FF-: Beginning Of The New Dawn( updated chp 1 on pg9 on 1/1/14)

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

nice update
very interesting
for the first time its pia here who is so mysterious n gussewali n abhay seems just opposite😆
it will be interesting to read more about this pia n how abhay will manage to tame this wild cat😆😉

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Raatry

@forever.alone

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

omg akru piya 😲 😆 kharus abhay ki bhoot ghus gayi kya uspe 😆 but piya had the worst childhood..that lil girl was piya right??i felt really bad for her😔 abhay is so cute 😳 really nice update...try to cntne sooon 😉

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

a really nice n long update
omg poor pia

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

superb update

pia suffer so much in her childhood

can't w8 to read more

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

amazing start

well so pia is the one who has suffered too much in her childhood and that was horrible. no child should suffer such abuse.terrible ppl..why did they do that i don't know but nothing can justify that.

no wonder she turned into such a cold person and abhay seems almost opposite.though it will take time but i do hope that she would be able to get past through her nightmarish past.