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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

it was simply beautiful. I am speechless!

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow fabulous os
thanks for pm

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

after a week i came to indiaforums and the first thing i read was this beautiful os.😊... but i am angry with you😡... you made me cry yaar😭😭😭 you know, i hate crying but i am sure, even a stone hearted person will also cry after reading this😊 you are such a marvelous writer👏 thanks for the pm😃

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

kameeni 😳

i dun say it usually but u made me say it!!!! no...not because this story has a melancholy ending!!

Because I was crying while reading this... i don't know whether the crying thing was becoz i got emotional or bcoz of those onions that mum was peeling behind me.

But one thing is sure , that the lump in ma throat is bcoz of this beautiful yet miserable os...

Its something that puts u in wonder...how such painful things can be so beautiful!! yeah have to say...you made it beautiful with no flaws!

" pia found abhay sitting in a corner,his face pale and his breathing irregular. She became alarmed and asked him if everything was alright but he assured her it was nothing but due to walking the distance under the scorching heat. "

Was it all he said? or it had the other side too?? was it bcoz of his approaching... should rather say ...approaching winter-

But you know when i read the whole thing and now i generously look at it again , i feel like - he was so right... she shouldn't have love him!!but yeah no one can stop that from cuming...

And the letter...well,to be honest while reading it one tear shredded 😆 just one ok!

n at the ending - you know its...its something to close to my heart which you wrote ... he kept his promise! and she knew he will...

fine,i know i sound like a emotional fool, my friends would laugh if they saw my comment :P

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Smriti was supporting pia while alisia was holding her hand from otherside when pia's dim eyes lit up as it fell on the tree afar and...and...there he was smilling...the mischievous and heart-warming smile...and pia knew he was here...like he promised...her lips curled into a lovely smile as she knew her abhay was here ...never to leave her...

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

flora ,shria already sent me a laughing pm so no need for u to do the same

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ilove99
flora ,shria already sent me a laughing pm so no need for u to do the same

why do u think that I will laugh at u dear.? You cried becoz u'r human so there's nothing unnatural about it dear.. 😊

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ilove99
flora ,shria already sent me a laughing pm so no need for u to do the same

nafi also sent😲😲😲 high-5 nafi😉😆😆

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

@shria,nafi - bachho meera ko tang maat karo!!

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
why do u think that I will laugh at u dear.? You cried becoz u'r human so there's nothing unnatural about it dear.. 😊

u r good na 😛 but these billi's are evil 😆