Abhaiya-And i feel scared...

Trishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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my mouth is shut the way put abhay's pain, inner turmoil, carve 4 love, fear together in word its speechless... no wonder dis heartles creature is like coconut tough outside but soft inside... love u abhay and pia too...

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Romita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Indu just wonderful dear!!!
its heart touching and just beautiful!!!
u described each and every feeling of Abhay very well!!!
just perfect.
his pain, agony, fear, and his craving for piya, everything was just written very very well dear!!!
No wonder u are just one of the best writer here and ur speciallity is the way u describe emotions is just brilliant!!!
Outstanding!!!
loved it dear!!!
Do write some more like this!!!
i would love to read this small nothings lol though it describes everything hehe.

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

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more than perfect.👏great job.👍🏼he trust piya ofcourse he does,no one in this whole world will say he do not and if anyone does then da person will have to b insane.

not sure if it had reached where it should yet da blue eyes hoped waited for da miracle.awesome portrayal of abhays emotions.thanx a lot for pm.would love to read more of such wonderful pieces of writings

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Lol don't know if Pia will madly follow him till the end of the world but will definitely follow him till bathroom 😆

Oh on serious note I loved the way u described Abhay's inner turmoil

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautifully written Indu , you described abhay's pain very well 👏

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Oops double post 😆

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sukugeny
its awesome indu...the pain of abhay n his pov written beautifully..

thank you geny dear. Am glad you like it.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: samwllms
madam u made me senty...abhay was all emotional nd sad nd scared aswell...he craved for piya...but same time he was afraid to loose her...his sad emotions of loosing his beloved ones in past was heart melting...thnks for writing this awwsm os...its os for me...now pls finish the os forbidden...like abhay i m craving for that os...my most fvrt one...

thanks a lot dear.😳 And ya 'forbidden' is coming next! 😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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