Abhaiya OS--Show me the light.updated april6th pg8 - Page 6

Originally posted by: captainplus

another wonderful os ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

lo❤️ed it ! thank you dear.😳

bt y is abhay on stay away mission ?

plz do continue soon ...

tanks 4r the pm 😊

you'r welcome. reason will be revealed soon!

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Finally i am here with my comment. I so missed commenting in ur works dear. dear me too missed your comments...🤗
Anyways coming to the OS, what should I say? u have left me speechless dear. Just one word beautiful.
Just beautiful OS dear. thanks a lot romi. 😳
you are really a very talented writer yaar and ofcourse god gifted. oh..please dont embarass me!!😳
The way u bring out each and every raw human emotion is just brilliant. The most beautiful thing about ur writing is the way u describe each and everything and the emotions that each character go through very beautifully.
It was just written totally in a classical way. So poetic, intense and wonderful. The words u used were so apt. dear. thank you. 😳 i was worried how it wud turn out but happy to know u like it.😊
I loved the way u potrayed both Abhiya here but Abhay somehow more. glad you liked abhay's portrayal..😊
Loved how abhiya met for the first time, then abhay's jealousy, their confession and Abhay's selfless act made me cry😭
I wonder what really happened in his past that he likes to be alone and desolated from others. I loved how beautifully u potrayed his emotions. Piya was the only ray of light in his dark world but still he had to be selfless and throw her away from his life, and that is our Abhay and that is why we love him so much, his selflessness makes him special and loveable. yes you are soo right! this is the reason he is abhay the special one! 😳
Abhay is in pain. I loved how Abhay confessed his feelings, the minute details of his changing emotions every now and then was described excellently by you. reasons u will know in the last update...
I am feeling bad for piya too. She fell in love with Abhay but had to pay the price. She is leaving but i know Abhiya will never be separated so, i will patiently wait for ur next update. hmm..lets see...whether you'r right..😉
I wonder who was the girl in that painting and that fire panting was somehow related to Abhay's past right? mm...in a way..yep it is!
waiting for u to unfold Abhay's past. I loved the way the u shaped up the storyline and yea loved how u maintained suspense throughout the whole OS.
Once more just superb OS indu. Its again a masterpiece dear!!! Waiting for ur next update. Plz update asap and thanks for the pm :)

thanks again for such a lovely comment dear...u'r welcome..yes will update very soon! 😊

The update was pure classic Indu 👏 Your words in itself paint a beautiful canvas depicting every other emotion so beautifully that it leaves ur readers craving for more 😳 I loved the way u depicted Pia's emotions here - her pain, angst, dejection, conflicted emotions on Abhay - everything was wonderful ⭐️ Its obvious for Pia to feel that way for she has been abandoned since the time of her birth n those who gave her love I am sure most of it was out of pity 😭 I kinda feel bad for her coz no person with an ounce of self respect will want to see pity in anybody's eyes be it even her own best friend. I loved Neha n Pia's bonding n it came out very well. Neha is an introvert like Pia n its easy for her to be free with her 😳 I am glad Pia knows Abhay isn whom he shows himself to be before others Neha seems to be the only one Abhay is close to but if even she could not help Abhay get over his suffering then I am sure the reason must be big I hope Pia is the one to heal her wounded heart for I know Abhay is broken beyond repair n its only Pia who can do the impossible 😳 I am waiting to know wat happened in the past n I hope u tell it in the next update 😳 Painting is surely a form of art where a person can pour their heart into even though they cannot speak it out in words for every stroke of the paintbrush will have its own story to tell 😊 That dream of Pia's must have given her a hint that Abhay wants the same as she does but he does not want happiness to come his way bcoz of his insecurities The part where u wrote abt Pia's dress I could imagine Suku in a sea green salwar 😳 N finally the night of bon fire 😳 Abhay again turned his face away from Pia though his heart was still with her n Pia was so lost in his thoughts tat she didn even notice when her dress caught fire 😲 But when Abhay saved her Pia saw the concern n love in his eyes n now no matter what Abhay says she knows whats there in his heart 😳

U will never believe me though I have told this a gazillion times - I am yet to come across a writer who can write in such a classy manner in this forum n I hope u publish ur work someday

res . pls pm me when u update .

Wow it's amazing

I cannot believe how good you are.
You do this forbidden thing so well, I would be jealous if I didn't like you so much.
The way you described the dream scene and the last part was breathtaking!
I don't know, the way you write AbhIya na... You just make me love them so much more!
Neha seems really nice.
I wonder why Abhay became like that!

Once again, applause for the way you wrote this.
Pure class.

It was an amazing update 😳
u hav written it vry vry beautifully 👏
Eagerly waiting to knw abt abhay's past 😛
continu soom plzzz 😳

beautiful display of emotions indu. too good a piece of writing. 👏