Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
so sorry shreya i was not commenting last few updates becz of my examzz...i just loved the updates...the bonding betn abhiya seem so well...of course with their complicated relationship...nice to see anisha became a little better with piya but wonder what happened if she leave...abhay never saying to her his feeling neither piya ...lets see what hppened next...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Serine update.shreya
I loved it
Abhiya were damm gud & it was gud to c Anisha interaction wid Pia
Pia has started developing feelings for Abhay & I guess.so is Abhay but wht actually happened wid Pia tht she she was so distant wid ppl at age 16?
Plz cont..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya6696

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Last update pe last and iss update pe first.. wow.. yay..
Yippie.. Me First..!!!! 🥳

Hah.. okay so.. Awesome update Shreya..🤗👏 Loved it..
I had a doubt re..
Can you tell me tere dimag mei kya khichdi pakk rahi hai..??😆 I mean bechare writers ki kyu baja rahi hai..? Last time Manasa style aur iss baar Dishu style..?? Ekdum rang biranga update and neeche wo explanations..?? Humaare saath bhi share karo yaar.. 🤣

Ab Update..
Everyone knew Leena was right, right..?😉 😳
Ahaa.. the green eyed monster popping into Piya's head.. that too for a 13 year old..? Ohoo.. 😉

Awww.. for Abhiya its always "Tu Hai Toh I'll Be Alright.." The hug did calm Abhay.. 🤗
"For you, Abhay, she thought. For you, I'll try my best to help you with that child." Awww-able.. 😳 😳

The way she was with Anisha was so good.. I loved it.. the way she could make her smile.. be it temporary.. but it was for real that Anisha smiled.. 😃
She was adorable with her.. And Abhay.. aww.. 😆
I'd agree with Abhay.. Piya could understand her so much because may be she sees her 13 (or like Abhay said 16) year old self in her..
But I really hope Anisha doesn't do anything ut-patang with Piya leaving and her being alone.. again.. 😔

" It was because Anisha was similar in some ways to the sixteen year old Piya.
Of course it is, said a voice at the back of his head. That's why you're attached to this one, aren't you?" Bang Onn.. 👍🏼

Gosh the panic attack that Piya had.. I swear all sorts of those things rushed through my mind too.. but then I thought Shreya toh ye nahi likhegi.. and you didn't.. 😛

Omg.. Time to leave.. sigh.. Time does really fly eh..? sigh.. 😒
Oh but it was necessary for Piya to get out of the house so that something can happen.. Nothing could've happened in that house, right..? 😉 😆

Handkerchief ka Dress..🤣 Sure Abhay was annoyed on the outside but I'm sure he must be ogling from the inside.. ☺️ 🤣

Ohh the Author's Note.. Like I said at the beginning.. so much like Dishu.. 😆 Ye Dishu bhi na.. I really don't understand ye log khud ko underestimate kyu karte hai.. agar ye log hi aisa karne lage toh mere jaise log kya kare jo "great" writers hai.. 🤣 🤣 point to be noted.. "Great writer like me" 🤣 🤣
But Again.. Hats Off to you for writing this on the cell..👏⭐️ and it wasn't an ounce boring.. samjhi..??? 😳 😳

Update when you can.. 🤗

and see.. I gave two lambe-chaude comments in A day..!!!! 😎





Thanks so much sweets.
Hey, its not about Dishu ok? I actually felt the update was boring, so I added something to it, that's it! I really wasn't bringing Dishu... Jab Mandy khuli ghum rahi hai how can I bajao anyone else? You temme 😛
Anisha... Yeah, Abhay was right that way. I dunno what Anisha will do 😔
and hehe panic attack :P Nahi... Likhna hota toh bang karke likhti... Not like that... You know me right 😉
Yeah, time to leave...
Nah, something will happen in that house... A very mild one though, nothing great...
Yeah, maybe you are right about Abhay on that one. :P

Haye re haye, meri asi kismat ki main khud ki criticise karun toh koi maanta nahi ki main criticise kar rahi hoon 😆
And taaliyaan for you- you commented twice that too lambe waale. Hats off re :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm



thanks a lot Alicia :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

awesum part shreya
wow pia anisha bond was too good
hope pia tell about her feelings for him fast[/DIV]



Thanks Ekta. Hmm, maybe Piya will tell him or maybe not... Lets see.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: flora212

IT WAS MINDBLOWING SHREYA! GREAT UPDATE...⭐️SO PIA IS BHAGGING BEFORE TELLING HER FEELINGS! 😆WELL ABHAY KO KUCH KUCH NAHI HUA KYA😳? ANISHA WAS SWEET. 😊WAITING FOR NEXT PART😉



Yeah, Piya is leaving. Idk Abhay ko kuch ya nahi... Let's see.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

So sorry shreya for not commenting on last few updts but read them all now. I just loved last three updates dear!!! Brilliantly written. So piya has started falling in love with abhay wow gr8. Loved abhiya conversation's in previous and this chapter. Anisha, hmmm i like her character, loved the way piya dealt with her. I hope she recovers soon. So piya is leaving gosh then abhiya will be sparated for now or something will happen now which will not allow piya to leave abhay???
last part was awesome, plz do continue soon, i am loving this ss and really u are doing a fab job!!! Superb yaar!!!



Thanks so much Romi dear, and no need to say sorry... I totally understand :)
Anisha... Lets see if she recovers or not.
Maybe Piya will leave and maybe not ... :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

</div><div>pia and anisha bonding was good
thanks for pm



Thanks Megha. Glad u liked.
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all A BIG SORRY 4 commenting so late:(

Dare u call ur update boring😡,they r anything bt boring!
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L update Shreya! I didn't use anyother adjective coz of d beautiful portrayal of developing feelings.
Piya has fallen harder 4 Abhay.Their hug was so much like coming home bt does Abhay know d reason of his solace in Piya?May be or May be not!
Anisha was cute.Abhay's attachment 2 her is due 2 her similarity wid Piya.This clears some of d doubts frm his side too.

Piya s leaving?[:o ] I mean here Piya is in tyagi mode! Why Abhay is acting casual? Well I dont expect a sudden outburst from THESE Abhiya esp bt i m impressed wid their power of suppressing overwhelming feelings.
Abhay's rxn 2 Piya's dress was just😆.

Is there more 2 Abhay's past? How he became an introvert n loner frm a fun loving guy?

This is one of my fav ffs n as I mention everytime😆,my fav portrayal of characters😳.

Again m extremely sorry 4 late comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Akansha , I am fine.. And you? :D

Thanks for liking the update.
Oh, there are going to be so many twists... :P

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