Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 56

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Thanks so much Indu.
Haan I know she defo needs it and I promise to do more 😉
Update soon... I should be telling you that... Update soon! Your comments at least... Rofl 🤣

really? thank you!😃 😉
eh? Nw u'r doing my bbb! And khulam khulla.. 😳 🤣 bt see i have dne it ths time! 😉 😛

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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fabulous update shreya!!!👏
nice way of projecting human mind..their insecurities..worries..wonderful! 👏

i liked the way you described the whole thing. The way pia noticed hm..tried to ease hs pain and helped him..was the most wonderful part..😊
pia had clearly feelings for hm..n she too knws it bt she isnt ready to let abhay knw. Why, that is mre complicating..
She askd abhay to bring anisha becz she couldnot see hm in pain bt later she got attachd to alisha nt just becz she knws girlz or she has 1 in her family like pia mentiond bt mre so becz in sum way she could relate to her. She is lonely the way alisha is, yes alisha's pain is mre severe..
I also loved the way you describd the entire thng. How pia helpd her..encouragd her n becme hr friend..all was really very well written..👍🏼
so pia will be leaving! She is nt happy becz she dsnt want to leave abhay,bt anyways everyone has acceptd the news,n to my amazement abhay 2! Bt then hw cn i forget he is a psychiatrist..maybe thts why he managed to behave indifferently unlike other stories..bt is that all..? has he really handled or will b able to deal wth it tht easily?!! I wonder.. bt nly time will tell..


I dnt knw whats in store for us bt i have a bad feeling abt alisha. Becz when every1 acceptd she was the nly 1 to nt react either in a good way or in a bad and thts a v.bad sign! I just hope nthng happns to her.
And ya 1mre thng, alisha is officially introducd in ths chapter yet your remarkable portrayal of her in just 1/2updats is truly commendable!!

The portion were pia was worried for abhay ,and he thot she was worried for alisha bt pia didnt bother to mention was again a very tactful piece of writing..the manner in whch u are presenting bth of them is so different bt interesting..it makes their character mre appealing!

I dnt knw why arent u happy wth it..to me it was quite a meaningful update! And boring..whats that? Ur updats are never so..!

And the last part-
wow abhay didnt like her dress! Pia is angry bt she shud be happy becz he cmplimentd her in the mst unusual way! It shows atleast he has a gud taste..😆

SO next is the party..am waiting for it bt mre than tht am waiting for sumthng crucial...hope the chap dsnt turn out to be a heartbreaker..

Plz update soon!!!

first off, its Anisha not Alisha :P
Thank you for paying attention to her. A lot of this chapter revolved around her, so u have my apprehensions about it being boring coz I know many ppl here want AbhIya romance but I don't do simple love stories :P

Piya is not the kind of girl who will express her feelings so well since she is still fighting her feelings for him :(
And Abhay's not the expressive Romeo either, so do you see him begging piya not to leave? No. Of course, as you say very rightly, time will tell how he handles himself on that score.
About Anisha... Well she won't be happy at Piya's going and she will in a way affect both Abhay and Piya deeply... And I'll mention her in the next update. There, a spoiler lol.

Haha, Piya has good taste too... :D

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

really? thank you!😃 😉
eh? Nw u'r doing my bbb! And khulam khulla.. 😳 🤣 bt see i have dne it ths time! 😉 😛

Rofl yeah you need BBB too :P

Originally posted by: meerubzara

superb update
like abhiya convo
anisha is very cute
continu soon

Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: maria_mahar

awesome shreya i loved it😳
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Thank you maria

Originally posted by: --sonali--

lovly update shreya.

Thanks , Sonali.

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

nice update

thanx for pm

Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

How can you say that this chapter is boring Shreya. It was really touching

It brought tears to my eyes reading about Anisha. Wish Piya takes her with her.

I am sure Abhay would miss Piya once she leaves and same would be the case with Piya too.

You are a very good writer Shreya. Its not an easy thing to write something this mature. And how do you manage to write from mobile?

I am now a big fan of yours. Well done. Keep it up

Thanks so much Harini. I have no idea what my readers think and when I think they find it boring they dont :P
About Abhay- I think its safe to say he will miss her and vice versa.
This SS is mature even though it looks deceptively simple... Its not and Abhay and Piya are not 17 or 18 year olds here so they should be complex and that's why they are complicated.

Originally posted by: ..Jenny..

awesome update.so pia is hiding her feelings for abhay?hope abhay realizes it asap.i loved pia-anisha bonding.i am worried for anisha as her reaction on pia's leaving was something about to worry.

but at last mentioning pia's dress as handkerchief by abhay!!!🤣

Yeah she is hiding it :/
Poor Anisha, eh? Nice to see you noticed her :) U wont be worrying aft the next chapter
Oh yeah, Abhay's reaction :P

Originally posted by: koli97

srry for late rply ...I read every update & its awsomeee.continue asap

Thanx a lot Koli