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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: tanvipareek
please continue this story
i am waiting to know about suspense in prologe🥱

Actually concept is to good too wait😊

Thank u so much dear!!!
We will updt it real soon re :)

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#52

Originally posted by: sweety_crazed
res😉...u knw how lazy i am...do continue i'll join reading soon ;)😎

Ha u r way too lazy
U still didn't unres 😭
Rofl we will updt soon :)

Originally posted by: vampireking
continue soon😳

Thanks and yup we will continue soon :)

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Originally posted by: nidu-dsena
update

Yup we will do it soon :)

Originally posted by: meerubzara
its amazing story
plzzz continu soon

Thanks dear and yea will will updt it very soon :)

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Thank u so much guys🤗
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Note-: Guys we are extremely sorry for this long delay in posting the next chapter but we really had some issues. We both were busy with something or the other since the last few months. But now we are back and we will update this FF very soon. I hope u all will understand and thank u for ur lovely comments guys. We are glad that so many of you are interested in this concept!!!Thanks a lot!!!
Love u all!!!
From Romi and Nafi!!!

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First of all Happy New year to everyone!!! Here is the first chapter of this FF as a new year gift to all Abhiyans. We hope u all will like our small effort 😊
Chapter 1
Part A (written by Rmuk aka me)
A little girl of around 5 years old was continuously running through the dark corridor of a huge mansion. The girl hurriedly entered a room which was was completely dark again. Not even a single sign of any source of light could be traced anywhere. Nothing could be seen properly in that pitch dark room except the little vague figure of the same little girl who was continuously sobbing now...
The girl had short hairs which looked totally dishevelled now and her little eyes were swollen terribly because of excessive crying. Her little lips were quivering in some kind of fear. The continuous tears that were forming in her little eyes were making things more difficult for the little soul as it made her vision almost blurred. She looked badly bruished and her half torn dress was showing the marks of being beaten badly. The girl kept weeping badly and just screamed one thing in her childish yet extremely painful broken tone "mumma help me... mumma..."
*****scene changes******
The same small girl was now sitting in one of the farthest corner of the same dark room but this time she was hiding her face in between her small knees. She looked totally weak and drained but was still saying in her small and weak voice "leave me please, don't hurt me... leave me please... mumma"
But it seems no one was there at present to listen to her, no one not even her mother was there to take the small girl in her lap or wipe away her precious tears, she was all alone, crying alone and sitting in that engulfing darkness which was making her more and more scared with each passing moment but the girl still continued sitting there, in that darkness as if it was the only thing that was left in her life now.
Suddenly there was a huge sound of the door opening making the girl gasp in shock. She looked at the man who entered in the dark room holding a belt in his hand. The small girl stared at the man with wide eyes, her gaze was now fixed on that man, she was even afraid to drop her gaze or close her eyelids. The man gave a evil smirk and started taking small steps towards the girl. As the man started advancing towards her, the girl got alarmed and shouted in her shaky, scared and broken voice "No please don't do this... please no..."
But it seemed that the man paid no heed to her painful pleas, he began to take his steps forward more quickly, the girl's body started becoming numb but as if gathering all her will power and strength she got up and started running away, but it seemed that her little legs couldn't save her from the demon who was laughing cruelly now. The girl screamed more and more now, begging not to hurt her but the man didn't show any mercy towards her cries. The demon in disguise of that man finally caught hold of the small girl and dragged her forcefully with him by holding her hairs making the girl scream on the top of her lungs now.
It seemed like death was far better than this day to day torture. The man dragged the girl to another room and started beating her brutally with the belt he was carrying till now. The man's face couldn't be seen but the torture that the little girl was bearing could be sensed. Her tear stricken face and her screams were clear but everything else seemed blurred!!!
*****Scene changes*****
Again the small girl was sitting in that dark room and again the door opens with a thud but this time instead of just one man two figures enters the room. Through the shadows it was clear that one them was a young woman and other one was a man. The little girl again looked at the man and the women with her scared and painful gaze but this time she didn't make any effort to move as if by this time she have undersood the reality that it was impossible for her to save herself from what was coming in her way. She was in no mood to make any futile attempt of fighting with her fate. She had completely lost her will power and her strength to fight with anyone. She was helpess now, who would say that just a five year old girl had to suffer so much but still god was not kind enough to even freed her miserable life from the clutches of these merciless demons...
The women gave a somewhat evil smirk towards the girl as if satisfied by the girl's situation, her face was not clear but her eyes could be seen which had the clear glint of hatred and cruelity now. The man just stood there quietly and this time the women dragged the girl forcefully with her and slapped her hard several times making the girl bleed badly. The man just gave a evil laugh this time and the women started beating her mercilessly while cursing the little girl with words whose meaning was still unknown to the little soul. The girl again shouted in pain but no one paid heed to her screams instead the women gave a irritated look towards the girl and forcefully pushed her from the stairs and the girl gave one last scream before losing her consiousness...
******scene changes******
A girl in her mid 20's woke up from her night sleep with a sudden jerk. The room in which she was sleeping some minutes back was totally dark... dark like the little girl's room in her dreams. She looked hell scared and breatheless for few minutes. The memories of the nightmare she experienced just now haunted her every night as a unforgettable part of her own life!!!
The girl just switched on the night lamp kept on the table beside her and quickly gulped down a glass of water. Her breathing was uneven still and her whole body was shaking out of some unknown fear. She felt a throbbing pain in her forehead which was making the situation worst for her. The girl kept her one hand on her throbbing forehead and realised that it was completely wet due to the accumulation of several droplets of unwanted sweats there. She for just few brief seconds examined her surroundings nearby and felt a sudden rush of relief washing away all her worries. She wiped away the tears that have escaped from her eyes unconsciously and that's when she realised that she had been crying in her night sleep. She took a long deep breathe and sighed thinking about her miserable life when suddenly her cell phone buzzed showing low battery icon.The girl got up from the bed and after keeping her cell for charging she decided to leave the room and go outside for some fresh morning air as she knew that it was the only thing which can make her feel better now!!!
Scroll down for next part.

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Part B(Written by Rmuk aka me)
Fashion house, Mumbai
The Legend of witches collection was one of the best known and renowed fashion designing house in Mumbai. It was located in the heart of Mumbai's business district and close to South Mumbai's shopping and entertainment areas.
Piya Dobriyal, one of the youngest successful lady of the city was the owner of the fashion house and was the sole reason behind the success of the fashion house.
The interiors as well as the exteriors of the huge and magnificient building of the fashion house was made with a combination of both indian and foreign architecture. The whole building was perfectly designed and painted in white, showing that the owner's choice was highly classy and sophisticated. The floor marbles was beige coloured while the roof was white and had beautifully curved artistic designs in them.
The receptionist as well as the other employees of the fashion house was busy in doing something or the other thing. The clock strucked sharp 9 and the main gate of the fashion house opened. A curly headed women in a grey office suit stepped inside. Her face was devoid of any kindness, her eyes showed no sign of gentleness but complete arrogance, her body language showed only attitude and her head held high showed untamed pride!!!
As soon as the women stepped in the fashion house, the ambience around the office changed. The employeers who were gossiping or doing other things still now became aware of the women just arrived. They just fixed themselves properly and started working attentively forgetting their surrounding or whatever they were doing previously!!!
The women passed through the long corridor of the fashion house, walking straight with her head held high. She didn't even bother to throw a single glance at others. She just signaled the office peon to bring a cup of coffee in her office table and walked away!!!"
''Who is she?" Whispered a girl nervously who had just came for the interview.
"Piya Dobriyal, owner of this fashion house" whispered another girl who came for the same purpose too.
Piya finally reached the end of the huge corridor and entered her large cabin which was again designed in a total classy way. She liked the silent ambience there as if it always gave her a unknown peace which she needed the most in her life!!!
As soon as Piya entered the cabin, the employees relaxed a bit. Everyone breathed a sigh of relief and started working with somewhat relaxed mind now.
"Again in a bad mood today"Whispered one of the girl who was working on a side working desk.
"Yeah its gonna be a tough day again" sighed another girl looking tensed.
"Shh keep quiet girls, a single mistake and we will be fired" Whispered another girl sitting on the next working desk signalling others to work silently!!!
After half an hour
Piya was sitting in her cabin drinking her all time favourite coffee and was going through some files. Her eyes were fixed on the file as if she was trying to divert herself from something she was worried about.
Suddenly her cell phone buzzed showing an incoming call from her new project partner Mr.patel.
Piya picked up the phone and spoke in somewhat irritated tone "Hello"
"Hello, i hope u recognized me Ms Piya Dobriyal." came a gentle voice from another side of the line.
"I think u remember that we are project partners right Mr patel?" Spoke Piya in her irritated tone again.
"yeah of course I do" came a surprised and confused voice from the other side.
"So, its quite natural for me to have ur number right Mr. patel?" Spoke Piya in somewhat sarcastic and irritated tone again.
"Oh yes yes, it indeed is. Anyways I just wanted to remind you Ms. Dobriyal that today is the last date of finalising the designs, so should I send you the file there?" Spoke Mr. patel in his gentle tone again.
"Oh no, you don't need to send me that one I already have another copy of that file so I will check it from there" Said piya in her usual tone now."
Oh ok, then let me know after you are done Ms. Dobriyal" said Mr patel in his calm and gentle tone again.
"Sure I will inform u Mr. patel" Said Piya at last and immediately ended the call.
Piya kept the cell phone back into her desk and called Ram singh, her peon who within two minutes came and knocked on the cabin door.
"Come in" said piya in a rude tone.
A man in his mid 40's entered the cabin and stood there quietly.
" Go and bring the file of my new designs that I asked you to keep 3 days back and yea bring it fast" said Pia in a authorative and rude tone."
Ok mam" said the peon in a little nervous tone and left the cabin immediately.

Just after 15 minutes the peon came back with three files in his hand and entered the cabin after asking for permission. Piya took the files immediately and opened all three of them while Ram Singh stood there silently.
Piya checked the files and after checking the last one she angrily threw all of them away and shouted in a angry tone"I asked u to bring my new designs files and these all are three month old, where is the new one??"
The peon got scared and gulped hard.He kept quite for a while but as soon as he saw piya gettinh up from her chair he decided to speak the truth as he knew keeping quite will only worsen the matter.
Ram singh gulped hard and spoke in a nervous tone "I... I... search...ed but... but..."
Piya didn't let him complete and shouted in between"But what? I don't have whole day to listen to your crap, speak up or else go and bring the correct file" Said piya in a angry and impatient tone.
"I... I lost...lost the file" Said Ram singh atlast which shocked Piya.
"What?? You were suppose to keep check on all the files and you are saying you lost it?? How can you be so careless?? You are fired. Get out of the office right now." Screamed piya in a angry and merciless tone.
Ram singh stood there silently just after hearingthat he has been fired. He got numb for sometime. He worked for this company since last 6 years and today he lost the job just for such a small mistake?? No, he should plead for atleast once, yes he should try to ask atleast for one chance though his heart and mind well knew that it was highly impossible but still he should atleast try once...
"Mam please I beg you, give me one more chance please, I promise I won't repeat such a mistake again, please mam just one chance" Requested Ram singh in a helpless broken and pleading tone but alas Piya paid no heed and just shouted again "I said get out means get out! another chance? No way. There is nothing in life called another chance. Only because of you my precious half an hour got wasted and now I will have to go to meet Mr patel for your stupid mistake and u are talking about another chance?? Get lost right now!"
Piya started leaving just after saying the last four words loudly but Ram Singh hurriedly went and held Piya's legs
" Mam please, I have 4 children and a ill wife at home, how will my family survive?? Please mam just one chance, please...". Ram Singh bursted out crying while saying this but Piya just jerked her leg throwing the poor man just few metres away and left the cabin without sparing a single glance at the man's helplessness.
The security guard entered just then and dragged a shocked, hurt and broken Ram singh away without showing a single sign of mercy to the poor man's continuous pleas!!!

Scroll down below for part C.

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Part C (Written by Flora212 aka Nafi)
Two men sitting in big room...very much excited about something!
The man sitting on main chair- ah I am so happy...we r very much successful in this deal!! 90 % profit!!
Other man grinning- oh yes Mr. Abhay Raichand its all due to you...thanks for being our project partner!! I would love to work with you again!
Abhay - pls Mr. Sharma its due to us both you and me!! And pleasure is all mine. I will like to work with you too again!!And both laughs!
Mr. Sharma - ok so I shall take the leave now...see you!! Oh yea forget to tell I am giving a success party...hopefully you will be there too!!
Abhay gets up from seat- sure I will love to...Both shake hand and Mr Sharma leaves...Abhay sighs and sit back on his chair- ah finally...its done!! Now...(thinking) oh yes wo fashion industry ka deal abi tak pending reh gya!
He quickly takes his mobile and calls someone!
Abhay - yea hello! Did you search about that?? Ok I will talk you later!!
Just then the door flew open, abhay looked up irritated but smiled seeing his best friend standing happily!
Abhay smirked- you will not change huh??So Siddharth...
Siddhrath grins- dude!! I can never change especially for you!!
He flatters his eyes seducingly!
Abhay shocked- stop it!! Stop acting like gay...
Sidharth laughs aloud- ok soo...we r going out tonight to have some freash air!!
Abhay taking a file- no I have work!!
Sidharth snatches the file and says-oho pls we just have completed one deal!! And we are very much success in that...now lets do some party sharty!!
Abhay annoyed- no plsss...i have work we have to come in top 1 in that fashion case!! Now shut up and lets go back to work!!
Siddharth irritated- now...I am your manager doesn't mean you will keep ordering me!! Humph!!
Abhay pissed- come on sid ...stop acting like child! Not today...some other time!!
Sidharth pulls abhay from his chair- no excuse...you r going with me to night!! We will have some fun in club!! Have some break yaar!!
Abhay accepting his defeat- ok fine!!! What about misha your darling??
Sidharth smirks- ahaaan my wify!! She is busy today...she has duty tonight in hospital!! Don't worry she even doesn't know we r going out!
Abhay mysteriously - what if she knows...she will not leave you and will come with us to get drunk!!
Sid annoyed- oh plsss don't even remind me of that!!
Abhay laughs...
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Everyone is enjoying in club...dancing, drinking, playing cards!!Abhay sid sitting on table looking at the people amused!!
Abhay sipping his drink- so misha didn't get any hint??
Sid cheekily- nopes she was in hurry to go to hospital!! So she didn't suspect...
Abhay smirks- hmm I will tell her...
Sid horrified- no don't she will kick me out of bedroom for 1 month and I cant live like that!!
Abhay giggles evily and sid giving peading look...
Abhay- you forced me to come here! Now you will have your punishment...
Sid was about to say something when they both heard a drunk female voice...Abhay looks at the direction to the bar which is near to their table...
The bar man- plsss mam you r too much drunk already!! Don't take more...
The grirl shouts- shut up!! Give me one more and get lost ...
The man trying to make her understand- plsss mam you r not in your sense...
The girl has curly hair...she screams- youuu!!! Who r u to give me advice?? You bloody a**!! Now shut up and give...or do one favour give me whole bottle!!
The man shocked- mam you have drank 8 big glasses...
Abhay decides to see what was the matter!!Sid asks- where r u going?Abhay doesn't answer him but goes to bar...
Abhay says the girl- hello!! R u ok??
The girl looks at him with her blood shot eyes and barks- what!!
Abhay shocked...she must be crying before and moreover she is drunk!! Whats wrong with her...
Abhay - hey u r drunk...i think you should go home!!
The girl frowns and tries to stand steady but cant she was about to fall when abhay holds her hand!!
The girl looks at his hand then his face...she jerks it angrily and pushes abhay!Abhay stunned...
The girl sternly- listen Mr whatever...its none of your business if I am drunk or not!! Get out...( to bar man) you what r u looking at!! Get me my beer!
Abhay coldly- listen miss..i don't know why r u drinking so much!! But its not good for you...how will you go to home in this state!!
The girl glares- why r u soo much concerned about me?? Ha!!She comes near to abhay...abhay could smell wine all over her!!
For the first time he saw her face clearly...she is so beautiful with beautiful brown eyes!! The eyes which serm to bear many sorrows...Suddenly he feels himself all wet...breaking out of his trance!!
Abhay shouts - what the!!
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Part D(written by Flora212.aka Nafi)
Everyone in the club looked at him...the girl smirks!!
The girl has thrown water on him.
The girl in drunk voice- no one tries to interfere in my matter!! And you have done that...you bloody fool!
Abhay holds her arms tightly- what the hell was that...I was just trying to help you and you...
Piya furiously jerks him- leave me you leach...if you r trying to be so much kind then go and help poors, help those children who has lost their childhood!! Help those who r orphans...who lost their parents!! Help those who r lost in dark and can never come out!! Don't try to help a girl like me cause I am good for nothing!!
Abhay was stunned whats wrong with her...is she mad!!
May be she has drunk too much to think in right mind.
Abhay angrily - listen miss...whatever!! R u crazy ?? u r bloody drunk and you r lecturing me...you r not in state to drive car! Wait do you have your driver...if u have ...call him
The girl shouts- don't u get it...i said get lost from my sight!! Or else you will regret! And I am not some whatever...i am a human and I have a name...
The girl whispers in drunk un clear voice- piya is my name!!
PS-:So guys here is the first chapter of this FF. We apologise once again for this long delay but from next time onwards we will try to be regular than this. We hope that u guys liked it and are interested in reading this FF further. Please give ur honest reviews as our next update totally depends on the amount of response we get 😊
Ignore the spelling and grammatical erorrs as we both wrote this in a hurry and yea thank u so much guys for ur previous likes & comments 😃
Love u all!!!
From Romi and Nafi!!!

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