An Abhiya OS: I am with you forever..edited-- - Page 2

Ok first of all so sorry for unresing so late but the thing is that I am writing same comment from the third time god two times it got deleted 😔
Awesome, amazing, beautiful, brilliant OS yaar!!! Gosh I don't know what to say now, can't find proper words to express myself currently.
U are truly a mindblowing writer yaar!!!!
I loved the concept totally it was unique in it's way, but just amazing!!! Each and everything u described from starting till end was just amazing re!!! U literally made me cry. First the nature's description, then the way piya made alisha feel the nature's beauty, then their convo was so so beautiful yaar.
Then all the relations whether of alisha-piya or piya and her mother or abhiya were just beautifully described!!!
I was feeling like crying when abhay died but while piya read that letter it made me to cry in reality. Gosh I was just feeling each and every emotion piya was going through that time because u expressed them so perfectly. U framed every character so perfectly in just a single OS and hats off to u for that!!!
The last part was so emotional yaar, piya's mother just one call brought back piya clearly showing the spl place she still had for her mother and it was excepted, a child heart will always hold a spl place for her/his parents despite of every odds and this is natural.
The way u ended the OS was just amazing gosh piya imagined abhay on that apple tree smiling, it was so emotional, no matter what abhay will live in her heart always, with her, in her nemories, coz love never dies, so perfect theme!!!
Everything from the beggining, the way abhiya met, their budding love, their convo everything were so brilliantly written re!!! I loved that winter convo wala part most it said many unsaid things, it was so so deep yaar!!!
Once more, just amazing OS, all the adjectives will fall short for describing this masterpiece!!! Hats off to u!!!
u rock totatlly and I must say this one is one of ur best work so far!!!
Keep writing!!!
Gr8 job!! Loved it!!!

All I can say is, my breath caught reading it.

Wat a mesmerizing os.wonderful.im still in a trance.breathtaking nd a v v v well written os.superb.thanx a lot for pm.

dat was beautiful..
very well written..
thanxx for d pm.

so beautiful...buy still u made me cry..😭damn now the whole night i wouldnt able to sleep...have to spend the night crying.like what i'm doing now😭😭

Oh MY GOODNESSS! I had tears in my eyes after reading this n before my mom cud see me i wiped them off!
This was so soo beautiful,touched d deepest strings of my heart!
Another beautiful meaning of love ny Abhiya! It doesnt matter u always xpress ur love,it doesnt matter u r always together,physical proximities dont matter,d bond of heart n soul doesnt need anything at all;it is too deep n pure 2 be xplained in words bt u made it n did it sooo beautifully dat i m speechless n yes this story can only be imagined with Abhiya;only Abhiya can make it alive! Though i cant see Abhiya separated n it had sad ending bt it was soo beautiful;it will always remember it!
U r an awesome writer n u shud no...no u must write more,we r blessed indeed in having a writer like u!

awesm update...indu.u back with bang...its nice os...next part milega...plz..

Its such a beautiful o.s indu.just lovd each n every part.
the descreption was awesum.plus-the letter was mind blowing yar.its too too too beautiful.