An Abhiya OS: I am with you forever..edited-- - Page 8

Originally posted by: shria

ye kya😡😡😡 meelu tujhe teacher ne nahi sikhaya sharing is caring

Originally posted by: ilove99

fine i can give u this but not chokie 😃

Originally posted by: ilove99

who?ranveer?or wait...is it Justin biber?🤣

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Sorry for unreserving this late but well ur responsible too in a way u know 😛 its alright dear..no probs..😊 After reading the ending trust me I literally cried 😭 It was so so beautiful! aww..sorry for making you cry dear.. Ur best by far 👏 Hats off to u for tat 👏 thanks mansa dear...🤗 everytime i read your comments it makes me soo.. happy...😳

Well wat shd I call u now? Idiot, moron, duffer, stupid, crazy etc etc etc 😡 n u know perfectly know y I am hurling all the profanities at u now 😛 chill dear..relax...😛yaa..i know..! 😆 U say u write badly or not upto the mark or watever crap it is u think abt ur own writing abilities Then wat do u have to say abt this, huh? 😡 i donno...😕but i feel my updates aren't upto the mark..🥱 One more time u dish out tat crap to me, I swear I'll come over to chase u with a broom 😛 please come..will be very happy..atleast i will get to meet you...😛😉 Now I wonder how I shall go abt our joint FF 😕 I can never ever write something so subtle n beautiful 😳 again you..!! 😡 stop saying this please! you are a prolific n efficient writer yourself! so please dont embarrass me by saying such things!

I just loved the way u started this OS 👏 Pia admiring nature n making her friend who doesn seem to care much to stay back n appreciate it 😊 Looks like ur a big nature lover urself else there's no way u could have written this out so well 😊 there you are right dear..i am a big nature lover! 😊 glad you liked it this much..😳 Loved Abhiya's first encounter n our Abhay was charming as usual n this is the best characterisation of Abhay I have ever come across 😳 ohh..thank you soo much mansa...😳 your compliment always means a lot dear..😳 even i enjoyed portraying this abhay!😳 Infact reminded me of Eric Segal n Sparks 😉 now you are exagerrating..😛please don't embarrass me dear..😳Eric segal..sparks..omg!! i will faint!

Pia seemed to love her mom who was way too ambitions to spare a moment to understand her own child yes she was not bad person but she never thought its important to give time to her daughter until that day when she got the news of a devastating pia! The way u portrayed their relationship was fantastic. U literally bring ur characters alive with ur words 😳 thank you dear..😳 Also loved Abhiya bonding 👏 It was so pure, so chaste n u depict it so wonderfully n I am really in awe of ur writing skills 😃 thanks. i always look forward to your comments..they mean a lot..😳Also loved their moment when they discuss abt seasons. It was very significant to this story n the moment Abhay told her not to fall in love I picked up on the clue that something was wrong n also when he seemed to hesitate to take Gomz to hospital I realised its not bcoz he doesn want to but he isn in a condition to do it all by himself BTW wat was he suffering from? glad you liked the season part dear..i was worried how it would turn out..or whether readers would like this concept! 😕but happy to know you liked it..😊 yes there was the reason abhay behaved that way.he knew he didnot have much time in hand so he wanted pia not to fall for him..but love cant be planned neither it can be resisted..it happens when it has to happen..no one can hold it..and thats Love! 😳 hmm..actually i didnot wanted to highlight on his illness part so i kept it untold...to retain the focus on his larger than life image...and let the readers decide on their own...!

Then the moment when Alisia comes to tell Pia abt Abhay breathing his last 😭 Pia who had already began to feel something for Abhay felt shattered n couldn pull herself together. She couldn even bring herself to read the last note Abhay had left for her 😭 Only one person could pull her out of her trance n tat had to be the one who had been absent for most part of her life 😭 - Her mom! yes pia was totally shattered! it was because of her mom that she came into light..i gave this part to show that love no matter which form it is in..always generates hope...😊 though pia spent hardly much time with her mother but that could not fade the love she had for her..neither abhay's physical absence could weaken the strong feeling..or namely love..that pia had and will always have for him...😳.

It was heartbreaking to read that letter part. I wish I could quote a particular line that touched my heart the most but I am unable to as the whole thing is beautiful in itself. Trust me thats the best piece of writing u have ever written 👏 aww..thank you dear...😳 i thought a lot while writing the letter part..and am glad that it came out well...😳

All in all a heartbreaking 🥺 but brilliant OS 👏 I would have commented yesterday itself but I was too emotional 😭 Couldn bring myself to do it aww..its alright dear..am just happy you commented...😊and thanks again for such a long and beautiful comment dear...🤗