Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

tanzie how can you say it was not good...that was a beautiful update a heart touching one ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ pia's state was described so well how she is feeling without abhay...it was really a beautiful update...waiting to see others reaction when they will come to know that pia has been kidnapped😆😉

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Lovely update tanzie abhiya united yipee cont soon

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Divya6696

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Tanz..!!!! this is BRILLIANCE AT ITS BEST..!!!!!
what an update..!!
Yippie..!!! Abhay got to Piya.. his destiny.. his destination..!!
Oh so Chand is out of town.. I wonder what will happen when he's back..!
and btw.. Abhiya are no more at the hospital na..?

Uff.. update soon..! I simply love this FF yaar..!!

Edited by Divya6696 - 12 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

chapter updated page 31 🤗

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Diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

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oh my god!!!!!!! its remarkable updt tanzie

poor misha it ws shockin 4 her her bst frnd hide d truth 4m her dat she is here & d biggest RAAZ of her lyf hs been exposed in 4nt of her lik dat i nvr xpected .. i love her confidence the way in she took abhiya side was commendable... she cn easily distinguish between fake & true luv dat scene really touched my hrt

mR. Dobriya😡 hw dare he????? dnt wnt 2 comment abt him😡

im happy finally he (james) hs been hlpin him (abhay)

d way piya touched his face & tryin 2 feel him ws adorable & touchy moment i felt i m actually seeing dat moment , he took her in his lap & tried to soothe her...wow!!!!! 4 dat scene only u deserve a hug 🤗a big hug

lst bt nt d least finally dey met after crossin all d hurdles of lyf

thx 4 pm ...updt soon

Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Beautiful nd emotional update.Finally Abhiya r together...yipee.The scene where pia puts abhay's hand on her tummy to make him feel the baby...its so beautiful nd cute...awww

Edited by Monami_50 - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Tanzie!! I am literally jumping up and down after this. Like seriously! He came he came he came!! Wheee!!!
Sorry got carried away.

Now:
I wanted to smack the Dogriyal. How dare he call her that... I'm glad she threw it at him. If Abhay had been there he would have probably thrown him instead :P
I hope she doesn't recognize him! Oh gosh.
And and... I like the little match that went on in the hospital. You wrote it so beautifully!
Next chapter: are they gonna get married??? Or is it a red herring :s

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megha sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

simply outstanding tanzie.

each and every person apart from abhay and pia's view reflected their true emotions so well.misha's confusion, james comparing himself with abhay and pia and feeling ashamed of himself...it was indeed very well written.

finally abhay and pia are together and i can't even say how beautiful it was ...the way u wrote was fab.abhay feeling the pain on seeing pia's terrible condition and tryin to talk to her , wake her up.

pia actually thought she died and was meeting abhay in heaven..the way she asked abhay to keep kissing her just only to believe that he was indeed there and not her imagination was my most fav part in the entire update.the way u wrote it it was too emotional.abhay and pia's love is so deep that it surprised everyone and i do think that may be chand might let go of abhay.

this is for u👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

thanks for pm

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Awesome update. I loved it tanzie.Sorry 4 late reply but maine tera update pehle hi padh liya tha😆

Oh I love the way u showed Abhiya's yearning,their longing & desperation 2 b wid each other. OH Piya sleeping in Abhay's lap all time & Abhay feelinh hwe warmth after ages was well show. I hope ab koi inke beech adanga na daale😳. Will police recognize Abhay as assassin ? Oh I hope not.Plz cont...

Love u🤗

Edited by SheDevil - 12 years ago