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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
my name is alicia pm me



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Chapter 2

Porch of the Dobriyal Mansion -

Abhay had heard everything that had happened inside Pia's room . He knew he was too small to understand these things but still his sixth sense was telling him that they were again insulting Pia . Pia was so unlucky to get parents like them he thought . He knew they were like the cruel stepfathers and step mothers of the stories he reads . He related Madhu to the evil "chudail"of the snow ' white story . No , but wasn't Panchi supposed to be that because she keeps on looking at the mirror saying " Mirror mirror on the wall , who's the fairest one of all ? Oh no need to say because I now it's me . " 😆Stupid girl he thought . He indeed felt very bad for Pia as she had to suffer so much . Then he saw Pia standing up (Pia's room was at the ground floor) and making her way out of the room.

He didn't know how to reach her as Arnab and Madhu didn't like him . As if God heard his plea the Dobriyals all dressed up as they were going for a party went of the house not even bothering to lock the door . What a perfect opportunity he thought and he quietly sneaked into the house !

Angad's room :

Angad was back playing video games . Pia quietly entered his room . Arnab was not that bad to Angad as to Pia . She didn't know why was she treated that way by her own father . She really missed her mother .

Angad sensing Pia quickly turned towards her and gave her his best smile : Piyu di !

Pia (returning the smile back) : Hey spider man , back to playing video games , again ? Finished your homework ?

Angad : Yep di , that khadoos nanny made me do it . Waise di , can I ask you something ?

Pia : Bolo na spiderman .

Angad (a little hesitantly) : Where's Mom ?

Pia was shocked by his question . He never had asked about Mom till now .

Pia : Spiderman , you ok ?

Angad : Ya di , what happened to me ? I was just asking about Mom . Where is she ?

Pia : She , uhh..

A voice (from back) ' She's somewhere in a fairy land waiting in a line to get good gifts for you and Pia.

Both turn around astounded to see Abhay standing near the door . Angad quickly ran and hugged Abhay .

Angad : Abhay da , you here ?

Abhay : Hey champ ! Yup , I thought to visit my superman and Missy pussy .

Pia (rolling her eyes) : Abhay stop giving me idiotic names otherwise I know what to do !

Abhay (acting like he's in a boxing ring)😛: Oh really pussy , come on show me what you can do !

Pia (rolling her sleeves)😡: Listen , don't encourage me otherwise...

Abhay : Otherwise what ?

Angad (murmuring): Not again ! (Now shouting ) Stop it you too yaar , not again . You behave like kids sometime you know !

Abhay : Toh ? Hamari umar hi kitni huyi he ?

Pia : Haan nahi toh . Baat toh aise kar raha he jaise 18 saal ka hogaya hai .

Angad : Are di , aap apna gussa mujh par kyun utaar rahi ho ?

Both : Sorry !

Angad- Chalo koi baat nahi . Hey Abhay da , did you bring the new game I asked ?

Abhay (taking a CD out from his bag ) : All yours .

Angad starts dancing while Pia and Abhay giggle . Abhay and Pia both see each other . Abhay holds his ear saying sorry and Pia shows her tongue to him .

...

5 :00 p.m.

Raichand Mansion :

Haseena : Ofo , ye abhay kaha chala gaya .

Chand : Aur kaha , dobriyal mansion ! Tum bhi na haseena .

Haseena : But it's too late . It's already 5:00 p.m. He should be home by now .

Abhay (making a sudden entry )- Apna bulaya aur hum chale aaye.

Ruhi : Wah , wah bhaiya , kya typical SRK type entry mari he apne.

Abhay : SRK nahi mujhe Salman pasand he .

Ruhi : Toh ? Mujhe Srk pasand he .

Haseena : Par mujhe aamir pasand he .😆

Ruhi and Abhay : Mom aap bhi ? and all laugh.

Later :
Chandeena's bedroom :

Abhay was narrating the incident that took place after he reached Dobriyal Mansion .

Chand : Tumne acha kia beta !

Abhay : Kya ? Ghar mein chori chupe ghusna ya angad ko console karna .

Haseena : Angad ko ye batana ki uski mom ek fairy land mein he . I'm proud of you !

Chand : Akhir kiska beta he ?

Haseena : Mera ! and all laugh while Ruhi who was sleeping till now shouts : Cut ! Cut! Cut! Scene over. Pack up!

Next day:

St. Teresa school:

Standard 3 :

Pia was sitting in an corner reading her favorite book ' Snow white and the seven dwarfs . Abhay saw this and in his mind he told : Kitab ki laila !

Abhay : Hi laila !😉😆

Pia (startled) 😲: Who me ?

Abhay : Pia tum bhi na , 2 saal ki bachi jaise behave karti ho !

Pia : 😡Listen abhay !

Kabir (handling the situation ) : Chal chal abhay basketball practice ke liye jaana hai .

Pia (confused): Par , basketball practices to class 5 se hi start hoti hai na ? KABIR !!!

Kabir (running) 🤢: Bhagwan bachao mujhe Pia maate se !

Abhay was constantly giggling while Pia was burning red with anger . Thank god that Mishra sir ki entry hogayi warna Abhay ko toh bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta !

Mishra Sir : Shubh prabhat bachon .

Abhay (murmuring) : Aap agar hoge toh hamari subha kabhi shubh nahi hogi .

Pia : Chup chap apna muh band rakho .

Abhay :Are par ...

Mishra sir : Mahodaye Abhay aap ko kuch kehna hai ?

Abhay (stammering): No , no...not at all sir , oh ,woh . ..shubh prabhat .

Mishra sir : Shubh prabhat , aap sab baith jaaeye .

All sit down and begin concentrating in the lecture while Abhay was in his own world !!

Canteen :

Misha (gulping down the food): God , mujhe aaj bahot hi bhuk lagi he.

Tanushree : Ache se khao Misha , sab dekh rahe he .

Misha (turning back) : Oye , tum logon ko koi kaam nahi he kya ? Bade aaye mujhe dekhne wale .

Tanu (banging her head with her hand ) : Ofo , ye ladki hai allah , hai hai re allah !

Misha : Ab shuru mat hojao Tanu .

(Kabir and abhay's scary entry ! )They quietly sneak up to tanu's chair and shout : BOO !!

Tanu gets freaked and starts shouting : Bhoot , bhoot , mumm bachao .

Pia's grand entry : Ye kabir aur abhay he na !

Abhay (dancing) : Pussy is back !

Misha (rolling her eyes) : Phirse hungama ho ne wala hai . Acha hua mummy ne pehle se hi popcorn aur juice mere Tiffin me rakh di thi . Ab lo dog - cat fight ka mahan programme .😆😉

Dog - cat fight :😆

Pia 😡- Dekho abhay mujhe irritate mat karo , mein already bahot gusse mein hun .

Abhay 🤪- Missy pussy gusse mein he , Mahi ve .

Pia 😡- Enough is enough ! and Pia jumps on abhay .

Both start hitting each other . Abhay pulls Pia's hair while she keeps on scratching his face .😆😆😆

Tanu and Kabir start taking popcorns from Misha's tiffin and all 3 say together : Inn dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta . Popcorn khao aur mast hojao .

Pia and Abhay are still fighting . Pia keeps on hitting him in the stomach when he finally says - Pia maate , I lose you win !😆

Pia - Yippee ! and starts dancing . Both of them giggle and say sorry to each other .

Abhay and Pia turn towards the trio and ask - Kuch hua tha kya ?

Kabir - Nahi yaar ! Popcorn ?

Dobriyal mansion :

Pia was doing her homework quietly when Abhay quietly sneaked into her room scaring the daylights out of her .

Pia - Abhay , tum yaha kya kar rahe ho ? Aunty ne dekh liya toh ? Bhago !

Abhay (lying in Pia's bed) - Tum bhi na Pia .

Pia - Par tum yaha aaye kaise ?

Abhay - Abhay jaha se bhi aa sakta he . Waise tum ne apna maths homework kia ?

Pia- Haan , maine abhi khatam kiya he .

Abhay suddenly jumps from the bed and kneels down infront of Pia - Pia maate meri madat karo .

Pia (shocked and startled) - Kya ..kya hua abhay ? Tum achanak ?

Abhay - Woh kya he na Pia , maine pura ek ghanta laga diya phir bhi ye maths ka homework solve nahi kar paya . Please please please give me your notebook . I promise I'll return it in the first period . Please please please please please ''''''.

Pia - stop it ! Ok take it ! and she hands over the note book to Abhay while he beams in joy.

Abhay - Did I tell you that I love you ?

Pia -Eeeks , propose karna hai toh Panchi di ko karo , cloud nine par aajayegi !

Abhay - Yaar mein tumhe I love you keh raha hoon , aur tum meri date uss kadoo ke saath setup kar rahi ho ? Kesi dost ho yaar !

Pia - Pata nahi ! Tumhari dost hoon tumhe pata ho na chahiye .

Then suddenly there is a knock on the door .

Pia (starts jumping) - Abhay koi aagaya , bhago , bhgo . Ek minute bed ke niche chale jao . And abhay quickly hides under the bed and Pia goes and opens the door .

An angry arnab doriyal enters the room pushing Pia and searches around .

Arnab - Who was here ?

Pia - Koi nahi papa .

Arnab - Acha tum batameez ho ye pata tha par pagal ho ye nahi pata tha . Hawa mein baate karti ho kya ?

Pia - Par papa '.

Arnab - Iska kuch nahi ho sakta and he slams the door and leaves while Pia falls down crying .

Abhay rushes towards Pia and consoles her .

Abhay - Please Pia don't cry . Mujhe junglee Pia pasand he roti wali nahi . Please please don't cry !

Pia - Kab tak abhay , kab tak apne hi papa se mujhe yeh sab jhelna padega ? Mujhe mumma ki bahot yaad aarahi he .

Abhay hugs her and says - Bahot jaldi Pia bahot jaldi tum yaha se bahar niklogi aur apni hi duniya banaoge jaha sirf khushiyaan hogi . Aur jab tak mein tumhare saath hun tumhe kal ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi he .Waise bhi meri tikhi mirchi ke aankhon mein aansun ache nahi lagte .

Pia smiles after hearing this while Abhay bidding her goodbye jumps out of the window.

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This story will be focusing on Pia's dreadful life and Abhiya's constant fights . After like 7 - 10 updates the story will be taking a leap with a rather big twist . This story will rather go little slow because of the need to show Abhiya's bonding and the truths need to spill out gradually . Thank you guys for liking it , I'm very happy with the response I got from you all .


PS : Updates will be every weekends . Thank you guys , love you all .

Edited by Pkyek_Aaliyah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
a v nice and lovely update.feeling v bad for piya but thanx god she got a caring friend like abhay.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm



Thanks .😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vmpy

a v nice and lovely update.feeling v bad for piya but thanx god she got a caring friend like abhay.thanx for pm and continue soon.



Thank You !😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow super nice story👍🏼 i love little abhiya😛 continue soon and thank for pm me👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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abhay and piya always fighting😆 poor pia😭 these dobriyals😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: barki

wow super nice story👍🏼 i love little abhiya😛 continue soon and thank for pm me👏



Thanks ! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

abhay and piya always fighting😆 poor pia😭 these dobriyals😡



Dobriyals ko jaldi apni galtiyon ka ehsaas hoga . Unka band bajne wala hai .😆
Thanks for commenting . 😃

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