New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 22

Originally posted by: withered

Tanzie di , the story is really turning to a whole lot of realistic tracks , i really liked the developments in the story . Abhay and Pia convo in the japanese restaurant and in abhay's apartment ... loved that .. always love it 😉😳 . looking forward for unveiling of PIA's life history and Farzia khan track eagerly . 😃 Another awesome update didu ⭐️

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Now don't kill me for saying this but I am not sure if this will replace BD as my most fav FF 😆 I had this feeling from the time u started it! Bad Tanzie 😆 U shook my unwavering loyalty for BD 🤣 This update was fantastic 👏 Ur best thus far for this FF ⭐️ I donno im very dissapointed with response. maybe such realistic stories arent for IF. i might shift this to wattpad.

I suppose u have ppl like Farzia in every walk of life 🤢 n I perfectly relate to that character as its real for me. I may not be in glamor industry but seen enough of this crap already pretty closely n its equally disgusting. I loved the way u reflected on Abhiya's thoughts n their date was such a pleasure to read. I could imagine two people chatting over dinner, teasing each other n the scene played out in my head. I can see the spark igniting to a blazing fire 😃 n I am excited to see the toxicity in the relation 😳 Do continue when u get the time. Thank you. n farzia is like my higher boss. too much like her 🥱

Coming to ur note, its ur story, so its ur call to make - to turn into SS or a full fledged FF. Am no one to say anything but I will gladly read anything u write. As for the no. of likes, to say I am a lil shocked would be an understatement 😕 I know the no. of likes matter to any writer n for that matter they do to me as well but u know most of them have moved on to other forums or quit. About the silent readers, to this day I am not able to figure out what stops them from hitting a like atleast if they dont wish to comment 😕 But for no. of views, u cannot equate it to no. of comments. Dont get me wrong n I am not saying u dont have anonymous readers who dont even bother to hit a like but the fact is many readers tend to re-read or read other readers comments too. Every time a page of the thread is hit, the count increments by one. Say I open it n browse through 10 pages, no of counts increases by 10. But if all that matters is a count of 50, then what about readers like me who eagerly await ur updates? If u dont wish to continue for some or the other reason I still have something to hope for n I will wait for ur book. Beyond this I wont say anything else. its not just about likes. i have always continued my stories for my regular readers but i have noticed even my most regular readers arent really liking this one. maybe its too realistic for IF, or the subject n ppl are just too controversial. thats y i will probably shift n see the response somewhere else. since i THOUGHT its a good story to publish n looks like other thn me nobody thinks that, i need to judge it wisely n see readers response.

Originally posted by: Fearless_Lover

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character sketch of Farzia Khan is vry well written 👏 👏 👏 abhiya convo in Japanese restaurant ws nice.. cnt wait 4 nxt :))

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Very nicely done Tanzie. So a bit about Abhay's background...and I do feel bad for him. Pia is right, he has no life.

PS. Dont mind but in the precap when you said about doing the deed I actually thought of a burglary first. :P