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Hey friends 🤗 This is my first try to write an OS 😊 & obviously my every "first" creation goes on Abhiya , so when I thought to write an OS , I decided I will write it on Abhiya 😳 (though I don writer on any other couple 😆 ) So here goes my first OS , "The Most Awaited" 😊
Actually it turned out so long , I had to break it in parts 😔 , plz keep scrolling 😊 . I have posted it in 5 parts & m quiet confused should I call it OS or SS 😕 but as I am completing it at one go , m calling it a OS 😊
Please be patient & read it out & if u like it hit the like button 😳 & pasand aye na aye ek comment to banta hi hai 😉

& I guess I did lots of typing mistakes ignore them plz 😃

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The most awaited

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Something is going to happen today . I don't know what , but today , throughout the whole day I am feeling like something very different is going to happen . At the very first moment after I woke up this morning I had a very different feeling and the strange thing is the feeling did not fade away with time , instead it persisted throughout the whole day . Even at this time of evening I am having the same feeling , infact I am feeling as if something most awaited going to happen in my life . "Something most awaited" ! What it can be ? I , Abhay Raichand , the one & only son of the rich , classy , aristrocrat Raichand family , the future owner of Raichand empire , who always got everything even before demanding , is waiting for something ? Sounds funny ! But is it ? Nope , it does not seem funny to me anymore . As if I can feel now I have waited for something special for ages and today I am going to have it . Today , right now ! Errr...right now ? Right now I am standing at the hall of Mount college , supervising the last minute preparation of the Freshers Welcome party which is going to start within an hour . Here ? In this party I am expecting the "most awaited" event of my life to take place ? Sounds really foolish ! I know what is exactly going to happen in this party . Some more stupid , brainless girls are going to get added in my "fan list" . Yes , fortunately (or should I say unfortunately ?) my face looks pretty good & due to my regular gymming habbit I have an well maintained body too . So every now & then stupid girls keep falling for me . Atleast 80% of the girls (obviously of my age) in Dehradun has proposed me . Some with expensive cards , some with hand written letters . The rest 20% spared me because either they are too shy to send such open proposal to a boy , or they already have a boyfriend . Sometimes I notice even some boys too keep drooling at me ! May be they try to figure out how can I be so perfect or they hope to find out atleast one imperfect feature on me so that by pointing to that they can keep theur girlfriends away from me . Stupid boys ! They should understand that they don't have any danger from me . I am just least interested in their so called girlfriends . Till now so many girls tried to be in my girlfriend's post , but I didn't find anyone who deserves that . Its not only they are not pretty or they are not smart , its just that id didn't click ! None seems so perfect to me that I can surrender my heart to her . I myseld don't know exactly what I want in my life partner , but I know I will recognise her at the very first glance .

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Well well ! The party started ! I was lost in my thoughts so much I didn't even notice that students have started to arrive . It was one of the teachers who brought me to the current world and handed over a bunch of roses & welcome cards . Hmm...so being the most attractive personality I got the responsibility to welcome the new girls wherw as miss self announced college diva T (she calls herself that , infact I don't remember her full name too) got the responsibility to welcome the boys ! God saves those poor boys ! Well , I guess I should now concentrate on my job , what I have to do is just to give a rose & a card to every new girl and have to say "Welcome to our college" . God ! Save me from those girls please . I don't want any new stupid proposal cards or letters. But I don't think I am going to be that much lucky . The way the girls are showing their teeth to me and drooling at me in such an weird manner I am sure I am going to get plenty of them . Infact the way some girls are showing enthusiasm in knowing my name , instead of saying thanks I am afreaid they are planning to write those letters right in this party ! Please God no ! 15 or 16 more stupid proposals can not be my "most awaited" thing !!

"Thank you" a sweet voice came to me . While all girls were almost shouting in excitement , this girl thanked me in a quiet , controlled voice which forced me to look down at her and when I looked down I just kept looking at her . I felt perhaps I am drooling at her in the same way the the girls keep drooling at me , but I just can't help it ! I tried hard , but could not shift my eyes from her face . Her wide baby brown eyes , filled with childlike amusement , her rose petals like lips , curved in a sweet smile and that loads of curly hair , lightly tied by a scarf ... I don't know what I saw in them , but I felt like something clicked somewhere deep in my heart and to my utter disbelief I found this time I am asking " Hi ! Whats your name ?"
She looked up to me widening her brown eyes , as if she could not belief I am talking to her . After a little pause she replied with a heart stealing smile "Piya , Piya Jaiswal !" , but she did not stand anymore for further conversation , walked away from me towards the party .

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Before setting for the college I checked the papers inside those envelops again , if all documents are looking real or not . Umm...according to me unless a doctor none can spot these are fake , I doubt if a doctor too can ! What I have to do is to just grab Piya somewhere alone and make her listen to me . Its been a week , a long week since I met Piya Jaiswal . And in those seven days , I will not lie , I have thought only about her . My sixth sense was right that day . Seriously I got the "Most Awaited" gift of my life . A perfect girl , I don't know about the rest of the world , and I don't care too . By perfect I meant perfect for me and yes ! She is just perfect for me ! She is the only girl I waited for so long , she is the only girl to whom I surrendered my heart at the very first moment I saw her . Now its just I need to tell her how much I love her , how desperately I want to be with her . But the problem is she is not going to listen to me so easily . In previous one week I atleast three times tried to talk to her , but everytime she avoided me saying she does not have time . Why everytime she always remain in such a great hurry ? A girl does not have time to listen to Abhay Raichand ? It could have hurt my ego , but it did not . My 1 week long observation noticed not only me , she does not listen to anyone ! She avoids everyone , even the girls too ! Why the hell she loves so much to be alone ? But no more Piya ! I am not going to leave you alone anymore . Can't you feel how desperately I want to be with you ? You have to listen to me Piya . I will make you listen to me . If for this I have to lie about myself its fine ! You left no other choice ! I know by lying I may win your sympathy , not your love and when you will come to know about it perhaps you will hate me the most . But what to do Piya ? I tried so many time to talk to you , but you did not stop for me , atleast this way I can make you stop , I can make you listen to me ! And I have full faith after listening to me you will not walk away from me . Its such a perfect plan !

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I was done with my classes almost an hour ago , but I am waiting for Piya's classes to end . Today she has to listen to me ! Oh ! There she is ! She is looking so innocent , so beautiful in that sky blur shirt & white top . Sometimes I feel I can spend the whole life just staring at her . But this is not the right time . If now I get lost in her thoughts she will simply walk away . I need to press the accelarator a little and need to stop just in front of her . As soon as I reached near her , I pushed the breaks hard and stopped just behind her . Hearing the sound of my car she turned towards me with ashtonished eyes . And perhaps got more surprised (or confused ?) seeing me inside . Opening the door of the front seat I asked in a soft tone " You need lift ?" and as I knew she rejected "No thanks !" and she started to walk again . But today I am desperate to stop her . I again pressed the accelerator a little and again stopped beside her opening the front door again . This time she looked at me with a little annoyed expression , but I pleaded again " Please ? I need to tell you something . Something very important ! Assume this is a matter of life or death !"
The last line seemed to disturb her a little . She got in the car & after closing the door she looked straight at me "Tell!"
"Umm...not here . Please please don't get off . I am telling you all just after 2 minutes !" I replied and started the engine . This 2 minutes break was necessary to me . Silence maintained in the car but I was reharsing in my mind what to say , how to say . At last I stopped the car beside the road and from my trouser's pocket I brought out the envelops . She was noticing me curiously and now asked "Whats this ?" as I held those envelops in front of her .
"Some pathological reports you need to see" I tried to keep my voice as much expressionless as I can .
She read the papers inside silently & then again looked at me with confused eyes . I again tried to keep my voice expressionless "The reports are mine . I am a cancer patient ." I glanced at her for once . She is listening to me with great attention . I continued "Yes , I am a cancer patient of last stage and I have only few months more of my life ."
"Oh ! I am so sorry !" she whispered as her eyes filled up with tears , "I never ever imagined it . But why are telling all these to me ?" her voice choaked in emotion .
Oh my God ! Is she crying ? Just now I realised I just can't stand tears in her eyes ! Damn !! I am feeling to slap myself tight ! Gosh ! My lies put her in pain ! I wish ! I wish I could tell her all these are lie , simple lie ! Don't cry please ! But the gun is already fired ! & I can't take the bullet back . I just managed to speak up my reharsed words " See , I just want you to know I love you ! I love you like crazy ! And I can't leave without you ! I know you like to be alone . But please ! You can see its just a matter of few months . Please allow me to be with you ! For the last few days of my life I want to be happy & I will be happy only being with you ! Please please let me be with you ! Please accept me !" This time I could not keep my voice expressionless , it was really a tough job for me now .
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She looked at me silently for a long time , I was afraid to look into her eyes again , I just don't want to see tears in those eyes again . But this time there was not any trace of tears , there was just a silent blankness . Yes , blankness ! Her eyes looked so blank , face so expressionless I just could not make out what is going on in her mind . Finally she broke the silence and asked with a pale smile "You think being with me you will be happy ?" the blankness returned in her eyes again , with a deep sigh she continued "No ! You don't know ! I can't give you anything except sorrow !"
What is she talking about ? Why is she talking in this way ? The guilt of lying to her was already slapping me , and now her words... Emotion took over me . I gently cupped her face with my hands and whispered "No ! You are wrong ! You can never ever make me sad ! You don't know what being with you means to me , you just don't know how much I love you !"
A few drops of tears spilled out from her eyes and she wishpered "I know ! I know!"

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Its the sixth time I am opening the box and seeing the ring again . Beautiful ! I just hope she likes it too ! Yes ! I can only hope ! Oh God ! I never ever felt so nervous before today ! Yes , I am nervous ! Abhay Raichand is damn nervous today ! Because today I am going to end this drama , today I am going to tell all the truth to Piya . Yes ! Today I will remain sticked to my mission tell the truth . Its been 1 and half months Piya is with me , and so far I lied her enough ! Now no more ! Now its the time for truth only ! Its not that I did not try to tell her the truth before , but everytime my fear overcame me and I remained silent . But today I am desperate I will tell her the truth ! I don't know how she will react . Most probably she will just slap me and walk way ! & will hate me for the rest of the life . God ! That will be too hard to bear ! But ... I don't know why I am feeling she too can't live without me for long , I have full faith eventually I will be able convince her & she will come back to me again . Or may be right today she agrees to listen to me ? May be right today she will agree to listen why did I do that ? May be she will understand me will accept this ring too ?? Am I expecting too much ? Perhaps...but... Please God ! Please let everything fall in place , please make everything fine , please !! But...when will she come ? I gave a short glance at the clock , its already 10 minutes past 6 p.m . She never comes late , what happened today ? Should I call her & ask if she is trapped in any trafic jam ? Should I... Oh ! My phone is already ringing ! Now who is it ? I brought my phone out of my pocket & I found its showing Piya's number on the screen . But why is she calling me ? Is she planning not to come ? I nervously accepted the call . "Hello Abhay?" the pale voice sounded as if its coming from a long distance . Why is her voice sounding like this ?
I could not hide my worry"Yes Piya ! Tell me ! What happened ?"
The voice hesitated a little and then said "Actually Abhay ! I can't come today . I am not feeling well."
"Not feeling well ? What happened ? Can I come to visit you ?" Piya is not well ! This news made me crazy ! What happened to her ??
"Relax ! Relax ! Just down with a little fever ! I'm taking medicine and I'll be fine soon . And you remember you've promised me that you will not come to my house untill I say ? Mom doesn't know anything about you ! How will she react ?"
"Ya...but...without seeing you... I mean..." I could not find any right word to complete the sentence . From other side a faint chuckle came to my ear "Don't worry so much please ! Umm...ok ! I will call you everyday untill I afford to go out . Happy ?"
"Ok . As you say . But if you forget to call , I will . Ok ?"
"Ok!"
"You took medicine ?"
"Yup ! I did ! & now I'm feeling sleepy!"
"Then have a sleep dear !"
"Ok ! Bye ! "
"Bye !"

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I will go crazy ! Now I will surely go crazy ! Without seeing Piya I can't stay a single mintue normal now ! 2 weeks , long 2 weeks I spent without seeing her ! Last time I saw her 2 weeks ago ! After that I only talked to her through phone & from past five days I didn't even hear her voice ! She has stopped calling me five days ago & whenever I tried to call her the same machinery voice informed me "The number you are trying to call is currently switched off !" Gosh ! Whats actually going on ? From today I am feeling such an weird feeling ! The worst possibility ticking in my mind ! Did she come to know about the truth herself ? And decided to break her relation with me ? No ! That just can not happen ! I will surely go mad if she leaves me ! No ! No ! She can't leave me ! I will not let her leave me ! Sorry Piya , I know I promised you that I will not come to your home untill you call me . But... I need to talk to you , I need to talk to you so desperately ! Just for once you have to listen to me . Just for once more you have to talk to me ! I breathed a deep breath while pressing the calling bell's switch . A middle aged woman opened the door . I know her , I saw her photo in Piya's scrapbook . She is Piya's mother . But she is looking so pale & sad ! Did anything wrong happen here ? I nervously spoke up " Hi aunty ! I am Abhay . Perhaos you don't know me , actually I..."
She cut me in between "Piya told me about you . One second , she told me to give you a letter . I just ..." her voice choaked in tears , but before I could ask anything she walked back in the home , keeping me standing at the door . A mild smell of incence stick caught my attention . I looked in curiously and just got frozen there ! I don't know in surprise or in shock or in disbelief ! But I just kept standing there like a statue , I felt my legs became so heavy I can't move even a single inch ! Standing there I just kept staring at those burning sticks helplessly which were lightened up in front of a garlanded photo . The girl in the photo is so so familier to me ! I saw her face so many times in my dreams ! I spent so many time just staring at that beautiful face ! So many time I got lost in those wide brown eyes , so many time I wanted to touch those rosy lips , so many time... Piya's mother came back & handed me a folded letter . I was still frozen there , I couldn't move , I couldn't ask anything . Perhaps at this moment I have forgotten how to speak . Just in a trance I took the letter , opened it & started to read .

Dear Abhay ,
When you will be reading this letter , I will not be with you , infact will not remain part of this world too . Yes , it was preplanned , it was decided long before that I have to leave this world soon . I was in 10th standard when doctors concluded that I have just few more years of life left to live , just few more years ! My parents tried to hide this news from me , but I always have been very much intelligent . So , in 12th standard I finally found out that I am suffering from cancer and will be on this earth just for few months more . Trust me , I didn't feel much sad . Why should I ? I already have lived 17 years of my life and still have a few more months to live ! So many people on this earth dies early by accidents , atleast I am not going to be such an accidental case ! Atleast I got the time to prepare myself for that ! And you know ? I was fully prepared for it , totally prepared untill...untill you came in my life . You saw that I used to avoid everyone , you must have wondered what an unsocialised creature I am ! But actually that was just a part of my preparation . I was afraid to make new friends , because I knew in return of their love , care I have nothing to give them ! Not even time ! After knowing the truth I even walked away from my old friends too ! I don't know what they have concluded about me . I don't know if now they hate me . I don't even want to know . I just want to remember once they loved me . Thats enough . I was fully prepared even to bear hatred , but was fully determined not to tell the truth . I can tolerate hatred , but its too hard to stand sympathy ! I always stayed away from everyone & did every possible thing that can keep people away from me . But you ? Seriously telling , I never ever met such a stubborn person like you ! Everyone stayed away from me , but you did not ! Everytime I tried to avoid you , next day you again came back to me ! You even lied to come closer to me ! Shocked ??? Don't be ! Right at that moment seating in your car I made out that you are simply lying ! There were so many faults in your plan do you know ? Firstly a cancer patient does not drive any car alone . Before cancer kills him , he himself will kill him doing accidents ! Secondly a patient does not carry his reports in his jeans' pocket ! They usually supposed to maintain a file . Thirdly the report papers were brand new , even they were spreading the smell of new papers , but the date on the papers claiming they are 2 year old ! Fourth , the envelop ...forget it ! I don't want to embarass you proving my intelligence . You thought you fooled me , but actually I knew the truth from begining ! Have you ever asked yourself how much bad your performances are when it comes to lying ? Your mouth was saying the practiced words , while your eyes were telling the truth from very begining .
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I could see the truth in your eyes . You know your eyes always expresses whats going on your mind ? That day too was no exception . Along with the truth I saw something more . I saw love , pure love ...for me . Before you could speak out your eyes told me how much you love me . "Love" ! Only the word is enough to make a person weak , to make a person selfish . That day I too became selfish , I don't know why , but suddenly , inspite of my months long preparation , its hard , its very much hard to stay away from you , from your true love . Just for the last few days of my life I wanted to taste actually what love is ! Now I can realise how selfish I have been ! I should have rejected you that day , I should not have allowed you to get attached to me . But that time I could not , I really could not . Days passed by and I myself don't know when I got habituated with your company , secretly I started to relive , relish those moments I spent with you . I myself don't know when I too fell in love with you ! Everyday I could see your hesitations in your eyes , you wanted to tell me the truth so desperately , but everyday willingly , with full intention I used to distract you and you used to end up by telling nothing new . I was so much scared Abhay ! If somehow you manage to speak the truth , I would have lost the reason to be with you and it was just so hard for me to stay away from you . I know , I became so selfish , I only thought about my happiness , never thought with each passing day I am attaching you more and more with me ! You know Abhay , I used to think I am fully prepared to welcome my death , but I was so wrong ! On these last days everyday , everytime I used to pray like crazy to God to give me somedays more , so that I can spend them with you ! I secretly used to complain why ? Why this happened with me ? Why I can't be with you forever ? Why ? Damn it ! Why ? You know Abhay...these days lying on bed I really feel so bored . I desperately want to meet you , to see your face for one last time . But I know , I know I need to controll myself . Leaving you alone I am already pushing you to such a pain , showing myself in this condition I just can not increase the burdain more .
Gosh ! This letter is going on so long ! You must be feeling boring now ! But whenever I am realising this is my last messege to you , I am feeling to write more and more . Don't get scared . I am not going to bore you anymore . Just one thing , before leaving I want to say Thank You . Thank you so much for coming in my life , thank you so much for making my last few days so beautiful ! Thank you for everything you gave me & sorry for leaving you in this way . But I don't have any other option left ! Just a last wish Abhay , promise me you will not do anything stupid . You will find new reasons to be happy . Like they shows in films or novels , I will not say forget me , I know thats too much to ask for , but please , please promise me you will welcome all new happyness in your life with a big smile . I don't know where I am reaching to , to heaven or hell , but wherever I will be , I will always want to see you happy , to see you enjoying your life . Promise me , you will fulfill my every wish , promise me !

Wishing you a healthy , wealthy , prosperous and most important a joyous life ahead !
Yours , only yours ,
Piya .

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yipee me 1st

loved the os❤️ sayu its awesome👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

This was damn awesome sayu!
Bt u made me cry 😭.Story touched my heart bt cant see Abhiya separated.Already i still cry whenever i remember dat OS by Indu😭.
Abhay's prank came as a disaster 4 him.He wud never hav thought anything like this.
Letter was just beautiful n heart touching.

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome writen yr..

y did u do this??no na...y pia dead...y?abhiya happy married life reh skte the na ...then..k.CONCEPT.

it ws beautifully written..loved it...abhay k fans...girls..omg..itna zooth fr girl.aww..bfore pia die abhiya happy moMents likhni thi na.-k.end n tht lettr ws awesm-u wrote nice feelings al.at last-loved written- only urs pia-dum hai-bt m sad for this n for abhay.but nice os-keep it up.geny.

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breathtaking os.a v heart touching.take a bow for penning down such an emotional os.im replying with teary eyes.cant write more in reply.but i must say this is it.

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