Complete OS : The Most Awaited - Page 6

Originally posted by: ..Jenny..

<font color="#990099">awesome👍🏼.u should continue ur os writing</font>

thanx Jenny 😳 yup ! m writing more 😛

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

<font size="4">@Saayaniz: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊</font>

thanks 😳 m glad that u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: rosamale

oh... y did u do this😭😭😭u made me cry😭😭😭poor Abhay and Piya...

but, the OS was really supeb...i miss Abhiya

ohh...don cry plz ! Otherwise I have ghumao ur comment as u cried means my writing was very good 😎 so thanx for the tarif 🤣

Originally posted by: mandy1024

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Sayu this was a beautiful OS dear 👏0„2But really really very sad 😭0„2It was ironic to see that the guy every girl fell for, fell for a girl who had few days left with her 0„2It was so well written esp the starting I loved it 😃0„2Abhay cursing those girls n mentally cursing his luck when he welcomed all the female freshers who were already drooling on him(well I dont blame them 😆) n they wanted to know his name rather than thank him for his welcome but then he comes across one girl who is unlike any in the party - a reticent shy girl who tells him a simple thank u n this is a life changing moment for him 😳0„2Then he tries hard to win her affections but she doesn seem to reciprocate his feelings 0„2In a ditch attempt he lies to her hoping he'll get to be with her by winning her sympathy. But alas fate had different plans for him 😭0„2The day he decided to meet Pia in her home he walked in on her funeral 😭0„2The letter part was very sad but very touching 👏0„2It was fab dear 👏0„2I really wish I could say what I felt when I read it. All I can say is my eyes were filled with tears when I read that part 😭0„2Anyways do write more 😳0„2n thanks for the PM 😊</font>

it was sooo great to see ur comment Mandy 😳 I love ur comments 😃 thank God ! U rn't mad at me like others for separating Abhiya , otherwise tume vi ghumake thanx bolna padhta 😆 thanx for loong & wonderful comment 🤗

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

U r so so so bad sayu !!! i hate u 😭😭😭 how can u do dis ??? u made me cry 😭 after ages i was reading any os n just because it was written by u but u 😡 ... u dont how kamzor heart i m when it comes to abhiya . 😭 ... now i'll think only about this whole night
u write it so well ... bus isse zada tareef nh hoti dukhi heart se ...

Ayu !! U hate me bcoz I wrote an OS 😲 ?? Waise thanx for the last line 'u write it so well' 😆

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great os nice ending
but this made me cry reading it
merry christmas

thanx for liking it 😳
well ! (Very very) blated merry christmass 😆

Originally posted by: Trouble.

Beautiful OS Sayu😭

Do write more bt nt sad ones😡

thanx Prima 🤗 yup...m trying to write happy happy stuffs nowadays 😆

Originally posted by: meerubzara

wonderful emotional os. . no words to describe
very well written

thanx for liking it 😳

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Comment edited on pg 2

I saw & replied 😃

Originally posted by: bellaaa

beautiful os sayu
well written
just love the way describe abhays feeling and how he made a lie to piya but i felt fishy something and that letter shit yar i m typing and crying too😭 it just me made cry baby...cant imagine to let piya die...its very touchy and emotional os...poor abhiya their ending didnt be happy

thanx for commenting Beeni 😳 m so glad that u liked it 😃 yah ! Ending wasn't happy...but just think it other way...they were so special to each other that inspite of so many perils they secured some priceless memories wid each other 😳