Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26 - Page 4

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tora man, how do u manage to outdo me everytime to res the first spot in Indu's works? 😲 😛 Coming to the update, I applaud u for trying to do something outside the norm dear 👏 Thats a feat in itself ⭐️ And no, I doubt if anyone can say this is ur first attempt to write something dark. It was written beautifully as usual 👏 you know very well how doubtful i was at first,weather i could pull it out well,but good that it came out not too bad atleast!😆 you always flatter me...😛 but thanks dear. 😳 your comments always inspire me..😳

I loved the way u depicted Abhay's dark nature. He is a beast n this is something he can never run away from. ya, sometimes the beast is far from light and thats what i tried to show here.

U have depicted Abhiya encounters wonderfully here 👏 The fatal, forbidden attraction, ah Its enticing, captivating in itself 😳 Because the heart be it dead or human, always craves whats forbidden to it. hm..yes its too hard to resist!

In case of humans, tats the case most of the times n for monsters the pull is even more 😳 Can I really blame Pia for losing herself to Abhay? 😆 n the fact that Abhay was attracted to Pia, her blood sang to him, alluring him to have a taste of the heavenly nector. So Abhay here was a monster in the true sense? yes he is a born predator here! his birth is quite interesting and also that what makes him doomed!

No wonder Chand was livid at him. Sometimes too much of attempts at trying to restrain the monster will only unleash the beast wrecking havoc n Chand let Abhay have his way so that he could go about on a murdering rampage coz once his thirst was satiated he could keep the beast at bay But when Abhay finally went in for the kill, he realised that there could be something more important to him than draining the girl dry n tat was her life 👏 Brilliant job here Indu 👏yes when the time came he couldnot do what he went for,rather he did something entirely opposite that goes against his very nature...!!

Loved the last part where Abhay pulled back, healed Pia n left her. True he can never be the one for her, for they were worlds apart. How this beast who revelled in death n despair envied the humans who were his prey just bcoz one among them could be fortunate enough to be her soulmate was portrayed beautifully 😳 n dear its anything but faltu n I suppose u shd write more on this genre, for this wat a true dark love story should be like 👏 thank you.😳 i thought am pathetic at this you know...!😆 but ya will definitely try to only if i get ideas,and ya i might give two more updates i guess,considering the high demand...😉 and thanks again for such a big n beautiful comment dear...😊 it always means a lot...🤗

Originally posted by: Rmuk

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Indu fantastic OS i would say!!! I just loved the way u arranged and described each and everything of this OS. Just outstanding. U know u deserve several applauses for writing such a dark concept so beautifully. U did justice to each and every character here, marvellous job dear!!! thank you so much romi. 😳you always shower me with praise...😆
I loved the way u showed and depicted abhay's dark character, nature everything here, his state of mind in every scene was explained beautifully!!! yes abhay is a complete beast here,so his character has to be dark,glad you liked it. 😊
I just loved piya and arnab convo at first it wae funny and hsd a light moment. ya i wanted to add some light element. 😊

Abhiya's first meeting was ufff just brilliant. The feelings, the attraction everything was written wonderfullu yaar. thanks.😳
Abhay and chandeena convo was awesome. Chand let the beast set free and have it's way to fulfill it's thirst but the beast at last couldn't kill it's prey at last.
I just loved the last part, ufff the way first abhay pinned piya then bit her, but atlast couldn't drain her dry. He saved her with his own blood and was about to leave but the prey has now already lost herself to the beast. I loved the little bit convo u showed between abhiya atlast my god just fab that was. thank you. even i enjoyed writing this part very much.😊
I loved the concept u know. Abhay a born prediator wow sounds just amazing and u had done full justice to his character. i wanted to add something new so changed the concept into a beast who was a born predator.
Writing this kind of dark genre is really complicated and hard but hats off to u for writing it so beautifully, I am looking forward for future works of urs like this. i was doubtful you know how it would turn out but glad it came out alright. will try dear,cant say for sure! 😊

Once more just superb work, u are just a terrific writer, gr8 job!!
And yea forgot to mention I am really sorry for commenting so late Indu hope u won't mind. Thanks for the pm and this outstanding OS. u'r welcome dear. and its perfectly ok..ya i know...no probs...😊 and thanks so much for this wonderful comment dear. it means a lot 😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's beautiful story
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Wow, another story on vampire Abhay and human Piya. Great. But you said that its a OS. So just 3-4 chaps?

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tora man, how do u manage to outdo me everytime to res the first spot in Indu's works? 😲 😛 that's my magic 😆...i have the speed of light😉