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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Wow shreya a superb update

Very well written

I loved it

Lovely

Piya is denying her feelings for abhay

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

thank u so much shreya. and loved this update especially the last line.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Hello namaskar satsriyakal 😆 Am back 😛 I read the update n I must say I am thoroughly impressed 👏 The concept deserves a standing ovation in itself 👏 This update surely gave me few much needed answers here n I guess I now know where Pia's heart lay but Vikrant is still a mystery n I will need to wait till his memories r restored. Who was he? Was he a mutant? A strategist? Or a human? Even Pia doesn have answers to this since she parted with her memories to overcome the pain But still the last memory of his though doesn't say much about their relationship yet is significant as Pia feels the pain n loss and from that she knows that the soulmate she was speaking about had been him. Abhiya r already on the verge of getting into a passionate relationship n I wonder where this journey together would lead them to. By restoring her memories as Pia rightly said she will get the much needed freedom she seeks so desperately but I wonder if that happens will she still hold onto her original goal of avenging Kabir's death? Kabir doesn really seem to be all that noble at the moment 😕 Given the fact that he came up with the device that could control the mutants like animals. I wonder y u like my lame action sequences when u urself do much better? 😆 Liked the fight between Abhay n Poluxes and how Pia tried to guard him though that wasn't needed since Abhay was doing fine by himself. I donno how u came up with all these terminolgies but u have come up with a world of ur own ⭐️ Kudos to u for that 👏 👏 👏 I loved Pia's curiosity on wanting to know more abt Abhay's human world n his answers 🤣 n her excitement 😆 She really thinks ppl goto college bcoz they are inclined towards being scholars? 🤣 Dear Lord 🤣 These days students do anything but study in college 😛

I have probably said this many times before n I will say it yet again - ur way ahead than many of them ur age when it comes to writing n infact u could easily give some of us oldies a run for our money 😆 The plots r absolutely superb 👏 My pea brained head can never ever dream of coming up with such a concept 😆 U r really too good n the only reason I get critical for ur updates coz I know they have much more potential than many other stories I have read n I mean it

Brilliant update Shreya n keep it up 👏

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

brilliant update

pia really is fascinated by humans...luved her enthusiasm when she was asking abhay about his human life.

their convo was really good...i lvd when pia placed her hand on abhay's heart to save him from those creatures. pia had started caring for him .

want to know about the story of pia and vikrant...how did he die .

simply amazing update...i am liking how the story is progressing and it's getting more interesting.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

its wonderfull update... pia is confused with her feeling 4 vikrant, kabir and abhay... but y i think may be their was some link between vikrant and abhay...

by the way who actully was vikrant to pia...

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Awesome update so Abhay's touches creates havoc in Pia's body and waiting for the next part.

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mire

@mire220

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

A beautiful update. .

Love it..

Thanks for the pm !!!

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Thank you very very very much for the update Shreya.

Imagine you actually updated when you are down with Dengue and with you net not working.

I am so thankful to you for updating in such a state you are in and I know I am being very mean expecting this update at this situation.

(I am even meaner when I wish this makeshift arrangement of yours becomes permanent as I am looking forward for the next update of this as well as Time and Again. But ofcourse not immediately but in your normal frequency)

Coming to the update, I really enjoyed this one (I am now envious of Disha for getting such a wonderful birthday gift. Just kidding Dishu !!!!)

You never cease to surprise me when you bring out the characters with just their conversations.

Abhay tells Piya that he despised Kabir because he created mutants and invented Diablo. But you can see his feeling for Kabir is more of jealousy than simple hatred.

And Piya, I think whatever between them, Kabir was kind to her and may be the only vampire of that age who showered some nice feelings towards her and she liked him. It seems like more of a platonic feeling towards him. But when it comes to Abhay, her heart, body earns for something more and her mind is furious at the knowledge of this. She thought she loved Kabir, But her body and soul seem to tell her otherwise - I mean not that she hated Kabir, but she felt something more about Abhay.

Kabir and Piya were to be bonded. Now tell me, can vampires reproduce. I think they can and thats how Piya is born. Regarding my other question of if Mutants and Vampires can reproduce, then I know you already answered to a similar question that Abhiya have to experiment 😉

Abhiya seem to enjoy each other company and I am very much liking this small of adventure of theirs not knowing what will happen in future. Her eagerness in knowing about humans is known but her being interested in knowing about Abhay's human life and he in turn being amused at her questions is really entertaining.

Now who is this Vikrant. Piya does not seem to remember anything about him except the agony she faced at his death.

Was he a human, a mutant or a vampire?

And I am confused about this memory thing. I understand that the access to Omnius is impossible and she has her blood as a password. But what is that about her having to have memory to gain access. Is she planning to visit this place to take some memories which have been buried - like a pensieve?

Can you please throw some more light on what exactly she wants at the Omnius and what this memory is about. Abhay seems to understand. But I am not able to. So requesting some more information.

I am really dreading what might come up in future. Piya wants to learn to fight - to avenge the death of Vikrant. What if it was Abhay who killed him? It could be in a battle. But how would she react if it was Abhay? Or could it have been Kabir who killed him?

The concept of Poluxes is very interesting. But are these general guardians of the Omnius or were they sent to hunt down Abhay and Piya. Eliminating Abhay makes sense, but why would they want Piya dead? She is their princess after all. I dont think the poluxes are programmed to attack only Abhay. They attacked both of them.

So Abhay's heart beats unlike vampires?

In the initial updates, Like I told you before, I felt them more as Abhayendra and Maithili. But now I started to feel them more like Abhay and Piya.

You also mentioned that Piya was hated by her own people. Is it just because they thought her as a weakling or do we have something which happened in the past?

Thank you once again for the wonderful update especially in the situation you are in.

Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

that was brilliant update shreya👏 👏 So piya told abhay about vikrant...!!!!!

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#350

mind blowing update shreya ...
i just love the way abhay made piya conscious around him ... hope both will remain safe ... love the scene when piya secure abhay heart by her hand ...

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