get me wrong n I am not saying u dont have anonymous readers who dont even bother to hit a like but the fact is many readers tend to re-read or read other readers comments too. Every time a page of the thread is hit, the count increments by one. Say I open it n browse through 10 pages, no of counts increases by 10. But if all that matters is a count of 50, then what about readers like me who eagerly await ur updates? If u dont wish to continue for some or the other reason I still have something to hope for n I will wait for ur book. Beyond this I wont say anything else.

Edited by ..mandy.. - 11 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Finally got some time to write... half done... promise will end it within this week and post 😃

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

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character sketch of Farzia Khan is vry well written 👏 👏 👏 abhiya convo in Japanese restaurant ws nice.. cnt wait 4 nxt :))

Edited by Fearless_Lover - 11 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

WOW!! Another stunning update!!!👏
the story is getting into interesting turns and each update makes the reading more intriguing!⭐️ nt exaggerating tanzie bt the characters and their respective style quotent makes the update charming to read! Its crisp and very very sharp! I am completely loving it.❤️
especially in the last part abhay's text convo was soo wonderful! His sarcastic words n at times sad n humorous-talk are nothing but simply a joy to read!👏
And like i said before pia is different here and very very interesting portrayal of female character and i am waiting to get amazed by her again n again! 😳 She is that kind of a character whch i belev never ceases to amaze the reader,no matter how many chapters the story had crossed.
and the quote u gave at the beginning gives a wonderful insight to this update!! Alltogether Superb update ⭐️ and ya loved 'fire' very much!! 😳
p.s. I am late again and for that am really sorry. But i dnt miss reading ur updates tanzie..i am late bt i will always cum!😊 And again sorry for this short comment.
p.p.s. Thanks a lot for pm and giving updats inspite of ur tight scedule. Take ur time tanzie..we understand and as ur loyal reader we can always wait.🤗

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Gosh Tanzi !! How I heart this FF !! But then, that's the case with ALL your works 👏 👏 👏 Am serious , publish your books asap

Hey , You don't have to cut down on office scenes or anything for that matter.. Its u who knows better than us which scenes are required and which not.. So do what u feel should be done 👍🏼

I liked the way how u wrote about Pia not gaining much weight easily 😆 Cause that's the case with Suku in real 😆 I think she wants to reach a stage where phoonk maarne se bhi voh udd jaaegi 😆

And to answer u in ur reply to me on my comment on Chap 3 , I am doing jus fine 😃 How abt u ? ( Except the torture ur office has become for u )

Edited by EternalAbhay - 11 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

wow great story plz update soon

it's awesome

thanks for the pm

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Very nicely done Tanzie. So a bit about Abhay's background...and I do feel bad for him. Pia is right, he has no life.

PS. Dont mind but in the precap when you said about doing the deed I actually thought of a burglary first. :P