My version of PKYEK FF & a Request-Chap2 updated

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

alina not just easily backaway from abhiya like fool and fight 4 her rite... show her stronger side but dont make her evil. i dont found her charcter worth in show, also i wish pia must take strict action against dis deed of abhay and not easily forgive him and give up to his seductive act afterall she has some personality, some thing in her... she must make him feel dat dis act of may cause him to lose his love and dan powers are not worth for anything

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

@ Trishna, You know what, I was thinking in similar lines of taking the track in this way. That Abhay would succeed to get the potion and become a hybrid, but in this process he would be unable to help Piya and would almost end up losing her. But I want to make it interesting to everyone's wish (Not that I can please every one, but those who wanted to see an interesting twist).

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Awesome work!!!! Ur plot is more interesting than cv's one. I think alina's character was nice but not judged properly there. It was good ki she helped them but a betrayl for a woman is not easy to digest. I want everything to be fair here. Plz continue it and accept my buddy request.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Hi Sniggs, I am no writer. It is just what I wished we got in PKYEK. Thats why I have this request to all you beautiful writers to take it up forward. Please Sniggs, atleast help me to take it forward after update the next two chapters.

By the way when are you updating my favourite FF?

You know i am such a lousy updater I cant take it forward Harry but PM me ur idea for next chappy I'll defo try to help

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Nice start👏..do pm me

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

o god when are u going to update... plz update

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Short of ideas Trishna :-( Plus no one is helping me with ideas

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

o sweety i am quite egaer 4 dis track... but sad no help from others k if u dont i can try to help u as omg but its my first experions wid story writing... in college i write article for college tabuloid but never thought of writing story but 4 sake of dis interesting track on my fav couple i thougt to help u to some point.. its jst if u r interested snd me ur e id then i send u outline of story within week n after dat i snd my idea for each update n 4 location n othr thng we discuss together

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

but harri u have to work on d selection of phrases and words and ya we little time in dat and hope in mean time someone help us hope so gud luck

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Trishna, Thanks for your help. I really appreciate that. I will PM you my ideas and if you could help me how to take this forward that would be great.