Originally posted by: sukugeny
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Amazing,Intense👏, Wonderful,Fab 👏Update Shreya.Yeah...u were ill still u gave us update on tht day...THANK U SO MUCH n dishu's bday gift!!👏
Like abhay...I sometimes feel...the way u write...ghuma-phira k...did pia really in love with Kabir?
"Kabir was not my soulmate-that does not mean I didn't love him." But he heard the misgivings in her voice. Something sparked within Abhay; he wondered if the Princess had ever really been in love with Kabir. The thought gave him hope.
WOW...WOW...Haila...bt...abhiya ...☺️...la la..
He heard her give a small groan, then her slim hands reached out to touch his chest, moving upwards and finally settling around his neck. He concentrated 😳with all his might😆 on the job at hand, painfully aware that she was now holding tightly to him, her entire body pressed against his.😉
He pulled himself out,both of them tumbling to onto the ground. She fell on top of him☺️, her breathing harsh and laboured. Piya stared at him, fighting not to lose herself in his eyes. She wanted to hate him 🤣for making her question herself on her feelings for Kabir, but when he looked at her like that...she felt strange feelings and funny impulses that were hardly becoming for a lady, let alone a Princess.She gasped at the shock of his touch as she felt his hands suddenly grip her waist.😉 She almost shivered as one of his hands moved up her back, the other rising up her side till it was within an inch of her ribcage. Heart hammered, but then she felt a cloth fall over her head, and she realised he had simply raised the hood of the dress to cover her hair. She didn't know why the knowledge left her almost...disappointed.
m in dreamland..their cosy cosy...closer moments...❤️.i know kitna hard wrk krna pda hoga ye likhne k liye...bt thanks...kuch kuch ho rha hai Pia ko ab...bechari pia...😆
she wanted him to never let go...pia is fallling in...
He was in front of her, but Piya felt no comfort. Abhay was going to get himself killed with his attitude, and if they reached his heart, it was all over... Her train of thoughts broke abruptly as they saw them. Horrible, indigo coloured, batlike monsters. They made straight for them, but Abhay struck out with something glinting in his head : with a horrible screeching sound, the first Polux fell dead. But there were others, other Poluxes who approached, their characteristic clicking sounds growing louder. Piya did not know impulse possessed her, but her arm went around him from behind, covering his heart with her hand, feeling it beat erratically beneath her palm. Abhay went very still, but he made no other reaction. He continued taking down more Poluxes.
This is something...Pia actually really caring for abhay...😛.written so Intense...dark care n abhay wont let anyone come near her...The Hero😎 for his❤️ Princess..i jst loved these lines...so pure...Dengerous Poluxes...how cruel...U must hv did..lot of deep study in this na Shreya...u always make worth to read this FF in a dark way...loved loved loved it.
Abhay said-"It was rather flattering to see you worried for me, though."
Yeah...was he kidding ...y did he ask like this?she was really worried for him na..
She pulled out a brass jar and pointed to his shirt. "Take it off." His eyebrows rose. "Why? You planning to molest me?" 😆Abhay...loved this noke-joke...fresh fresh...!!
"Why do you try to protect me?" he asked her. "You would never need to do that. We have heightened defenses, and the majority of our wounds heal quickly. Why do you exert yourself?" She raised her eyes to his, and he saw blind panic in her face. "I cannot let you die," she said, sounding almost ashamed. "I cannot. And you...you could die any moment. I won't... I won't let that happen. I won't." The emotion in her voice shocked him 👏: till now, he had never realized that she placed importance in keeping him alive.For selfish reasons, perhaps, but she would keep him alive. Without thinking, he raised his hand to touch her face👏, but reason caught up with him and he dropped his hand.
She really caring or for her selfishness...bt I feel she actually care for him now na...
Aiza ...she know abt abhay...tht he is alive nw..
Pia is too curious to know abt Human Life...U explain human life plenty well...humans...school,collage n all...then wht is school n wht is it collage...Piaaa..."Tum sawal bhot puchti ho" bolna tha abhay ne..."Humans are very scholarly," observed Piya. "Not really," said Abhay. "It's...sort of difficult to explain."😆
I loved these lines-Piya went quiet. Something in her wanted to badger him till her told her every single detail, but something else wanted her to shut the hell up. She didn't need to know him. She already felt too much for him as it was. A pang shot through her. Why was she thinking of him? Why wasn't she thinking of Kabir? Horrible, boiling disgust rolled through her. Ever since she had sneaked out of the castle, caught up in getting her memories back, caught up in getting back a piece of herself she had only known through stories, it had been Vikrant and Abhay who jostled for top position in her thoughts. Why had Kabir been pushed behind? Was she really that shallow? To forget her only constant companion for twenty five years? Kabir...Kabir had never touched her back. She had never wanted him to..no! What was wrong with her? How could she be lusting for a stranger's touch, searing though it was?
The description of Pia's Feelings wrote well...she is feeling more for abhay than kabir n vikrant...I can see someone tring to not to fall in...
Beautiful lines...Abhay is ur lover pia..hw can he miss 😆chance to look at😉 u in tht way-
True to her resolution, she avoided much conversation with Abhay over the next few days as they travelled on and on, only stopping so that Piya could rest. He did not intiate any talk with her either, although there were times she could have sworn he was staring☺️ directly at her. It made her even more incensed- Kabir had never looked at her that way.
Now-
Tears burned in her eyes. "I don't really know exactly." she said softly. "But I know...I know he died in battle. And I know how I felt when I saw him...I loved him. I loved him more than anyone I have ever loved- that must be why I forgot to put back that last memory of him. The only memory I have of him is his- is his death. And I cannot forget what it felt like...I should have put it back. I suppose it is my mistake."
"How can you know?" he asked quietly. "How can you love someone who you have no memories of?" "You want your memories back...so that you will know how to fight?"
Exactly!!@Black -Hw can pia love someone...?She want her memories back...to learn how to fight so she canfight.n using her blood as password n hw...m curious more now ..I was smiling while reading this-
Abhay shook his head. "Why should I stop you? I never said anything about stopping you." It was Piya's turn to be shocked as she stared at him. "You..don't want to stop me?" He shook his head again, a smile tugging at the corner of his lips. Piya had a funny impulse to trace the shape of them with a finger. She shook the thought away as quickly as it had come. "Thank you," she said sincerely.
And the last awesome line -
And as Piya listened to the plan he had formed for getting into the Omnius,she realized he was giving her something she had secretly craved for : Freedom.
Awesome update..looking forword for Omnius...how will they getting into Omnius?
It was well written beautful ❤️update as usual⭐️.n u know wht...i nvr expected u to behave different...i mean u always give update...with small small nt complex bt diff.things ,nt simple explination..n i jst love tht...it make story more epic.all writers do tht..
Pia hv her own determination n abhay will never leave her alone...egarly waiting for next update.
This is my Most Fav.FF❤️ Shreya-Plz dont discontinue it.plz.plz.
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