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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
hey indu i read this us in one go and now waiting 4 3rd part... its painfull to see both lovers shattered... emotional...

thanks a lot for commenting and liking trishna.😳 yes both are going through the toughest phase dear. bt dnt worry they will find their way soon.😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: janvie
Oh My God Indu!!I just don't know what to say in your appreciation!!So First of all,🤗 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ All The normal human reactions I can give at the moment.!!😆 😳[I]OS is fab just like always but you writing feels like it becomes more are more beautiful and heart-touching with every word you wrote,With Every new update I read of yours,I feel like It was MORE INCREDIBLE than the last one.!!You just break your own records with every next thing you wrote.!!I cannot define this Properly and Exactly in Words But just loved the way you expression every feeling and emotion SO Beautifully!!Just Simply Mindblowing and Outstanding.!!Loved it.!!❤️
I want to say "You are My most fav writer on IF and I guess a overall fav writer bcoz I don't read any special professional books or Something.😆But for me,You are better than any PRO."😃😳😳 🤗 🤗[/DIV]


Part 1 :- This one is Simply Gorgeous Update!!I loved it to the core of My Heart!!❤️

[DIV]Abhay's POV,his inner conflict with himself,the emotions and pain were so Wonderfully described by you like Always.!!
Damn This Mad Vampy!!He is well,very well aware,Pia is different and She will stand by his side whatever happens,But NO!!He just can't stop being a "Mahan Atma OOPS Vampire😆"I just hope He gets over with his insecurites and lack of faith coz of his bitter past experiences soon.😳😳And That Jeh was such a Creep here Man!!I mean Even In the show He was not doing such Cheap Force acts with Piya.😡(I always loved Jeh but He was butchred badly by the CV's.😡Love Rithvik too!!❤️ 😳)
The last scene,Where The glass break's in Abhay's hands was Really Awesome!!So Well-Written!!!And Then His Dialogues,Uff He would have actually said the same things being the SADU RAICHAND He is.!!🤣 😆And Now,My MOST fav Part of this update was Misha and Abhay's bonding!!Yup!Their part be it a lil one,Truly won My Heart.!!❤️I always wanted to see such a Strong bond betwn Abhay and Misha in pkyek,(Wanted to see them as Besties in the show and want to see them as bro-sis in 2nd Season.!!😆)But Damn Our Creatives.!!😡
I loved how Abhay tried mix up JUST BCOZ OF Misha's insistence and then also for The Dance!!Though they both tried to show this bond less;But still It was so Pure and Beautiful!! 😃Just loved it and Love you for adding this thing even more now.!!!❤️ 🤗 😳
You always know what people wanna see,You should have to be a lead writer for Season 2!!(Can never left hope for PKYEK 2!!😆 😳)
Okay This is for Part 1,I have readed Part 2 also.Will Comment on it seperately after sometime.😊 😳 😳

same to you🤗 thank you soo much dear. Am really glad and happy that you did like it so much.😳
ya bilkul sahi..😆Abhay would always behave like that. He wnt learn..hay na ?😉

me 2!! I love abhay-misha bond and wanted to see more of them in the show.😳 so i did that here. Glad you enjoyed.😊

about jeh, am really sorry dear. I wont say that he is a complete bad guy/wolf here bt ya he isnt thoroughly good either!sorry! :(

Once again thanks so much for this lovely comment janvie.🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Wow Indu , amazing piece of writings . 👏 I love how describe each and very emotions 😃 abhay's outburst was amazingly written and loved how piya calmly replied to abhay . Please upd soon can't wait to read more 😃

yes dear pia has amazing patience and only she knows how to handle him..😳 i mean most of the time she does. 😛
and thanks so much for liking Rosh..🤗will try to update tomorrow. :)

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
lovely 2 parts Indu...continue🤗

thanks dear.🤗 Will be updating soon!😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: shria
first of all im sorry for not replying for the first ch
indu i seriously cnt tell u hw much i loved loved loved it😳
both the parts which u hav written are just so😕i seriously cnt get words to describe it😆
u can do some serious magic with the words
the way u hav showed piya's love for abhay that she culd even go to dat extend was remarkable⭐️ & abhay's too😳 it must have not been easy for him to do that but he did only for piya😳
im in love with ur updates do update soon pleasee!!

Its ok dear.no problem! 😊thank you soo much for the praise shria. am really happy that you like it.😳 yes you understood him very well dear. Its nt easy for him,rather its way 2 difficult for him. He is threatening,verbally abusing the girl who means everything to him. So its definitely painful for him and pia knows it.
thanks again for commenting dear.will update by tomorrow night..🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: janvie
Part 2:- God!Piya got hurt by Abhay's words!Still She was worrying about him rather than getting angry.!!😲👏Really Our Piya is An Angel!!! 😳Than Our Vampy Angel comes in his beastly fake form and thought that He can make her hate him with his Paagalpanti acts.!!😡 🤣 😆Abhay really needs to stop this Stupid behaviour and Trust on Piya's Pure love.!!Which I'm sure can happen in the next part where He will finally bows down in front of her true and unconditional love for him.!!(Haha,I can't wait to read the next part now.😆Pls Update Soon.😳)
I loved this update sooo very much.!!❤️
Both Piya's and Abhay's POV are Amazingly written and Their Dialogues are such Treat Man.!!👏👏⭐️Ahaha I loved them so much.❤️
Piya's love is so pure and Unconditional for Abhay.!!I'm proud How she gave it back to him in her own unique way.!!!😆 😳
I loved the Part Where Abhay's "You have to hate me Pia"wala plan failed miserably.😆He was gone in Shock Mode.😲 😆
First When He entered Piya's room and said all those things,For Sometime,I thought He have lost it completely.!!!🤣 🤣
The update is so Heart-Breakingly Beautiful.!!
I loved it alot.❤️
Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳 😳
Thanks for the PM.😃
<fon
[I]P.S.What's your age yaar?!I mean I'm 16 and confused to call you as Indu or Indu di.!!😆 😳 😳

aww...thank you so much for the lovely comment janvie.🤗 it always feels so good to read your comments.😳

yes dear you'r right! abhay and his hate me mission failed. 😆 And afterall its pia! How it cudnt? hey na?😉
ohh..you'r very excited for the next chap..i can see..yep in the beginning abhay surely lost it..🤣 bt later what he did was to keep pia away. yep abhay has to leave this avatar. And He will. Soon! Just wait a bit more.😛
will update tomorrow.
Dear then i think am much older than you. 😆 So you can call me di without hesitating, if you want. 😊
And once again thanks for reading and liking🤗

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Oh Wow di!,You updating tommorow,Ahaan I can't wait.!! 😳 😆

Res.😊

**Unres**

Awesome Update Indu di!!!👏👏⭐️So Beautifully Written.!⭐️😳Loved it sho very much.❤️

Again I have to say the Way you describe emotions and Hold it...Especially Abhay's emotions is Just Flawless and Incredible.I feel like I'm watching Abhay in front of My eyes and all his helplessness,anger and pain He feels,I can feel it as well.!!😲 😳

Next Piya POV is so Wonderfully described by you.!!Her love for Abhay is infinite and limitless.!!Even after all this all She cares for is that Abhay really don't loves her?!But Still She know that He is hurting himself mercilessly by trying to make her hate him,which Abhay himself knows deep down is an Impossible thing to happen bcoz Just like Human Eyes can't stay at rest without blinking Just the same way Piya's heart can't stay at rest without beating for Abhay,Without loving him every moment of it's existence.!!😳Their love for eachother is that pure and unconditional.Just that Abhay Angel needs that Fear of Hurting Piya Shell to be broken and I know Piya's love will do the trick soon.!!😉😳😳

The Snow-fall scene was Very Beautifull.!!Being Honest,That was My most fav scene in the update.A Treat for me as Now it's Somewhere reminding me of My some childhood memories in Shimla and Kullu-Manali. 😳

Then When Jeh touch Piya's leg,Abhay's anger and Jealousy and Piya was uncomfortable.!!

I loved kabir's interference there,He proved that He is a True friend and showed his limits to Jeh(which I'm sure He is and will never be bothered about.😆

That Abhay-T convo was quite funny and the make-up thing was just🤣 🤣 😆

I'm waiting for the next part to see How Our Mad Sadu Akdu and SUPER-HOT and SMEXY Vampire THE Abhay Raichand accept his feelings.!! 😆 😳

Pls Continue Soon...😳

Thanks for the PM.!!😃

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

it's beautiful Indu but sad yet beautiful

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Raatry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

wonderful update..everything was written so beautifully..u left me speachless..piya is so hurt..and abhay is much more hurt..waitting for confession...

Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago

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