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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
awesome blosome update dear! pia's luv for abhay is far away from any boundry! she is truly an angle!!
continue soon indu!

yes pia's love for abhay can cross any limit. Am glad you liked it dear.thanks.😳 i will update this week!😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: samwllms
poor abhay...fighting hard with himself...but love will find the way to his heart and soul

very well said dear. For How long can he run afterall? Sooner or later he has to understand that and believe in pia!😊

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Oh My God Indu!!I just don't know what to say in your appreciation!!

So First of all,🤗 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ All The normal human reactions I can give at the moment.!!😆 😳

OS is fab just like always but you writing feels like it becomes more are more beautiful and heart-touching with every word you wrote,With Every new update I read of yours,I feel like It was MORE INCREDIBLE than the last one.!!You just break your own records with every next thing you wrote.!!I cannot define this Properly and Exactly in Words But just loved the way you expression every feeling and emotion SO Beautifully!!Just Simply Mindblowing and Outstanding.!!Loved it.!!❤️

I want to say "You are My most fav writer on IF and I guess a overall fav writer bcoz I don't read any special professional books or Something.😆But for me,You are better than any PRO."😃😳😳 🤗 🤗

Part 1 :- This one is Simply Gorgeous Update!!I loved it to the core of My Heart!!❤️

Abhay's POV,his inner conflict with himself,the emotions and pain were so Wonderfully described by you like Always.!!

Damn This Mad Vampy!!He is well,very well aware,Pia is different and She will stand by his side whatever happens,But NO!!He just can't stop being a "Mahan Atma OOPS Vampire😆"I just hope He gets over with his insecurites and lack of faith coz of his bitter past experiences soon.😳😳

And That Jeh was such a Creep here Man!!I mean Even In the show He was not doing such Cheap Force acts with Piya.😡(I always loved Jeh but He was butchred badly by the CV's.😡Love Rithvik too!!❤️ 😳)

The last scene,Where The glass break's in Abhay's hands was Really Awesome!!So Well-Written!!!And Then His Dialogues,Uff He would have actually said the same things being the SADU RAICHAND He is.!!🤣 😆

And Now,My MOST fav Part of this update was Misha and Abhay's bonding!!Yup!Their part be it a lil one,Truly won My Heart.!!❤️I always wanted to see such a Strong bond betwn Abhay and Misha in pkyek,(Wanted to see them as Besties in the show and want to see them as bro-sis in 2nd Season.!!😆)But Damn Our Creatives.!!😡

I loved how Abhay tried mix up JUST BCOZ OF Misha's insistence and then also for The Dance!!Though they both tried to show this bond less;But still It was so Pure and Beautiful!! 😃Just loved it and Love you for adding this thing even more now.!!!❤️ 🤗 😳

You always know what people wanna see,You should have to be a lead writer for Season 2!!(Can never left hope for PKYEK 2!!😆 😳)

Okay This is for Part 1,I have readed Part 2 also.Will Comment on it seperately after sometime.😊 😳 😳

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Wow Indu , amazing piece of writings . 👏 I love how describe each and very emotions 😃 abhay's outburst was amazingly written and loved how piya calmly replied to abhay . Please upd soon can't wait to read more 😃

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: ifians
awsome indu di...this abhay and pia.😳
oye abhay what do u think of urself?!!how dare u to hurt my dr pia??😡😆
but i am proud of u pia!! the way u mumbed that crazzy vampy just by ur words..⭐️⭐️
brilliant!!👏👏👏

thanks my dear😳 ya she knows how to tackle him..right?😉

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Part 2:- God!Piya got hurt by Abhay's words!Still She was worrying about him rather than getting angry.!!😲👏Really Our Piya is An Angel!!! 😳

Than Our Vampy Angel comes in his beastly fake form and thought that He can make her hate him with his Paagalpanti acts.!!😡 🤣 😆Abhay really needs to stop this Stupid behaviour and Trust on Piya's Pure love.!!Which I'm sure can happen in the next part where He will finally bows down in front of her true and unconditional love for him.!!(Haha,I can't wait to read the next part now.😆Pls Update Soon.😳)

I loved this update sooo very much.!!❤️

Both Piya's and Abhay's POV are Amazingly written and Their Dialogues are such Treat Man.!!👏👏⭐️Ahaha I loved them so much.❤️

Piya's love is so pure and Unconditional for Abhay.!!I'm proud How she gave it back to him in her own unique way.!!!😆 😳

I loved the Part Where Abhay's "You have to hate me Pia"wala plan failed miserably.😆He was gone in Shock Mode.😲 😆

First When He entered Piya's room and said all those things,For Sometime,I thought He have lost it completely.!!!🤣 🤣

The update is so Heart-Breakingly Beautiful.!!

I loved it alot.❤️

Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳 😳

Thanks for the PM.😃

P.S.What's your age yaar?!I mean I'm 16 and confused to call you as Indu or Indu di.!!😆 😳 😳

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
simply amazing update
</div><div>pia surprises me even after how literally abhay almost crushed her heart and her feelings she was there standing like a rock defiantly against his mission of making her hate him.
abhay had indeed stooped down too low just to make her despise him but he failed miserably. no one understands him better than her and even after everything all she cares about or worries about is him. hope abhay would be able to accept this small fact and stop his hurtful behaviour.
it was very well written both the abhay and pia part..simply brilliant!!!!

thanks a lot for appreciating megha..😳
pia's love for abhay is beyond boundery and abhay very well knows that. He understands and that is why he is desparately trying to keep her away. He knws what pia's answer will b bt just like pia he never stops trying.they both are same u see..
And thanks again for commenting dear.😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Yes it was heartbreaking indeed and as usual everything is like a beautiful painting when you write... Pia's assurance that he would not hurt her...so heartbreakingly beautiful, that you want to rush and hug them both so tightly.

Beautiful, indu.

thanks a ton shreya.🤗 you always flatter me way too much!😛
am really happy to know that u didnot misunderstand abhay,which i was concerned..abt..
And pia is pia! Hey na? No matter what happens she can never leave or hate him!😳 so true dear.they'r both so adorable..that it makes u love them more n more.❤️

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago