Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

That was a superb OS Indu...absolutely brilliant..loved it 👏

You portrayed the essence of forbidden relationships, their passion, the pull and the strange but strong attraction superbly. true dark love story should be like this. Loved it

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

amazing dark story... plz write more

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

It ws seriously an amazing os...
Beautifully written...

Omg... I just loved it... 😊

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

omg!!!!!! its amazing indu... superb

abhay ws evil bt dnt knw wht forced him 2 save her ????????

its wriiten straight 4m d hrt ... 👏 👏 👏 keep writing 🤗

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I was stunned reading this OS. Absolute fantabulous. 👏 Forbidden name itself is so dark and everything is so fab. Good work. 👍🏼

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

First of all take a bow for writing such an awesome os.brilliant.i was just lost in it while reading feeling piyas emotions and abhays helplessness.great job.thanx for pm.

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

indu darling...it was ZAKASSS... U KNOW...EXCELLENT...JusT TUMHARE TYPE KA..awesome written each feelling of abhay...a vampire..n pia too..wow...loved it very much. .mere dil ko chhu gya...suprb...heart touching...tera jwab nhi..LAJWAB..

plz cont.krogi...kuch bhi chalega in second part..plz..

Indu...u know..u r fantastic Writer...love u.

Edited by sukugeny - 12 years ago