Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Ok ok I believe u all right? 😛 U r an old soul trapped in a young body 😆 I simply love the way Abhay n Pia care for each other 😳 Pia made an attempt to help Anisha just for Abhay's sake n maybe she could see her former self in her. I loved the way she did Abhay's BBB in front of Anisha 😆 Anisha could also realise that they r meant to be but not them? 😡 Arrey these two r way more stubborn than either u or me 😆 n I guess for once u will agree with me 😛 Pia could not even bear the thought of something happening to Abhay n doesn this tell that idiot what she feels for him? 😡 Haaye my Abhay is such a buddhu raam Pia has to leave n this moron doesn even want to make an attempt to stop her? 😡 Ugh! I hate Abhay 😛 The end was superb 😆 Pia was expecting Abhay to ogle at her but instead he taunted her 🤣 Shreya plz update the next part soonish OK? N will u turn this into an FF? 😃 I will be more than happy if u do 😳 N BTW this rang biranga update was not boring ok? 😛 Please dont steal my lines 😛 The update was fantastic n I wonder y it was short? 🤔 Kya kare, ye dil maange more 😆

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

hi meri darling😉

well it was brilliant update👏

do gaane to pahle hi bata chuki hun aur baki ke main bhul gayi socha to tha but yad nai aa raha😭

baad me yad aya to likh dungi...

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

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fabulous update shreya!!!👏
nice way of projecting human mind..their insecurities..worries..wonderful! 👏

i liked the way you described the whole thing. The way pia noticed hm..tried to ease hs pain and helped him..was the most wonderful part..😊
pia had clearly feelings for hm..n she too knws it bt she isnt ready to let abhay knw. Why, that is mre complicating..
She askd abhay to bring anisha becz she couldnot see hm in pain bt later she got attachd to alisha nt just becz she knws girlz or she has 1 in her family like pia mentiond bt mre so becz in sum way she could relate to her. She is lonely the way alisha is, yes alisha's pain is mre severe..
I also loved the way you describd the entire thng. How pia helpd her..encouragd her n becme hr friend..all was really very well written..👍🏼
so pia will be leaving! She is nt happy becz she dsnt want to leave abhay,bt anyways everyone has acceptd the news,n to my amazement abhay 2! Bt then hw cn i forget he is a psychiatrist..maybe thts why he managed to behave indifferently unlike other stories..bt is that all..? has he really handled or will b able to deal wth it tht easily?!! I wonder.. bt nly time will tell..

I dnt knw whats in store for us bt i have a bad feeling abt alisha. Becz when every1 acceptd she was the nly 1 to nt react either in a good way or in a bad and thts a v.bad sign! I just hope nthng happns to her.
And ya 1mre thng, alisha is officially introducd in ths chapter yet your remarkable portrayal of her in just 1/2updats is truly commendable!!

The portion were pia was worried for abhay ,and he thot she was worried for alisha bt pia didnt bother to mention was again a very tactful piece of writing..the manner in whch u are presenting bth of them is so different bt interesting..it makes their character mre appealing!

I dnt knw why arent u happy wth it..to me it was quite a meaningful update! And boring..whats that? Ur updats are never so..!

And the last part-
wow abhay didnt like her dress! Pia is angry bt she shud be happy becz he cmplimentd her in the mst unusual way! It shows atleast he has a gud taste..😆

SO next is the party..am waiting for it bt mre than tht am waiting for sumthng crucial...hope the chap dsnt turn out to be a heartbreaker..

Plz update soon!!!

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

superb update
like abhiya convo
anisha is very cute
continu soon

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maria

@Maria-capri

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

awesome shreya i loved it 😳

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

How can you say that this chapter is boring Shreya. It was really touchingIt brought tears to my eyes reading about Anisha. Wish Piya takes her with her.

I am sure Abhay would miss Piya once she leaves and same would be the case with Piya too.

You are a very good writer Shreya. Its not an easy thing to write something this mature. And how do you manage to write from mobile?

I am now a big fan of yours. Well done. Keep it up

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...Rishab...

@...Rishab...

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

awesome update.so pia is hiding her feelings for abhay?hope abhay realizes it asap.i loved pia-anisha bonding.i am worried for anisha as her reaction on pia's leaving was something about to worry. but at last mentioning pia's dress as handkerchief by abhay!!!🤣

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

srry for late rply ...I read every update & its awsomeee.continue asap

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

I donno why you would be dissapointed with the chapter 😕 It was very nice as usual. The growing feelings of Abhay and Pia are more visible here and most importantly, the beauty of this SS is it looks simple but actually abhiya relationship is very complicated here.

main problem is they are afraid to admit their feelings even to themselves. and I donno im afraid for Anisha. why I have a feeling something bad will happen?

last part was awesome.. abhay's reaction towards pia's dress 😆