New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update tanzie ... mind blowing
liked the dog name fire 😃 ...
abhay have problems with his parents ... hmmm so metz is abhay ex definitely he was interested in her want to know more about that ...
misha will be broken when she will knws her dad affairs ...
awww loved the msg conversation between abhiya ... wondering did piya really kissed abhay ??? 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update tanzie..
Absolutely loved their 2nd meeting! The flirting..dance..everything. And was abhay just kidding or did piya really kiss him ? :P their phone chat was cute too..! Amazing job as usual 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

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wheee I am first I am first :D :P

Now then. Update was one hell of an entertainer. I do so love AbhIya's interactions here. Well written Tanzie :D
Good god, Abhay is persistent! I'm sure he'll be rewarded for it soon :P
As for Piya- I'm wondering if she's developing a real liking for him. From the way you wrote it felt as though she might...
Anyways, awesome update, I loved it, and I love Fire! Can we have more of her please ;)


Thank you and congo on being the first one 😆. this FF will have a lot of drak humor. yes he will be rewarded soon and it will have deep impact on Pia 😛
hmmm no not for now. she is amused and he is too. he needs him because he is lonely in the crowd and popularity he has and she is as broken as he is. but he doesnt know that till now. neither does. and when they will find out its jus perfect to heal each other 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nidu-dsena

awesome tanzie..
loved abhiya convo 😳


Thanks Nidu.

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

abhay's displeasure was hilarious 😆


and wow they meet again, good good 😊
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Thanks Dishu. offcourse they have to meet again 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -SanaLuvAbhay-

Awesome update... loved deir mssg convo d most !!


Thanks a lot Sana... glad u liked it

Originally posted by: sukugeny

aww Tanz. ...its awesome update..dailogs r fab.
loved start n then FIRE...name bhi kitna mast hai..fire.. i loved her..u know the names f drinks...then i can c abhiya attracted.bt nt completly..bt soon they will...hasina n abhay convo..following u..was gr8. i lov akdu abhy...
abhy ko pia ka numbr mila smart move..
finally they r gng to meet soon.n m eagrly waiting fr tht..yup.
plz updte soon


Thanks a lot Geny. Fire was my ex-boss's dog. he had her for 10 years and he really lvoed her. last month Fire died. it was a tribute to her. they have to meet more. thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

awesome update didu.
fire's track was mindblowing 😃. although i think ki girls love dogs , they dont get scared from them , but anyways pia ka reaction dekhne layak tha. 😆
abhiya are gonna meet again, yipeee...😳
btw, abhay pia mein se kis ko ek doosre ka raaz pehle pata chalega.?😉
omg, abhay ko 90's ke songs pasand hai . why 20's ke kyun nahin? .😲


Thanks Ayushi. Fire was my boss's dog. she died last month.not all girls love dogs. im not that fond of dogs either.. i like cats more 😛
who will know first wait and watch u will know.
90s ke means. 1990's era songs. rock and pop when micheal jackson was really famous. doesnt mean 90 yrs old song..

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani

Awesome update👍🏼love it, spcially abhiya convo.
Loving this different pia😊


Thanks a lot Ishpa.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

u knw tanzie what i like most the scene when fire jump on pia... omg and she call her monster... heehaaaeee i still imagining that part pia under fire and abhay saving her... she is really cute though sad in her life...by d way i amd pitiy misha, arnav keeping her in dark and kabir hideing but any way he is also not any saint... by d way when are u planning to introduce misha's brother...


Thanks Trishna. Fire was my boss's dog. he used to love her a lot. he has her for 10 years but she died last month :( When Arnav and Kabirs truth will come infront of Misha. it will be shattering. yes will introduce Misha's brother later. now he is not needed. Im deciding whether to make him one imp character that is pending or i shouldnt. will introduce after i decide.

Originally posted by: vmpy

a super duper awesome update tanzie.loved it.piya n abhay r slowly getting closer though they feel it or not.da way piya jumped n then she called abhay a monster.so da affair is going to start soon.n toxicity will cm later on.thanx fr pm will b waiting eagerly to knw more about them setting each other on fire.

tanzie BD ka last update😲 😒😭
thanx fr da schedule


Thanks a lot Aqib. she didnt call Abhay monster, it was for Abhay's dog 😆 their formal affair no wont start so soon.
I have to end BD. all good things come to an end.:(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

this is the 1st chap I read on this ff and I loved it😃
gr8 concept
liked this chap very much😆
liked the doggy Fire😆
owww but Pia is a hooker😲...I was really shocked
waiting for more updates
u didnt pm me


Thank you and welcome to this FF as well 😆 fire was actually my boss's dog. she died last month. yea the story is diff and pia is an escort. i knew people would be surprised. I was wondering if they will accept it or not. gladly they did.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update tanzie.

their convo was awsum.
looking forward for their next meeting.
alina was feeling lonely but it's her choice so she would have to live with that.


Thanks Megha. yes there would be more meetings so slowly make AbhIya understanding strong. Alina choose her life, nobody told her to do it. thrs diff sort of people in this ff. all good and bad.. like real life. thats how i wanted to write it but everyone has a reason.

Originally posted by: mire220

It is a wonderful story Tanzie!!!


Love it...

pls pm me :) i want to read moreee ... Thanks ;)


Thanks dear. added to the PM list and welcome to my thread 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

I am so sorry for unreserving late U know how busy I had been last few days. Tanzie its perfectly all right dear 😳 Take ur time. Update when u get the time. I understand how difficult it is to juggle between work and personal life 😭 Ur FFs are worth the wait 😃 Thanks Mandy. u can wait and not everyone will wait for that long. the response number decreasing clearly says that.😆

Coming to the update, yes it was short 😛 but entertaining nonetheless 😃 I so loved the quote btw 🤣 True guys can't think much anyways 😛 You know how much I love dogs n thanks for having Fire in the story 🤗 Golden retrievers r my fav 😳 Even my friend's dog Scotch is a retriever n poor thing is so timid but ppl r terrified of it bcoz of its size 😆 But its such a beauty It was fun to see Pia being terrified of Fire 😆 I suppose Pia found it hard to overcome the shock that she had landed in somebody else's bed for the entire night when her job entailed her just to amuse her clients and go away from there. I am wondering as to why Abhay brought Pia to his parent's home 😕 And by the looks of it Pia wasn the first girl he brought. Abhay being the gentleman he was offered her breakfast but Pia didn't wish to break her protocol 😕 He also offered her money though unlike other clients he didn use her to satisfy his needs but he had taken her time. So it was only fair that her work hours didn go a waste. Fire was my ex-boss's dog who died last month. will tell about her in note ext update.he unconsciously came to his hom bcoz he missed his home offcourse but his relationship with his mother is too bitter. Pia dont do breakfast or anything more than business with her clients. she keeps it strictly professional. try to understand she didn choose this profession. its her helplessness. she hates it and she hates all the men who are her clients as well and how they treat her. she isnt used to with offers of breakfast to take it lightly. if someone does she will probably end up thinking they are faking bcoz she isnt used to get the nice behavior.
I donno if I shd feel bad or get mad at Alina 🤔 But I do understand her situation. Reminded me of PC and Arbaaz in Fashion. She doesn exactly love Arnab as she in the relation only to reap the benefits but somewhere the woman in her is bound to feel humiliated when she realises she is nothing but a keep she wants fame and fame as always a price to pay
I feel there's a lot unsaid between mother n son Donno y but I kinda have my doubts on Abhay's father. Am not saying he is bad but was he really the person he believed him to be? Abhay seems to despise Haseena but there could be more to the truth than what actually meets the eye or maybe its just me thinking too much 😛 Haseena mentioned Metz which means she was his first love and something has gone dreadfully wrong judging Abhay's reactions yes you are thinking too much. I told you before not everything has double meaning i write so stop thinking too much between the lines 😆 i will write about metz and abhay later and Chand has no problems. he was a nice guy. for once i decided to make a positive character.
Misha's restlessness was described very well 👏 She has been hearing abt Arnab's affairs but being a doting daughter she ignored them but for how long? 😕 She knows the pros n cons of being a part of the glamour industry n most of the times its just rumours but she also knows that deep down some part of it will always be true as its world of deceptions, lies and facades where everyone hides behind a mask either to shield themselves or cover up their misdoings. She is now doubting Kabir n I guess its only a matter of time before she realises that her bff is her dad's girlfriend she will know much later. not no.
Whom was Pia sending the money to? I presume its her family 😕 I loved Abhiya's text chatting 😆 It was really cute. Loved the way he convinced her to come out with him. Pia agreed reluctantly though she ensured it was some sort of official meet up 😉 I am so eagerly waiting for next chapter 😃 The title is intriguing to say the least. whom Pia was sending the money u will know with time.
Loved the update as usual 👏 Dont stress urself. Write when u get the time. I am willing to wait 😳 thanks you so much.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

awesome update...fire scene was hilarious...loved abhiya msg convo...nice update...thanx for pm😳


Thanks ekta. glad u liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: EternalAbhay

I love this FF , Tanz ! It is sooo close to reality !


To whom did Pia have to submit the money to ? I mean , you wont really answer it cause it ll kill the suspense but I'm guessing ita for someone close to her.. And may be for the same she has to do the job she's doing.. Looking forward to the next chapie 👍🏼


Thanks Pavi.. hows u? you are right i cant answer it now but you will know with time. yes the same reason she has to do this job. thanku for commenting 😳

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