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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

@Saayaniz: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

oh... y did u do this😭😭😭 u made me cry😭😭😭 poor Abhay and Piya...

but, the OS was really supeb...i miss Abhiya

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Sayu this was a beautiful OS dear 👏 But really really very sad 😭 It was ironic to see that the guy every girl fell for, fell for a girl who had few days left with her It was so well written esp the starting I loved it 😃 Abhay cursing those girls n mentally cursing his luck when he welcomed all the female freshers who were already drooling on him(well I dont blame them 😆) n they wanted to know his name rather than thank him for his welcome but then he comes across one girl who is unlike any in the party - a reticent shy girl who tells him a simple thank u n this is a life changing moment for him 😳 Then he tries hard to win her affections but she doesn seem to reciprocate his feelings In a ditch attempt he lies to her hoping he'll get to be with her by winning her sympathy. But alas fate had different plans for him 😭 The day he decided to meet Pia in her home he walked in on her funeral 😭 The letter part was very sad but very touching 👏 It was fab dear 👏 I really wish I could say what I felt when I read it. All I can say is my eyes were filled with tears when I read that part 😭 Anyways do write more 😳 n thanks for the PM 😊

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

U r so so so bad sayu !!! i hate u 😭😭😭 how can u do dis ??? u made me cry 😭 after ages i was reading any os n just because it was written by u but u 😡 ... u dont how kamzor heart i m when it comes to abhiya . 😭 ... now i'll think only about this whole night
u write it so well ... bus isse zada tareef nh hoti dukhi heart se ...

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow great os nice ending
but this made me cry reading it
merry christmas

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Beautiful OS Sayu😭

Do write more bt nt sad ones😡

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wonderful emotional os. . no words to describe
very well written

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

beautiful os sayu
well written
just love the way describe abhays feeling and how he made a lie to piya but i felt fishy something and that letter shit yar i m typing and crying too😭 it just me made cry baby...cant imagine to let piya die...its very touchy and emotional os...poor abhiya their ending didnt be happy

Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

sayu this is so long 😲

now i cnt read as im sleepy.. will read tmrw

m commenting now coz i promised u tht by tmrw morning my comment will be there 😆

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

sorry sayi 4 late comment but i was ov of station 4 xams and today only i came back and first think i did was to open pkyek forum... i love ur os its beautifull... hearttouching... emotional... the way u present story is admirable and thanks that u write ur first os on abhiya...

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