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truly magical update.
this has been the best part of this ss and not bcoz abhiya reunited but the way it has been written . The depth of both abhay and pia's feelings was splendid and i lvd it...even in show it wasn't shown this way.
i lvd how abhay connected his feelings to the quotes and while pia read them...it was just magnificent.i lvd how abhay tried to fight a lost battle with pia but finally pia brought him down to his knees and got him to accept that.i lvd how abhay confessed to her about all the times when he was so desperate to be with her, acknowledge her and wanted to look out for but still for her safety showed his heartless side. i lvd how he said he had the right on her...and showed his possessiveness. pia's faith and trust finally showed him the way.
abhay opened his heart out to pia telling her about all the unsaid things and all the pain he had suffered this time. How broken ,weak and scared he is to feel all the things which he once felt and left him shattered and completely wounded and therefore he doesn't wanna take the other chance even though deep down he knows pia is the only one that can end his pain.
abhay finally accepting everything he has denied so far was just amazing. pia is almost left flabbergested at abhay's behaviour after all she never thought abhay would be too romantic and all her wishes and dreams would come true like this. pia was so right they don't need anyone else ...all they need is each other to be happy.
each and everything whether it was the emotions, surroundings is described very well. i wished we could have a scene like this in the show as well.it's the best ss i have read in recent times.
simply flawless writing.I am completely short of words in praising u.
i just loved loved loved it!!
Bindi
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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