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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It's wow I really do not know how to describe how beautifully you penned down abhiya and their feelings

I loved it I loved it All

Thanks for pm

Please make abhiya courtship

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Hi Indu,I dont know how I missed this update. I read the first two parts and I was like waiting for the next parts. I dont know why I had the name "Monsoon something" as the name of the OS. Infact I wanted to write to you asking when you would be updating this. But now I found it :-) Thanks a lot for the PMI am still not used to your change in id though its many months since you changed it 😔
So do you still have doubts on your writing abilities. How can you have such doubts.
When you write such OS from the story, it feels like I am seeing a part of the show. Some things which were a blooper in the show or was not properly explained. You do it very well. Even the relations, the feelings within.

Thanks a lot for the OS Indu. Please do keep writing and more about Abhiya 😳

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Hello hi namaste satsriyakaal 😛 I know I know I am late But well better late than never right? 😉 But I do regret not having read this before but I was too tied up before n u know y Indu Indu Indu... I really donno wat I shd say 😲 U render me speechless everytime n this time I donno if I can say anything at all. I am not even sure if I shd call this an SS or an OS. I didn't even feel like I was reading ur story. It was more like embarking on a memorable journey with this two unforgettable, captivating characters namely Abhay and Pia 😳 And boy what a journey it was! It felt like I was reading their journal where all their emotions, their turmoil was bared to us. It was that beautiful, poignant n palpable. I wish I could even cite out moments that I liked but there r so many I really donno where to start and how to end 😃 How do u manage that? Ur words bring out ur characters alive n honestly I never felt it was the story teller who was depicting her characters. Rather I got a sneak peak into ur protagonists minds like they were right next to me n I could visualise everything - every single detail. And you blend the settings so beautifully to make the scene unfold in its ethereal form with utmost brilliance ⭐️ I wish I could say something abt ur characters but anything I have to say will be bleak before ur magnificent play of words. All I can say is - THANK YOU 🤗 From the bottom of my heart for sharing this with us 😊

Edited by ..mandy.. - 11 years ago