Abhaiya-And i feel scared...

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@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: luckdiya
2 gud indu..
b'fully written

thanks a lot for liking diya..😳

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

u're a gem when it comes to expressing inner turmoils, thoughts and emotions..u know that?

u wrote it so beautifully.👏..abhay in pain...how he is afraid of the love that binds him and piya..a love so intense and strong that nothing can break it...the way he feels pia is the only one he trusts only heightens his loneliness...and it shows...he has immense faith in pia's love for him..because she understands him..she makes him feel like a human..and somewhere inside..he wants that..he doesn't want to be shunted because he's a vampire..he wants to be cared for and protected..i hope i'm not rambling😆...it's fate he is afraid to trust...but i know pia's love is strong enough to make him overcome his inhibitions!!

very beautiful portrayal of his feelings!!great job fairy 😊

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Well done Indu👏 Beautifully written.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: janvie
Its Awesome yar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I just loved it.❤️Hugs 🤗 🤗 for writing this. 😊 😳 😳
The pain of Abhay,How He is afraid to lose pia,Want to be with her but still scares to go too much near her so that his fate,his destinty won't snatch away his Only happines,His Only reason to live away from her;Just like it has taken away all those whom He loved in his past,in his human life.😭
It really made my night.Thankyou so much for writing this Beautiful piece. 😊 And also made me all emotional at the same time for My Abhay and Pia.😭 😭Missing My Abhiya badly now. 😭 😆
Can you pls add me in your buddy list?I'm sending buddy request to you,Pls accept it and Pls pm me from next time whenever your write anything on Abhiya and If possible pm me the links of your previous works also.I will read and comment whenever I get time. 😳 Thankyou. 😊

thank you soo much for reading it mishu.. 😳 and Thanks a lot for this lovely comment dear..🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Indu that was fantastic n I am still finding it hard to believe u wrote it out in cell 😲 I find it hard to even text a message from it 😆 Ur an ace at handling emotions esp Abhay's. In each n every work of urs, u depict his inner turmoil so beautifully tat I am left with no words. Its a different story tat u also make me write essays 😆 Brilliant 👏 n I am more than happy to reading more of such nothings in future 😳[/B]

[COLOR=red]well..almost all updates i write in cell only.😆
thanks for reading it mansa. I thought it dsnt make sense..😛 bt really glad to knw tht u like it. 😳