New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

loved the update to the core and abhiya conversation on the text was the best part

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

amazing update tanzie.

their convo was awsum.

looking forward for their next meeting.

alina was feeling lonely but it's her choice so she would have to live with that.

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mire

@mire220

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

It is a wonderful story Tanzie!!!

Love it...

pls pm me :) i want to read moreee ... Thanks ;)

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

awesome update...fire scene was hilarious...loved abhiya msg convo...nice update...thanx for pm😳

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

I love this FF , Tanz ! It is sooo close to reality !

To whom did Pia have to submit the money to ? I mean , you wont really answer it cause it ll kill the suspense but I'm guessing ita for someone close to her.. And may be for the same she has to do the job she's doing.. Looking forward to the next chapie 👍🏼

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

awesome + fulltoo enjoyable
love the reaction of pia in morning & after the new addition was none other than 'fire ' love this dog , di one request pls add some more scenes of this dogy with abhay
love the convo b/w abhiya - indirectly they start falling in love with each other -waiting for this relation will grow more
thanks for pm & continue soon

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

wow tanzi... amazing... luved it so much...

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

just read 2 n 3rd chapters.
both were fantastic.
i really liked the concept of this ff...its new, its real, its entertaining. i liked the films fashion n page 3 on this whole glamour n media thing. your ff reminds me of them.
when we try to create imaginary world n stories around us its really interesting to now that harsh realities of world can provide good entertainment and in fact its more than that. it leaves certain questions in our mind n make us think differently...ok enough of my philosophy😆. updates were really nice. i liked pia's character very much. she doesn't pity herself for anything or keep cursing her fate. she accepted the truth of her life with dignity.

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surav

@surav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Awesomeee story...

waiting too read moreee..

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Tanziee u r always my favourite & ur all update make mee eagarly curicious for next...I have one question...Abhay ex Metz as Hasseena said...Is Pia here same face like pkyek Metz...Love Abhiya cute text conversation,,,Continue soon...& waiting for Beautiful Diaster & till the end of time update🤗...srry for Late reply🤗