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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

<font size="4">@Bleak_House: Superb story!!!!😊</font>

thanks for commenting. Glad u like it.😳

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update
liked it

thanks a lot rumki.😳

thanks dear.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: larisinghgujar

i read all the chapters in one go!you are a superb writter! good job πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon please update soon


Well what can i say..except am really happy to know u liked it so much. Thank you dear.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
@samwllms yes dear.am bengali.😊

@ifians thats great ria. Same here!😳
Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

First Im really sorry couldnt comment on previous update in time. really busy EDITED[/DIV]

really sorry for not commenting. dont get time to login IF during ofc time anymore. its so much rush. and during ramadan it's more hectic. your writing is as usually fabulous. frankly speaking in IF, except Poco and there's a write in IPK forum except them I have never ever seen any writer writing about feels and portraying emotions with word and outcome is pure perfection. pouring emotions into words arent easy and more difficult is to make those words reach the heart of the readers who could feel it. you always make is possible. you are a pro when it comes to portraying emotions, turmoils.. i have no words to praise you. ⭐️
is the song from movie saaya? i think i heard it before. poor abhiya.. you write abhiya's pain so beautiful and in a poetic away. πŸ‘
I liked Abhay and anna's convo. their relationship is strong and dependable. in sense Abhay did understand her words. they have impact on him - strong impact. really liked it. and Piya seems to be leaving and thats y she came to meet him. hope he stops her.
fabulous Indu... keep writing and sorry for short comment... [/DIV]

well i dnt know what to say. Coming from a writer like you thats really a huge compliment tanzie. Am grateful.😳 bt no i dnt think i can come anywhere near poco! She is the queen..! And i am just trying to write. I still consider myself to b a newbie.😳
yes you are right.the song is from saaya. Sang by shreya.a beautiful number.😊 glad u mentioned it.else nobody seemed to recognise it i guess.πŸ˜›
yes you got that exactly right.anna's words indeed had affect on abhay! Abt pia too you are right. Everybody thinks its only abhay bt She too is leaving..
its ok tanzie. I understand. And you had taken time out to comment thats a big thing.thanks again.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
an awesome end to an awesome story⭐️...this update was pure abhiya and all that they stand for...their love..their longing for each other...the passion and bond that is too strong to break...😳
in the beginning pia wishes to leave...because she feels that though it will kill her to be away from the very reason her heart beats...abhay will be happy if she goes...she is prepared to drown in hell for the sake of her love...such is the greatness of her love...😊.
and abhay feels that he is not good for her(as usual) and tries to push her away...even though it creates an emptiess in him...such is his love for her!!!😊
those poetry lines were too too beautiful...most apt..fully doing justice to our abhiya..and the way abhay wrote his own thoughts beside the lines...each thought centred around pia...pia's realization..all of it was masterfully written..i so so so loved it indu!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
and this time she had the proof that abhay loves her...and she was more confident as she fught for the two of them!!! and how could abhay resist...how long could he feign not loving her!!😳
of course he had to accept in the end...he had to accept the endless love that they share...😳
and the last part..aww that was so fantastic...absolutely poetic and magical...abhay and pia..together in the bubble of their love❀️...the part where he heals her legs..where she wanted to say something but didn't know what...those parts were so touching..and then he lifts her in his arms...i quite loved the naughty abhay here...who enjoys teasing his love...and i loved his honest confession towards the end..and the way they communicate through their eyes...of course when u love someone truly words aren't needed😊
By then rain had taken its leave, sunlight began to cast its golden rays and as it fell over the snow around...it shined, dazzling thousand sparks! And when it fell on the entangled figures, the vibrant sunrays emanated a beautiful n unseen glow around them, like a rainbow, paving the way for a new beginning..to set a new history..where the two though unaware of the hard time that was awaiting knew they were ready to face whatever comes...
these lines deserve a standing ovation.πŸ‘.πŸ‘really!!!i read them over and over and over again...they were sooo.WOWWW..
great going fairy...u are a star when it comes to writing these little gem like stories of abhiyaπŸ€—
Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow indu, this was a really magnificent piece of writing. and this last update was so high on emotions, both Pia's and Abhay's that it would make anyone fell in love with them both all over again.
Edited by ..dishu.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well well, someone's put her heart into this one, seems like.
I cannot describe in words...this is weird okay? But you describe so perfectly...so beautifully!
I absolutely heart the poetry bit..it was beautifully done...who were those poems by?
Oh and... I love every bit of the confession. I'm sorry, I'm feeling overwhelmed by thi deluge of emotions you have managed to pack in the update.
Simply beautiful.
Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woawww... love it!!!

an awesome update :)
beautiful story..

thanks for the pm !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautifully amazing...! luved it!!! cn i request u smthing plz give d epilouge! plzzz 😊

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